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Shining star sat crouched in a dark alley, she didn't know what to. I love Kid… But if I was to go with him I would lose Black Star… But if I chose Black Star I would lose Kid. She began to cry. Why can't they just get along? She asked herself.
Meanwhile Liz and Tsubaki went looking for Star. They looked in every alley, building, and shop to see if she was in there until at last they found her crying in an dark alley.
"Star!" Tsubaki exclaimed running towards Shining Star. Star looked over to see Tsubaki and Liz standing there.
"Why would you just run off like that you really had us worried." Liz told her. Star sniffled.
"I-I'm s-sorry you g-guys." She said wiping her eyes. Tsubaki sat across from her.
"Star why did you run away crying like that?" She asked softly. Star suddenly jumped into Tsubaki's chest.
"I-I'm sorry, I-I just didn't know h-how to handle it." She cried. Tsubaki began to hush her.
"Shhhhhhhhh it's okay Star, everything's gonna be alright." Tsubaki assured her calmingly. Star sniffled.
"STAR!" Kid shouted. He ran into the alley and sat next to Tsubaki. "Star… I'm sorry…" He told Star. Star sniffled and looked up.
"Kid…"
"SHINING STAR! IT'S OKAY! BLACK STAR'S HERE NOW!" Black Star into the alley to and pushed Kid out of the way. He grabbed Star by the shoulders and began to shake her. "STAR! BIG BRO BLACK STAR IS HERE! DO YOU REMEMBER ME! I'M YOUR AWESOME BIG BROTHER WHO YOU USED TO PLAY WITH!" Black Star shouted. Shining Star's eyes were now circles and she was sweat dropping as well.
"Black Star I'm okay… Honestly." She replied. Black Star put his hands on his sides and sighed in relief.
"That's good." He said. Kid lay in the alley in an awkward position from the force of Black Star's hit.
"Black Star you idiot." Kid moaned. Shining Star stood up and looked around, then saw Kid laying on the concrete.
"GAHHHH! Kid, are you okay?" She ran over to him and sat down next to him.
"Yes Star I'm fine." He sat up. Running footsteps were heard.
"HEY STAR!" They rest of the people showed up.
"Star are you okay?" Maka asked breathlessly.
"Yeah, you shouldn't run away crying like that you worried us." Soul added. Star giggled.
"I'm okay, just got a little confused that's all." She giggled. Maka smiled. It's only the first day we've known her but it feels like we've been connected for years. There's something about Shining Star that makes you feel so attached to her. Maka thought, then looked at Black Star, Kid, and Star talking and laughing. Soul looked at Maka and smiled, there was something about Maka that made his heart pound, and it wasn't her Maka chop. She was so honest and caring, it made Soul feel so fluttery around her. Maka put her hand out to Star.
"You coming Star?" Maka asked kindly. Star smiled and nodded, taking Maka's hand. With Maka's assistance she got to her feet. Star then helped Kid up to his feet, who stumbled and accidently fell on Star, who could fortunately hold him, so now they looked like they were hugging. Star and Kid both blushed, which made the others laugh.
"Hey, Why don't we get back to playing some basketball." Soul suggested. Everyone nodded and headed back for the court. The group came up with a new deal. If Black Star's team lost Black Star would have to watch Kid and his Sister kiss, and if Kid lost they would re-arrange his room so it would be a-symmetrical. Black Star's team contained of Tsubaki, Koga, and Ido. Kid's team contained of Patty, Soul, and Star who was taking Maka's position as rookie. By a surprising miracle Star wasn't actually that bad. She made two shots and could dribble the ball really well. The only part she didn't want to do was play defense. It made her really uncomfortable so Kid stuck her down at the other end of the ball so somebody could just throw it down there and she could shoot. In the end, Kid's team won by a two points, which meant that Black Star had to watch his sister and Kid kiss. Black Star cried anime style as Koga and Soul held him back.
"Star, are you sure comfortable with this?" Kid asked.
Meanwhile in Shinigami's room.
"THAT LITTLE SLUT BETTER NOT THINK OFF TOUCHING LIPS WITH MY ADORABLE SON!" He screamed as he watched Kid and Star in his mirror. Just then Spirit came in.
"Hey Shinigami what seams to be the matter?" Spirit asked. Shinigami turned to him, his white mask looking very pissed off.
"I'LL TELL YOU WHAT'S WRONG SPIRIT! MY SON IS ABOUT TO LOSE HIS INNOCENCE!" Shinigami shouted at him. Spirit almost had a nose bleed and ran over to the mirror. He thought Kid and Star were going to do it.
"Wait a minute… Shinigami, their just kissing. What's the big deal?" Spirit questioned.
"Imagine Maka kissing Soul." Shinigami pointed out. Spirit thought for a moment then was on the floor crying.
"MAKA!" He bawled.
Back at the Basketball court:
"Yes Kid, I'll be fine I promise." Star giggled. They two young teenagers both blushed before slowly pulling their heads closer together and for a brief moment touched lips. When they stopped kissing and Soul and Koga let Black Star go he ran away bawling anime style.
"WAAAAAAAAAAAA I FAIL AS A BIG BROTHER!" He cried. Star went running after him.
"Wait Big Brother!" She called out to him and continued to run until she reached him.
So, The great Black Star has failed… PLZ review.