Key
A/N authors note
[Author's note mid paragraph]
'Thought'
"Speaking to other character"
{Sound}
Speaking to reader
Telepathy
"Roar"(translation)
scene change
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Time skip
≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪*flashback
*≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫flash-forward/premonition
≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫**≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪≪return to present
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Point of view change
A/N this story is about 20 or so years after the conclusion of Inheritance
A/N the whole story will be in first person even when pov changes.
A/N If you have not read my story "To the Shire" or The Inheritance Cycle (Eragon, Eldest, Brisingr, Inheritance) by Christopher Paolini (a great read whether you read this story or not) this story will make no sense what so ever.
A/N I may use my stories to spread Christianity so more people might be saved and I will include biblical references so if this offends you I pity you because you will be cast into the lake of fire when judgment day comes.
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***************Eragon*****************
"SHRUIKAN! MAN THE BALISTAE‼‼" Roran commanded "Turns out the castle falling on him did not kill him." He informed me
"Does that mean?" Arya asked leaving the rest up to inference
"No Galbatorix is still dead" Roran replied
"We can take care of this easily but first I have a lot of good news." I informed him "First, Brom and his Saphira are alive. Also, the Eldunari and there riders are reborn."
"That's a lot of dragons." Was all Roran could say
Release the magic and come out of the pocket. I told Glaedr
Then with a loud bang somewhere between tenscore and fifteen score, dragons as well as fivescore riders appeared out of seemingly nowhere. All at peak health.
"AHHH. It feels good to move around, it was so cramped in there." Said one of the 'younger' dragons
"To move around at all is a relief." Said one of the ancient dragons
"So are you still the leader of the riders?" Roran asked
I turned to Vrael, the previous leader of the riders "Am I?" I asked him simply
"I believe you have earned that right. If it were not for you none of us would even be alive." He replied
"Okay, now that that is taken care of, let's go take care of Shruiken." I ordered
"He fled the second we appeared." Brom said
"I suppose I would run too if we're him." I said
"Daddy! ?" a child about the same age I was that fateful day when I found Saphira in the Spine
"I believe some introductions are in order." Roran said "Eragon, Saphira, this is my daughter, Joy. Joy, this is my cousin, Eragon Shadeslayer and his dragon and partner, Saphira Brightscales or Bjartskukar in the ancient language."
"What is the ancient language?" Joy asked Roran
"YOU HAVEN'T TAUGHT HER ABUT THE ANCIENT LANGUAGE‼‼" I screamed at Roran enraged "It appears that a long history lesson is in order."
"Little one, you need to calm down. The language is not known among our people." Saphira pointed out
"Did she just speak out loud in English?"Roran and Katrina asked
"Long story." I said
I went over everything that had transpired since we had parted ways.
A/N I will only be giving highlights of this part due to the fact of it being 20 years.
(A year after leaving Alagaësia)
We need to land Eragon! Saphira informed me
Just a little farther! I see a town on that bluff. I argued
The rain and wind are starting to fffffft my wing and I can barely flap! We need to land. NOW!
Then take some of my strength I offered
A long pause and Saphira stopped fffffffft
SAPHIRA! SAPHIRA! I yelled panicked
I started to chant a spell to stop us but it was too late.
BRACE FOR IMPACT‼‼ I mentally yelled. Then we crashed.
(10 years AA {after Alagaësia})
"Letta‼!" and they all stopped
"What kind of being are you? For surely you are not human. You have the speed of an elf, the endurance of a hobbit, the www woo a man, the wisdom of a dwarf, the strength of an ork, the nobility of a king, the humbleness of a peasant, the mercy and forgivingness of the one true god Father son and holy ghost, and the weaknesses of none of them. I would say demon but you are merciful and slow to anger. A demon would show no mercy what so ever and would be a hot-head."
"I am Eragon, dragon rider and Shadeslayer."
*≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫≫ 10 days before present
"CHARGE!" I yelled to the rest of the battalion as the skeletons and other undead charged us
"CHARGE!" The stads and servants repeated
"Archers, FIRE!" I commanded
{TWANG!} The archers loosed their arrows toward the mass of enemies
They're like hydras, if you cut anything off a soldier grows from each pie… a soldier informed being cut off by the void of death
Eragon! Behind us! We need to get away! The rest of the riders are dead! We will be of more use if we bring Alagaësian reinforcements! Saphira announced
I went on to explain about Bjarskul, the original Eragon, and the revivals. "So that's what's been up with us. How has Ismira been?" I asked
Just then an egg fell out of Saphira's saddle bag and Joy picked it up "Um, Eragon. This egg must have had a soft shell or something because it has a crack in it" Roran said
"I am sorry. I broke it; it cracked when I touched it."Joy admitted
My eyes went wide "Dragons seem to like hatching for our family." I said
"JOY IS GOING TO BE A RIDER!" Roran exclaimed
"Looks like it. Those shells are almost impossible to break. You need to use magic to break them." I informed him
"It's out! It's out!" Joy shouted as a snowy white dragoness emerged from the shell
"This is quite odd. There has never been a white dragon in history."
"It will hurt at first, I passed out because it surprised me, but you have to pet it Joy." I instructed
"Why will it hurt?" Joy inquired
"Because it is putting this on your palm," I said showing her my gedwëy ignasia"and altering you very being." I replied
"Okay. If I have to." Joy replied
"Hold on. How will touching this thing alter my daughter's soul?" Katrina asked
"Just like ours have been altered." All the riders and dragons said in perfect unison "their two souls will become one, she shall gain the use of magic, she will be able to speak and become a dragon, the changing we will teach much later, she will have an extended lifespan, forever if nothing happens to her or her dragon. finally she will start to gain the complexion and strengths of an elf."
"That is a ton of huge changes" Roran commented
"Yes it is and that's part of being a rider." I confirmed
As Joy reached toward her, the pure white dragoness stretched her neck toward the girl's hand. And then, contact.
"AAHHH‼!" Joy cried out just before she fainted
"JOY! JOY! What's happening to her?" Roran demanded
"Apparently it was not the surprise that made me lose consciousness when I was marked" I realized
-A few hours later-
"Why has she not woken up yet?" Roran yelled for the one million five hundred and thirty third time" Yes I did count.
"This is completely normal. She will be unconscious till morning at the earliest. Her mind and body underwent the result of millennia of evolution in a matter of minutes." Oromis explained
"It is good to see you in good health, master." I greeted him forgetting my Elvin manners since I had not used them in 20 years
'I will excuse your lack of manners since we are in your community. You will have to teach me your rules of etiquette. You have obeyed our rules to the best of your ability when among us, so I believe we should do the same.' Oromis commented
"W-w-what happened?" A Joy said waking up
"This is quite abnormal. Usually it takes at least a day for the new rider to wake up."Vrael commented
"It only took Brom a few hours to wake up after marking also." Brom's Saphira pointed out
"Same for Eragon." Saphira agreed
"Your family never ceases to amaze me Stronghammer." familiar voice announced
"My liege, "I said it is good to see you are well. Time has been good to you. However, I do have one question. HOW DID YOU FIND OUT AND GET HERE SO FAST?
"I found out two ways. One, it helps that I have a spell caster in each town. Two, hundreds of dragons are somewhat hard to miss even from leagues away. As for transport, the dwarves along with the elves built a tunnel system connecting all the cities of Spes and none of the tunnels intersect so it is impossible to get lost." Nassuada explained
"Who is this lady and why did she call Daddy 'Stronghammer'?" Joy inquired
"Joy this is Queen Nassuada, Queen of Spes." Katrina introduced
"And Stronghammer is the title I marched under while I was in the Varden" Roran explained
"It looks like there will be a lot of new additions to my corps of magicians." Nassuada commented
"I truly am sorry to say this but I cannot allow myself or any other member of my corps to join for the riders must be independent from all other powers. During wartime, and due to our low numbers, allegiances were necessary; but now it must be enforced. For that very reason, my fealty to you must end." I asserted
"As you wish Eragon. I understand that the riders must be independent of all the powers of Spes."
"Aye and that raises the question of loyalty to the ingetum and the dwarven nation as a whole." A certain dwarf king pointed out
"Orik, it is good to see you: your majesty" I greeted him
"How many times do I have to tell you, DO NOT BE FORMAL WITH ME? We are equals and brothers. With family and friends, you speak informally." Orik complained
"Ah but to a king you speak formally." I countered
"You are mine brother first, mine friend second, and mine subject last. Therefore, you will speak informally" Orik responded
"It is time for bed for all of us; we have church in the morning. It would be much appreciated if you would attend the service and/or be baptized. Whether or not you decide to be baptized I ask you to attend with an open mind, heart, and soul." Roran requested
A/N I will include a Lutheran service and I ask of you the same Roran asked of the riders; that you read it with an open mind, heart, and soul, willing to accept new ideas that you may be saved and given the gift of eternal life in Christ.