Chapter Four, Chapter Four~ This is now chapter four, of Draw a Circle~ And I got more positive reviews as well, so that makes me more happy. I hope you all will enjoy this chapter like the others.
Disclaimers: I do not own Hetalia, for it belongs to the awesomeness that is of Hidekazu Himaruya. The only things I own are my oc characters, and the story plot.
Summery: Luciana Montgomery is just an average fan of Hetalia. She enjoys the series, not to mention making references involving the characters. One day, while scrolling the internet, she noticed a strange e-mail saying about having Hetalia Units. Thinking that it was one her friends playing a joke on her, she accepted. Though, things are about to change for this girl when she will start to receive packages with certain people inside it. God help her.
Rated T for Teens: Reasons for this rating is due to: Some foul language, a little sexual content, awkward moment, yaoi hinted moments, some violence, and France being France, not to mention Prussia tries to make things awesome
Chapter Four: Kolkolkolkol~... Ah Bloody Hell.
Luciana was trying to slightly recover from Italy's death hug, as the said country was sitting on the kitchen table, eating his pasta, as America was eating some as well, though Luciana had cooked a bit of ground beef, and told him there were pieces of burger in it. Luciana on the other hand was bust trying to do her homework.
The small girl had noticed the two seemed to be getting along in some way, as America and Italy were speaking to each other, about Italian food and sports cars. She continued to work on her homework. She was very focused on it, that she did not notice Italy was looking at her direction, and was peaking at her work.
"Ve~ what are you working on, Luciana?" Italy asked, quite curiously. The girl blinked twice, as she looked up from her school work.
"Mostly my English homework, it's mostly to place periods, commas, and semicolons." Luciana said, as she was finishing up the last sentence, as Italy was just smiling the whole time, and America was muttering about how his people were smart, when the front door was open.
"Luci, I'm home!" Her mother shouted, as she walked into the kitchen, grinning the whole time, as America was laughing, getting the little pun. Italy looked at me confused the whole time.
"Old American show" Luciana explained, as Italy nodded, seemingly to understand. Then Luciana's mother went over and began to cuddle the said girl the whole time, smiling.
"How has my little girl been in school?" Her mother asked.
"I'm doing good mom. Oh, meet Italy, but you can call him Feliciano"
"Hm? Oh, hi there. My name is Laura, Luciana's mother" her mother chirped, introducing herself to Italy. The Italian stared at her mother for a moment, then smiled
"Luciana! Your mom is pretty, ve~" Italy exclaimed, in a happy tone, as Luciana saw her mother smile the whole time.
"Aw, you're so sweet. So Alfred, did you find a job?" her mother asked, as she looked over at America.
"Yep! A salesman, I go door to door selling things. I got over fifty sales on my first day" America said, grinning the whole time. Luciana saw her mother blinked twice with confusion, wondering how America could have even accomplished that.
Soon, Eric and their father had returned around seven, only to see Italy was cooking, as Luciana was helping out. The small girl looked over and smiled brightly.
"Hi guys! Italy is making pasta!" Luciana chirped, as Eric could only stare for a moment, then he looked over at Italy.
"... It better be some damn good pasta" her brother muttered. Truth be told, Eric was a pasta fan. Luciana couldn't help but grin the whole time. After dinner Luciana watched as her mother was talking to her aunt on the phone.
"Yes, that's right. Yes, he is certified. Alright, thanks sis" with that, Luciana's mother had hung up the phone, as she looked over at Italy "Well. You're working with my sister, Alison, in her day-care"
"Yay! I got a job, Ve~ usually, the other girls I was with would make me be a stripper" Italy said, as there was an awkward silence in the room, before Eric fell off his chair, laughing his head off, along with America. Luciana looked over at her parents, as she saw her dad's eye twitch, as her mother just stared. All the while, Italy continued to saw Ve~ innocently, as Luciana could only stare, laughing nervously.
Soon, Italy, Luciana was in America's room, as they watched Eric and America playing against each other on the X-box 360. Mostly it was Soul Calibur Five. Luciana watched as America had kicked her brother's butt at the game over nine times. Italy was just in his little world.
"Damn it! How the hell are you kicking my ass?" Eric demanded, while he glared at America the whole time who was grinning.
"It's because I'm the hero, and heroes always win!" America shouted, as he did a pose. Luciana couldn't help but giggle seeing Eric's deadpanned face the whole time. Italy just went Ve~
"Luci! Luci! Do you know when Germany would be here?" Italy asked, as he looked over at the small girl. Luciana thought for a moment, as she knew that Italy and Germany were close, as well as Japan. She also wondered if she were going to get Romano any time soon. Though, even she had no clue how the whole unit thing worked. They would just send a unit by random.
"I'm not sure, Italy, but I know we'll have him really soon, maybe Japan too" Luciana chirped, while giving the Italian a gentle smile.
"Cool, it would be fun to have Japan around" America said, joining in the conversation. Eric just muttered things to himself about 'annoying units' and whatnot. Luciana was just smiling the whole time, as Italy seemed to be excited, and was talking to America about how he was going to make pasta for everyone.
Two Days Later…
Luciana had woken up, and sat up, rubbing the sleep out of her eyes, when she heard a faint snoring next to her. She blinked twice, as she glanced over, and nearly jumped out of her skin, when she saw Italy was sleeping next to her the whole time. Luckily though, it seemed that he did not sleep naked, or he would hide from an angry older brother, or parents. She had managed to get out of bed, without waking him up, as she did her usual morning routine, though she had to take her school uniform into the bathroom and change there.
Once she had finished changing into her uniform, the small girl went into her room as she was placing on her butterfly hairclips, and saw Italy was still asleep. She quietly went over, and began to shake him gently.
"Italy. Hey, Italy, you need to get up. You have to work today with my aunt Alison." Luciana said. She watched as Italy made a small noise, and buried himself into her covers. The girl began to shake Italy more "Italy, please wake up! I'll, um, make you pasta when I get home from school!" she exclaimed, knowing that Italy was only working in the morning shift.
It seemed to have done the trick, as Italy quickly sat up, and looked at her with those puppy-dog eyes of his.
"Really?" he asked. Luciana could not help but smile at this, and then nodded her head yes.
"I promise. After all, I'm the hero's side-kick, so I have to keep my promise" Luciana said, as she gave a light grin. Then Italy squealed ve~ and hugged the small girl, as Luciana was smiling and laughing the whole time.
As she had managed to get Italy up, who had ran into his room to get changed into some clothes, the girl headed downstairs, only to see America was there, in his business suit, getting ready for the day. He looked up and gave her a grin.
"Morning, Side-kick!" America shouted, as Luciana returned the grin
"Good Morning, America" Luciana said. Then she got her hair ruffled by Eric, as he was grinning the whole time.
"Don't be flirting with the hero now" Eric teased, only to be hit on the head by their father.
"Eric, don't start giving anyone any ideas" he chided, then he looked over at Luciana and gave her a smile "Morning, Sweetie"
"Morning dad" Luciana chirped, as if nothing had happened, while Eric was muttering things to himself once again. Soon, Luciana had finished a bowl of cereal, and placed the bowl in the dish washer, she was then heading out the hallway.
"I'm going to get me edumication, hasta luego!" Luciana said, getting her Spanish from a certain girl in her little group of happiness.
"It's Education, damn it!" Eric yelled, as she was in the hallway. She turned and spat her tongue out, while pulling her left eye-lid down, before she rushed outside, giggling the whole time, as she heard her brother calling her ungrateful brat, while Italy was telling him not to be mean to her, as America was saying how much Eric reminded him of a angry England.
Soon the girl was running as fast as she could to school, as she was smiling to herself the whole time. It felt strange, that she had America and Italy in her home. She couldn't help but remember all the times Italy wanted pasta, and her mother was cooking something else. Luciana managed to make a deal with him. She'd give him pasta when she got home from school, and he had to eat her mother's cooking. Luckily it was a good deal. Though she did remember Eric saying something about him wanting pasta too, which made her mother yell at him about not liking her cooking, while her brother tried to say he loved it.
Speaking of Eric, she only had a few days with him left, which made Luciana stop in her tracks for a moment. She realized that he was going to leave this Sunday, because his spring break was close to the end. It made Luciana's heart swell as she thought about it. He would be leaving again, and she wouldn't be able to see him until the summer. She can't make poke fun at him with her grammar, or hang out with him like she was doing since he came, even when America and Italy had arrived. She knew that she had four days left. Just four precious days left.
Luciana could only look down for a moment, as tears were threatening to come out, but she quickly shook her head, getting rid of her tears that were filling up in her blue eyes, as she used her hands to rub them away. The small girl knew that she couldn't cry, because she did not want to look like a cry-baby, or some sort of drama queen. Luciana did not want to cause Eric any pain if he saw her like this. He was living his dream, of going to college to become a lawyer, just like their dad. She did not want to be the cause of him giving it all up. Luciana then began to giggle to herself a bit.
She slightly understood why Belarus was always going after Russia now. The blonde haired girl just didn't want to lose her brother. Though, Luciana didn't think about going that far as into stalking Eric and demanding him to marry her. Even she wondered about that. It just seemed so creepy to her, that Belarus wanted to have an incest marriage with her older brother. She shook her head for a moment, and then continued on walking the whole time. Luciana just had to focus on school right now. No time to go emo, or she would have Nora getting too much sweets and shoving them down her throat.
She got to the school, but stopped for a moment, as she saw Kevin with Trevor. The girl walked over to the two, with a smile on her face, though she did not sense the air around her, which there was a lot of tension and hostility.
"Morning!" Luciana chirped, getting the two boys' attention. Kevin looked over at Luciana as he glanced over at Trevor for a moment.
"Morning, Luce, how are you?" Kevin asked.
"I'm good. Um… where are the others?" Luciana asked, as she was trying to spot the others that would usually be waiting for her.
"They're inside. Go on ahead; I was just talking to Trevor about something"
"Um, alright, if you two are sure"
"Of course, we're sure. There is no need to worry, Luciana." Trevor said, putting on a charming smile.
"Um… Okays. Have fun with your guy talk!" Luciana said, before she rushed up the stairs, before she turned and waved at the two, before she went inside the building.
Point of View Change: Kevin
Kevin watched as the small girl, in his group of friends, went inside the school building, before she waved at them, with that smile of hers. A smile that would make his heart feel so warm, and would always make him feel special to receive it, like his other friends in their little group. He then heard chuckling next to him, as he looked over and glared at the one who was laughing. Trevor.
"I gotta say. Luciana is either stupid, or too naïve for her own good, da?" Trevor said, with a smirk on his face, while mocking Kevin's first language as the young Russian glared at the other boy with his hazel eyes.
"Shut up. You have no right to speak about her like that." Kevin growled in anger and disgust of the boy in front of him.
"Hey, I'm only speaking out my opinion. Still, her body does make up for that. I wonder how she'll sound when I do some things to her after the movies" Trevor purred. Before Trevor could react, Kevin shoved the boy against the wall, as he had his arm pressed against his neck, as he glared at him with pure hatred in his eyes, knowing that no one was around at the moment to see this.
"If you do anything to Luciana, I swear to god, I will kill you"
"My, my, such a temper Kevin, I was only kidding. I'm not going to do any of that to her. She's much too young and innocent for my taste" Trevor said, as he calmly pushed the Russian away. Still, Kevin was glaring at him, but decided to not press it further.
"Alright then," He said and was about to walk away, when Trevor had spoken again.
"Still, I can't help but wonder why this isn't bothering you. After all, you seem quite attached to her. She was your first friend, right?" Trevor mocked. Kevin stood there for a moment, before he looked over at Trevor with a cold glare in his eyes.
"She is. I'm just waiting for her to tell me you did something to her, and I will be able to kick your ass" Kevin stated, with a grin on his face, before he continued to head into the school building. The Russian-American was really pissed off at Trevor. Trevor had made his life a living hell when he moved here from Moscow. He made everyone avoid him, calling him a communist and that he was going to blow everything up, or that he was a spy. No one ever wanted to talk to him. Others tried to, but because Trevor was one of the popular kids at their elementary school, no one dared approached him.
It was a bit sad. Even his close friends never got near him at that time either. Though it wasn't their fault really, for they too had to deal with Trevor. Still, he thought that he was going to be all alone. Until one day, a girl who he thought was a second grader when really was in his fourth grade level, sat next to him at the swing, smiling at him the whole time and asked if they could be friends.
It shocked Kevin at the time. Though he agreed, and that girl, who changed his life for the better, was Luciana. Luciana had then gotten Nora into their small group since they were friends for a very long time. It took a while for the red-head to get used to Luciana having another friend, but she came around, as she had grown to like Kevin, while she always ruffled Luciana's hair and called the small girl her 'sis' or something like that.
It was just the three of them at the time, until Joey came along, as he asked if anyone of them wanted to play football, which Luciana jumped at the chance. It was Kevin's first time, along with Nora, playing football, but Joey made it simple, and the next thing they knew, the four of them were laughing the whole time on the playground, while Luciana was trying to get to the goal, with Nora protecting her, as he and Joey would try and get the ball.
Kevin then remembered when Maria joined the group. Trevor was picking on them, as he was calling him a Commie, Joey a chicken, and Nora a ginger. He was then calling Luciana a weirdo, but to their shock, Luciana wasn't even paying attention, instead, they saw her going up to Maria, who everyone knew that the Hispanic girl would easily kill them with her temper, and just sat next to her, asking to trade her cookie for a tamale. To their shock, Maria agreed to the trade. Then Luciana dragged Maria over to them and introduces them to her. He remembered Maria glaring at Trevor, which made him run away, before she smiled at Kevin and the others.
Finally Alex was the last one to join the group. He had moved here from England, and was already made a target for Trevor. Yet, the Britain boy never paid any attention to him. Instead, he went over to Kevin and the others, as Luciana was talking in her fake british accent at the time, where Alex thought she was actually British. Luckily, they were able to be friends, seeing as Luciana had apologized immediately when she thought he offended him. It was quite humorous at the time.
Still, it was Luciana that got all of them together in elementary school. If it weren't for her, Kevin would imagine him being so alone. Yet, he noticed time and time again, Trevor would be trying to take Luciana away from them. It was if he figured out she was the person that held everyone together. Kevin would remember all the time that Trevor would try and pull away the small girl, but she would always go back to them, after she was done playing a game Trevor had picked. Only now that they are older, Kevin hoped that Trevor wouldn't harm Luciana. She was just so… so pure.
It was then he snapped out of his memories, as he saw the others waiting for him, including Luciana, who was waving hi, and smiling so brightly. Once again, it made his heart melt with warmth, as he walked over to his five friends that awaited him.
Point of View Change: Luciana
School had ended for the day, and Luciana was heading out, with her friends the whole time, as they were all talking to each other. She had noticed Kevin being a bit silent, and wondered what had happened.
"Hey, Kevin, you okay?" She asked, while looking at him with worry. Kevin looked over at Luciana and nodded his head yes.
"I'm fine. There was nothing to worry about." He stated, though he still had that look on his face, which troubled her in the first place. Sensing that something was wrong, she gave him a gentle hug, like she would always do whenever one of her friends were sad. She felt Kevin tense for a moment, but he gradually calmed down, and relaxed in her hug. Once she released him from her embrace, she saw him smiling a bit.
"Heh, thank you, Luce" Kevin said, rubbing the back of his head with a little embarrassment.
"No problem" Luciana said smiling the whole time.
"Aww! Group hug everyone!" Nora shouted, as she hugged Luciana and Kevin, as Maria, Joey, and Alex joined in. Luciana began to giggle the whole time, as she was being squished by her friends the whole time. Soon her friends got her home, and they waved bye, as Luciana had gotten on the porch of her home, as she waved bye back. When they were out of her eye sight, Luciana went inside.
As she walked into the hallway, she was suddenly tackled on the floor, and was huggled by Italy
"Yay! Luciana is home, Ve~" Italy shouted with joy, as America walked in and grinned seeing the two.
"Hey, side-kick! how was school?" America asked, as he went over and ruffled Luciana's hair, as the small girl was still on the ground, being huggled by Italy.
"It was great! I don't have any homework today though, so that's a good thing." Luciana said, smiling brightly the whole time.
"Yay! Oh, Luci, Luci! You promised to make me some pasta" Italy excitedly exclaimed.
"I know, but you have to let go of me so I can make the pasta" Luciana said.
"Waa, but you're like a teddy bear!" Yet, Italy had released Luciana, and the girl quickly went into the kitchen and made the pasta. As Italy was eating his pasta, the phone rang and Luciana went over and picked it up.
"Hello… oh Hi mom… yeah, America and Italy are here… Oh, you, dad and Eric are going to come home late… Don't worry, we'll survive… No, I don't have homework today… okay, I'll be a good girl as usual… alright, I love you too, Mom. Bye-Bye" with that, Luciana had hung up the phone.
"Is everyone going to be out late?" Italy asked through his bites. Luciana nodded her head, as she went over and sat at the kitchen table.
"Yeah, my mom is having her shop open late, because there are going to be some people wanting to buy her flowers since they are all on sale. My dad and Eric are going to be late because of a court today, and it will take forever" Luciana explained, as she began to lay her head on the table for a moment. She felt a little sleepy, due to school. As she closed her eyes, the door bell rang, which made her sit up. Luciana got up, and went over to the front door and opened it.
"Special delivery for Luciana Montgomery~" chirped the Delivery man of the Hetalia Unit company. Luciana just blinked twice, as he pushed in two boxes this time.
"Uh, why are there two, Bill?" Luciana asked with confusion in her voice, as she read his name tag, seeing as she forgot to do so from Bill's last two visits.
"Oh. Well, we thought that it would be quicker that way to get all the units. So you might get one in the next delivery or two and possibly even three" Bill explained, as he held out the tablet for Luciana to sign. Once she did, he gave her two manuals, and tipped his hat off to her, before he walked to his truck and drove away. Luciana then closed the door, as America and Italy rushed in.
"Hey, who do we have this time?" America asked. Luciana looked at the manuals and blinked twice.
"England and Russia" Luciana read. There was an awkward silence, before America grinned
"Commie is here, but the bright side, so is Iggy!" America shouted with glee. Luciana couldn't help but smile at America's excitement, but then she glanced over at Italy.
"Just be patient, Italy. I know Germany, Romano, and Japan will arrive soon. I promise" Luciana said.
"Okay, Ve~" Italy said. Luciana just smiled, and then began to read one of the manuals.
"Let's wake up England first. Okay. He can be called Arthur Kirkland, U.K, and United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland… Holy snapples, that's a long one. Um, he also happily responds to brother-" Luciana stopped reading though, when she, Italy, and America heard something that sounded like sobbing. Luciana looked over at them with confusion in her eyes. Then she looked over at another box, which contained Russia.
Luciana blinked twice as she wondered why there was sniffling and whimpering sounds. She walked over and opened the box, only for her blue eyes to meet purple ones.
"You are not Belarus" Russia said, as Luciana blinked twice with slight confusion
"Um, no, I'm Luciana." The girl said. She watched as Russia got out of the box, and looked down at her, seeing as he was taller than she was. They just stared for a moment.
"You are smaller than the other girls we were stuck with, da?"
"Uh... I'm fourteen…"
"Really, I assumed that you were a small child."
"Hey! No insulting my side-kick, you damn commie!" America shouted, as Luciana and Russia looked over at the angry American. She then saw Italy leave fast, and was already getting out a white flag, as Russia had that dark purple aura around her, which made Luciana jump a bit from it's sudden appearance.
"Heh. Hello, Amerika. I didn't expect you to be here. Already tainting your stupidity on this girl's head I see?"
"Shut it, Commie. Luciana is my side-kick!"
"Nyet. Luciana, become one with mother Russia"
"Wait, wha?" Luciana asked, confused of what just happened, before she was pulled by America suddenly, and was in his arms, like a small toy.
"Hey, no corrupting my side-kick!"
"I was not corrupting. Soon, all will become one with mother Russia"
"Yeah right, you damn commie!"
"Capitalist-pig"
"Commie"
"Capitalist-Pig"
"Commie"
"Capitalist-Pig"
"Spongebob!*" Luciana said out of no where, as the two nations looked at Luciana with confusion. The small girl looked back at them. "What, it stopped the arguing"
"…You see what you made my side-kick do! She had to revert using a spongebob line!" America shouted
"Well, if you hadn't made such an idiotic cartoon, which inspired much more idiotic cartoons*, than maybe she would have said something more real" Russia stated
"Screw you!"
"Ve~ You are all scaring me and Luciana!" Italy cried out.
"Uh, calm down?" Luciana said, but was unsure at the same time
"What the bloody hell is going on out there!" a voice shouted from the box, as everyone looked over to where England was supposed to be asleep.
"Uh oh. We woke him up" Italy shrieked, as the box top flew open, as an enraged England came out, and spotted America and Russia
"Of course, it would be you two." England muttered, as he was looking at them with distain.
"Iggy!" America shouted, with glee, as he had dropped Luciana, and rushed over to hug the British man, who seemed much more annoyed.
"Get off me you bloody wanker! And what did I tell you about calling me that horrid name!"
"Aw, you know you like it, Iggy" America continued, as Luciana glanced over at Italy, who was just waving the white flag, and then over to Russia, who still had the creepy purple aura around him, while he was smiling the whole time. It was then England finally spotted Luciana, after he had managed to get America off of him.
"Oh, hello there, forgive me for not seeing you earlier, oh and please forgive my rude behavior. May I ask for your name?" England asked, being a gentleman.
"She's Luciana, and she's my side-kick!" America shouted, while throwing a fist in the air, while Russia and England stared at him, as Luciana blinked twice. Italy had managed to stop waving the white flag, and just said "Ve~"
Luciana knew one thing. This was going to be a very long night.
HOLY SNAPPLES! I has finished this chapter. Sorry about the delay but I once again feared that I have made Russia and England out of character. Anyways, I hoped you enjoyed everything, including seeing Kevin's point of view about Luciana and the others. Hehe.
*Spongebob: There was one episode where Plankton and Mr. Krabbs continued saying each others name and Spongebob just said his name for the fun of it.
*More idiotic cartoons: After Spongebob became a hit, Cartoon Network attempted the same thing, but with Chowder, the Misadventures of Flapjack, to The Problem Solverz. There are times it was funny, while other just make you wonder how Cartoon Network has fallen.
Niji-Chi: I'm so glad you think my story is great. I know there are others out there far greater, but still, thank you. Phew, glad I was able to keep America in character, and lols, so much Russia references XD it inspires the fangirls within my readers! And thanks about Luciana. I know there are some fourteen year olds who still have their innocence, especially when they just turned fourteen recently. I shall keep up with my awesome work!
P.S Notice what I did with Luci's mom when she came home B)
LuvyousomuchPandasandAnime14 : Well, the dad wasn't calm about it, but the Mom knows Luciana would never do anything like this on purpose, and she knows Luciana can be trusted. Plus, Luciana and America did say that the units live normally and can get jobs.
TheNextAlice: Nah, it's just Luciana that gets those moments. I didn't know what length was either until my friend pointed it out. Yes, Italy is good with kids, and Luce knows she would rather have him work there than a stripper XD. Oh, try looking shark repellent on E-Bay or something.
whatamidoinwithmehlife: Lols, he probably did. Yes, love Italy and Luciana! And actually, that was my original idea too, so I placed our lols in the story. XD
Demon Piper: Ah, thank you very much. Well, I just made Russia and England appear, so tada XD and I shall keep up the good work =3
Quiet Harmony-chan: Thanks, I wanted to make Luciana a bit more different than from the other main heroines of the other fanfics =3 and yes, things will get interesting, but I'm sure Eric, America or Maria would get it through to France to not do anything to Luciana. Or he won't live to see the next day. Her parents will also make certain of that too.
PrincessOfTheGardens: Thank you so much. I was trying to make things realistic as best as possible. I'm glad you like it!