Thank you all for the wonderful reviews and support for this story! I feel accomplished that my first writing for this fandom is turning out so well. And to give back, here is a write back to all the people who had nice words to speak;
Chapter 1-
Marshmallow123~I completely agree. Carlos always seemed overshadowed or downright ignored in the movie, unless he had a scene with another villain such as Jay.
Asuka1920~I promise I will try to keep this story going until the very end! Hope you enjoy what I post!
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Chapter 2-
Lucy Dragneel4life~I actually find Jay/Carlos an interesting ship as well, and I might write about them next. As for the sequel, I'm hoping they just don't do a hit and miss, which most second movies usually bite the dust.
TheRealTaylor13~Well here you go, Chapter 3 and 4! Tell me what you think when you've finished!
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Bookworm563~I'll try, as long as you continue to review! Hope you like, and virtual world chocolate!
Chapter 3-
Marshmallow123 (Hey again!)~Evil brothers, I like the sound of that! And as I said before, I did believe Cruella was just a regular villain, and not really truly evil! But hey, I'm gonna make her into one here! Cookie! :D
AwesomeWriter2013~Why thank you so much! And I love Carlos too, that's why I chose him for my first story!
readingpower~That was my favorite part for writing as well!
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Jay erupted into another fit of mocking laughter, globs of spit flying from his mouth and hitting their target; Carlos' cheek. The boy flicked away the fluids, unamused.
"Jay." Mal warned, eyes darkening. The man's voice died as fast as it had come, but Jay still hid a twitch of a smile under. "Alright," he began, ready to do anything to get an answer. Carlos flinched as the son of Jafar's knuckles cracked as he pushed them.
"Stop, Jay. You know you can't intimidate well." Mal remarked. Carlos' eyes widened. "That wasn't well?" he asked.
"Nah," Jay brushed, placing his hands back to his sides. "my father said the power will come in a couple of years.
Mal scoffed, internally slapping herself repeatedly. "Now one cares about your life story, Jay." She remarked. Carlos sighed in relief. "But I still need answer from you, Carlos." The boy shuddered.
"Whyyy?" He stretched the word, his gaze pleading for them not to go on. But of course, villains never follow any orders. Mal stopped before the son of a Cruella, arms crossed.
"Why can't we head over to your mother's?"
Carlos retailed by crossing his own arms, huffing. "Because I'm not going." He said confidently.
Mal snapped, and her hand became enveloped with an acid green flame. Carlos sweat dropped. "N-No." He murmured, voice low.
Evie placed a gentle hand on Mal's shoulder, careful not to awaken her inner daemons. "Try another way." She suggested lightly.
The daughter of Maleficent tapped her chin in thought. "Fine," the magic she once had controlled vanished. "Then you'll have to tell us exactly what goes on in your mother's home." She traced her finger offer the gash along his forehead. "Scars don't come from nowhere." She sang.
"I..." Carlos began, but stopped as his throat closed, filling his esophagus with liquids. Images flashed before his eyes, and he quivered, mouth refusing to speak.
"Disgraceful!"
His eyes shrank to prinpricks, and Carlos found himself muttering under his breath. Evie shrank back, surprised. "Geez, calm down. We don't have to go."
Mal's eye twitched. "Ev!" She snapped, ready to hit her friend for her foolish actions. She pinched her brow, forcing down her frustration. "Alright." She agreed, not bothering to conceal her frown. "Let's just go watch what little television we have."
"And coming up along the sidelines is Numbers #16. And wow, perfect goal! Another good victory for Auradon Prep!"
Jay cocked his eyebrow at the virtually tiny screen. "Guys, why are we watching these heroes?" He questioned.
"It's the only thing on." Mal restored, but even her own body language suggested she despised when she had clicked onto. "Remember? No cable." She clonked her head twice.
Carlos' eyes sparkled as his vision trailed after the running figures. "Wow!" He tugged on Mal's sleeve, the fir grumbling in response. "How did you get a device like that?"
"My mother stole one before she was banished, to keep her company." Mal spoke, her tone prideful.
"And coming across then field is Dude, Auradon's official mascot! What an adorable animal to have!"
Jay groaned, leaning back along the armchairs. "That thing makes me want to stick it down a sewer pipe."
Evie nodded. "Exactly."
Carlos, however, gave a squeak of fear and buried himself into Evie's arm. "Aw," she cooed, caressing her fingers across his rugged hair. "What's making you so scared?"
"The dog." He said, voice muffled. "It's a beast of Tartarus. And it's gonna kill me when it has the chance!" He cried out, terrifed.
"Yeah." Jay sarcastically agreed. "Thing's going to bite my head off before I can defend myself." He growled as Carlos whimpered. "What the heck, man? Aren't you supposed to be then on of Cruella De Vil?"
Carlos raised his head. "Yeah, so?"
"Cruella chased and wanted to kill defenseless puppies for fun, then take their fur and make fur coats." Mal joined. "Why would you want to be terrified of the ones she loved if you want to follow in her footsteps?"
She shook her head disapprovingly as Carlos' mind whirled with memories once more.
"If I could, I'd take and sell you for even a single pup!"
Sorry for the short wait. I had a lot on my hands today, and only now did I have the time to sit down and write.
Kind of upsetting, really.
Anway, for anyone who wants a challenging question, riddle me this;
What was the use of the guard at The Museum of Cultural History? Think about it. Auradon is a place where no villains live, since they had been banished. Only good people, who wouldn't dare steal. Maybe they had just put him in there because the King and Queen knew about the four's coming, and took precautions?
Then again, if they took it there, why wouldn't they at least get a guard for the Ceremony to keep an eye on them?
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Bye~Star