UPDATE and Apology
Dang it…
School got tough before winter break and I've still got assignments and projects due (about ten or twelve) so I won't be updating this story any time soon. But I've got plans and ideas to improve this series such as re working the episode system. Instead of one chapter=one episode it will now be two or three chapters= one episodes. On the bright side I've also had time to plan a series for next time I can't post any updates for USS Juniper such as when I`m stuck with a writer block of some sort.
As for the story and characters itself, I seriously need to go back and rewrite the first and third chapters with some touch ups on the second. Weiss's lines need to be adjusted to more fit her personality and attitude, (I know-strange coming from a Boy) and so de the rest of the crew they could use some more expression and less robotic responses. I should also add a few more scenes with Pyrrha and Jaune…but I AM NOT MAKING THEM A COUPLE...*cough-cough* I just don't like the on-sided relationship I've seen people seem to like. So Pyrrha has a crush on Jaune and Jaune seems to admire her, doesn't mean they are meant to be. As for who I ship instead… to quote the great Michael J. Caboose*burst outs laughing at the keyboard* "I am sneaking, I am sneaking, I am sneaking" or rather no-comment.
And as for anyone dying… spoilers *smirks evilly*.
the next chapter should be posted by Feb. 20th or around that time. I've got a few Exams coming up, so I won't be able to upload in between now and then. So, stay tuned and here's to hoping you had a happy Holidays.