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"Max. Please were a dress! Please, please? For me!" Nudge gave me the bambi eyes.
"You would look just perfect! Not that you don't already look perfect but please?" Ell joined in.
"Ella, Nudge.." I whined
"Please!" they both said a once.
"Fine!" I breathed. I know I said no dresses but the way they looked at me, I.. I couldn't say no.
"YAY!" they screamed. Ella ran to her room and brought back my dress. I put it on and looked in the mirror. Wow.
The dress ended 2 inches above the knee, It was royal blue dress that was form fitting and strapless, it had a tan sparkly belt. And honestly I am not the girly girl type but this dress was beautiful. Ella straightened my hair and pulled my bangs back with a tan bow.
"Max, can I bleach die dye the ends of your hair this weekend?" Ella asked using those dang bambi eyes.
"sure." I smiled.
Nudge came in with Ella's make out bag and I sat there and took the torture. She put mascara and eyeliner on me after she put dark brown eye shadow on. Then lip gloss that tasted like marshmallows and vanilla. Yum. Next she sprayed me down with perfume and handed me tan colored heals with white bows on the toe part. . She finish with bow studded earrings and the band symbols witch this time was a long chained necklace. We have 2 symbols a feather and a music note, we all where something like that. Normally I just where my leather bracelet that says troublemaker on it with our symbols.
"I love it." I hugged them both.
_ON STAGE_
"Hey everyone!" the crowd screamed at Dylan
"What? I can't hear you!" the screamed again.
"Please welcome the band! The troublemakers!" Dylan winked at me and we all walked on stage.
Fang walked up to the microphone stand. "Are you guys pumped?" the crowd cheered.
I stayed backstage with Dylan.
("Locked Out Of Heaven" by Bruno Mars)
One, two, one, two, three
Oh yeah yeah
Oh yeah yeah yeah
Ooh!
Oh yeah yeah
Oh yeah yeah yeah
Ooh!
Never had much faith in love or miracles
Never wanna put my heart on the line.
But swimming in your world is something spiritual
I'm born again every time you spend the night
Cause your sex takes me to paradise
Yeah your sex takes me to paradise
And it shows, yeah, yeah, yeah
Cause you make feel like, I've been locked out of heaven
For too long, for too long
Yeah you make feel like, I've been locked out of heaven
For too long, for too long
Oh yeah yeah yeah
Ooh!
Oh yeah yeah
Oh yeah yeah yeah
Ooh!
You bring me to my knees
You make me testify
He went up and ran across the edge of stage toughing the girls fingers.
You can make a sinner change his ways
Open up your gates cause I can't wait to see the light
And right there is where I wanna stay
Cause your sex takes me to paradise
Yeah your sex takes me to paradise
And it shows, yeah, yeah, yeah
Cause you make feel like, I've been locked out of heaven
For too long, for too long
Yeah you make feel like, I've been locked out of heaven
For too long, for too long
Oh oh oh oh, yeah, yeah, yeah
Can I just stay here
Spend the rest of my days here
Oh oh oh oh, yeah, yeah, yeah
Can't I just stay here
Spend the rest of my days here
Cause you make feel like, I've been locked out of heaven
For too long, for too long
Fang looked over and winked at me. I giggled.
Yeah you make feel like, I've been locked out of heaven
For too long, for too long
Oh yeah yeah yeah
Ooh!
Oh yeah yeah
Oh yeah yeah yeah
Ooh!
"Ok now are you guys ready for Max?" they cheered and I grabbed Fangs guitar and walked out on stage.
I handed Fang his guitar and he leaned in and kissed my cheek and whispered good luck. My stomach flipped. Damn him and his good looks!
"Okay so I wrote a new song, you guys wanna hear it?' they screamed
The music started playing.
Puttin' my defences up Never put my love out on the line When I don't care But you make me wanna act like a girl
'Cause I don't wanna fall in love
If I ever did that
I think I'd have a heart attack
Never said yes to the right guy
Never had trouble getting what I want
But when it comes to you, I'm never good enough
I can play 'em like a Ken doll
Won't wash my hair
Then make 'em bounce like a basketball
Paint my nails and wear high heels
Yes, you make me so nervous
And I just can't hold your hand
I winked a Fang. And rolled my eyes.
You make me glow, but I cover up Puttin' my defences up Never break a sweat for the other guys It's just not fair But you make me wanna act like a girl You make me glow, but I cover up Puttin' my defences up The feelings are lost in my lungs You make me glow, but I cover up Puttin' my defences up
Won't let it show, so I'm
'Cause I don't wanna fall in love
If I ever did that
I think I'd have a heart attack [x3]
When you come around, I get paralyzed
And every time I try to be myself
It comes out wrong like a cry for help
Pain's more trouble than love is worth
I gasp for air
It feels so good, but you know it hurts
Paint my nails and wear perfume
For you. Make me so nervous
And I just can't hold your hand
Won't let it show, so I'm
'Cause I don't wanna fall in love
If I ever did that
I think I'd have a heart attack [x3]
They're burning, I'd rather be numb
And there's no one else to blame
So scared I take off in a run
I'm flying too close to the sun
And I burst into flames
Won't let it show, so I'm
'Cause I don't wanna fall in love
If I ever did that
I think I'd have a heart attack [x5]
_A FEW SONGS LATER_
"Okay guys we are going to take a break and party a bit then we will be back on!"
"What was that all about?" fang asked
"Did you like it?"
"Do you have to ask?" he half smiled at me. I laughed.
"Soo.. uh I was.."
"Yeah?"
"will you go on a date with me ?"
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