I'm upd8ing! Yay! Isn't it exciting? Ok. Sorry I haven't upd8d in a while, I've been having writers block n I'm not out of skool yet. Ok responding 2 reviews:
Lady Lucid: U've been my 1st actual flamer. I mean I've gotten other flamers but uve been the only 1 hu's actually insulted my writing. U shuld feel proud of urself.
ObsidianAngel6: Lol. Good 2 no u like it. I think ur gonna love this chappie.
EvertoAngelus: god I almost rote demondea. Lol. Ok of all the French words there r u learned merde. MERDE? LOL. Yea I think u need 2 lay off the sugar…
MiniSparky: good question. I think I have an answer. HE'S SO FUCKING HOTT! HE'S SO HOTT I GAVE HIM 2 T'S! NOT 1 BUT 2! I think that should answer ur question.
On with the poetry!
I watch her,
On the couch,
Through the open window.
She's crying,
Soft tears,
Making their way,
Down her cheek bone.
I back away,
I can't bear the sight.
This is my fault,
Why did I do it?
I knew what I was doing,
Was wrong.
But nothing held me back,
Not even the desire,
For one more kiss.
I lie here,
In this bed,
Of depression,
Sinking away into loneliness.
I have another date with Lauren,
How can I tell her no?
I promised,
I'd be there.
What should I do?
So... Lauren... what do ya think?