Thank you to everyone for the reviews on chapter three. Also to everyone who contributes comments thank you. Once again let me know what you think but please be respectful. If you see a spelling or grammar mistake send me a private message and I'll correct it. (Simple.) This story is from the perspective of Emma's and Hook's inner thoughts as well as dialogue. (Pretty self explanatory.)
(Town square early morning.)
That arrogant pig headed evil scum of the earth low life cockroach. I AM GOING TO KILLHIM. I'm going to gut him like a fish then I'm going to take his hook and ram it down his throat and pray he chokes on it. How did he even get into my apartment anyway? I feel so violated, I can just imagine the look on his face while he rummaged through my belongings. Well you can rest assure Hook that's the closest to my lingerie you're ever going to get. What the hell did he even do with my other cloths anyway? I'll give the pirate half a point the clock-towers never looked better, he even colour coordinated my garments to look like tinsel. No, no, no, no, no compliments for that Psychotic pirate no matter how impressive the feet. The question of the day is how the hell did he get them up there and how am I going to get them down? It's not like I can magic them down and I'm defiantly not asking David or Mary Margaret for help. God, I can imagine that conversation going over well. David, Mary Margaret would you mind helping me Hook stole my lingerie and has hung them up all over the clock-tower? Looks like I'm going up the tower myself to deconstruct this colourful mess.
(15 Minutes later top of the clock-tower.)
I bet the cocky pirates watching me from a roof top somewhere. I hate him with a passion that burns like fire. I'm almost done two more rows to take down then this nightmare will be over and with any stroke of luck nobody will have seen me. I AM GOING TO KILL HIM. "Miss Swan?" Oh, god! It's Gold staring at me from the bottom of the tower. "Miss Swan what on earth are you doing?" I'm frozen like a deer in headlights then his eyes move from my face to my hand then back at me. Oh, god! I'm still holding a string of bras in my hand. "Never mind Miss Swan I'm pretty sure I never want to know." He leaves without another word. I AM GOING TO KILL HOOK. My decisions been made, I'm going after Hooks ship and when I through with it it's going to look like it belongs at a 60's disco. I'm sure the ships sails would look great tie dyed.
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Much Love Brogan