Naive: Thanks to all those who reviewed! It's great!
Sanzo: You are probably so happy you could die…
Naïve: Jerk…Also I'm happy that someone is anticipating the first climax of the story the meeting of our favorite guys….but sadly I'm going to have to disappoint you.
Gojyo: You don't have to worry no one expected anything from you.
Naïve: ….
Goku: I expect things from Naïve!
Naïve: I love you so much Goku! (A single tear of joy)
Goku: If she doesn't do well then there's no reviews and if there are no reviews I get no meat buns!
Naïve: …. (A single tear of sadness)
Lirin: That's right we need our meat buns! So do well or else Naïve!
Naïve: You are such a***holes! But your sarcastic and mean selves are so funny and I love you for it. Anyway as I was saying this chapter will be how the mystery person's day went before he meets Goku. also on that note I got a question for you who is the mystery person and please tell me who you thought it was and why in a review that way I can now if I did foreshadowing and other such things right!
Sanzo: why bother we know the answer.
Goku: she did it right. (Sanzo stares at him and unsurprisingly hits him over the head with the fan.)
Hakkai: Before anymore violence is committed, Naïve does not own any of the characters of Saiyuki and any other references to things you know she does not own obviously she lays no claim to them.
This morning started out unlike any other. For one thing I awoke earlier than normal. And for another I was actually in a good mood for once when I woke up.
So I wonder which realm of the 6 paths of hell1 froze over…it was probably niraya2 those poor souls. Wait why am I caring for someone else…it's a pain in my ass. These were the thoughts running through my mind as I stared up at the ceiling.
As I was saying I couldn't get rid of the feeling that something good was going to happen. And I never have these feelings. It's about as likely as me showing my true emotions of like towards someone.
But the good thing was that I didn't even seem to notice the usual whispers in the back of my mind that called to me to come. Even though now that I think back they had been louder than usual since yesterday and they were much louder today.
Finally decided I had broaden enough for the morning I got up and got dressed. I pulled on a black long sleeve shirt on, even though it was the end of summer. I also pulled on a pair of baggy brown pair of pants with many pockets on it. They were leisure clothes, best for doing things not to dirty but good enough to do some chores and still take a nap in.
I then smelled something good and released I was up in time to go to breakfast so I then headed for the dining room.
When I had arrived I was a bit surprised to see that my dad had made western style breakfast. I looked at the food and raised an eyebrow, at that moment my father walked in.
"Oh, you're up already…wow that's a surprise, lucky I made enough for both of us. My intuition is as good as ever." He stated this all calmly and in his quiet voice.
Then he actually looked at me. He paused then smiled, with that usual comforting smile, and then he said, "You appear to be in a good mood today."
This jib at me didn't really make me falter in my good mood because I was quite enjoying the feel of it at the moment. So to try to at least prove him wrong I harrumphed, glared at him then taking my seat at the low table began eating my food.
My father sat down as well and continued watching me. He then proceeds to allow a slight smile on his face as he shakes his head. Even though I wasn't a mind reader I could easily tell what he was thinking. He was thinking fondly of youth and how we always must be defiant or some such crap like that.
So we sat through the rest of the meal in silence. Then after the meal my father indicated that he wanted me to go help his disciple clean some in the shrine.
The disciple is kind of weird but I must grudgingly emit that he's a good guy and pretty okay to. He does a good job at what he does and even does most of the work so there is usually not much for me to do. But I went to check anyway.
The time was around 8 am at about the time I found the guy.
"Ohi!" he greeted as he draped his arm around my shoulders. "How you doing eh?"
I rolled my eyes at him and then pulled his arm off of me. "I was doing much better before you touched me."
"Oh, so cold. I think I might freeze if you don't warm me up." He claimed as he reached out again to try to hug me. But he was stopped by a fist to his face. I then swept his feet out from under him.
"Dad sent me to help you, but if you are joking like this…I guess you don't need it." I started to walk away. He released what I said and then he stopped rubbing his nose.
"Okay I'm quite sorry and I could use the help." While he had started talking I had walked back over. He reached out his hand to get a lift up and I unemotional stood there with a blank stare like I was a blind person.
He was feeling acquired, I could tell. But after a few minutes of no assistants he got up on his own. "Man you're so cold you could pass as an ice women." He stated this and looked to me for a reaction. I in turn just raised my eyebrow. He sighed.
"Okay so over here is what I need help with…" As he continued he began to walk and I followed. All I knew was that at least I would have something to do.
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At around 12:30 I was done helping and lazing on the walkway in the sun. My dad and the disciple had left about 20 minutes ago so I would have to deal with lunch on my own.
So after thinking for a while I started to walk towards my favorite diner. It was a quaint little place and the food was good and cheap also.
As I walked I looked around the town. I saw by the Arcade a vaguely familiar person. I didn't know his name but I knew his reputation.
He had long red hair and red eyes. He wore a blue tank top with a bling belt, and a pair of black pants. He was with a group of shady people and some all right looking chicks.
I knew him as the guy everyone liked. He attracted girls like magnets and did lots of them at the same time. Strangely it's told that the girls don't usually mind even the ones that weren't sluts.
I had stopped to observe when the guy I was inspecting looked up and locked eyes with me. He looked at me confused for a sec and then it pasted.
Gojyo's Pov
I had been hanging with my group when I felt a stare on me. Thinking it was another shy girl who wouldn't approach me on her own, So much better than those Mary Sues who practical threw themselves at me, I looked up.
I locked eyes with a guy. He was quite eye catching himselves and probably has the pick of the litter. But there was something different about him. I had never met the guy but weirdly it felt like I had. I felt a shiver of recognition pass through me.
I turned back to my friends letting it pass. I probably would never see the guy again. I thought this while not knowing that me and many others fates were tied to him and another person, who I would meet in the near future.
Mystery person's Pov
I continued on my walk to the diner. Where I had a pretty good meal. They made the best food. I then thought what I would do next.
Then after a little thought I released that I had not been to the park in a while. So I looked up at the clock and saw it was 2 o'clock. So I got up and then I started to head towards Wind Rose Park.
I was walking down the street minding my own business. That's when a factor appeared that changed my mind about the park.
I heard shouting and then a woof. I was then unceremoniously barreled into by something white, large, and heavy. The wind was knocked clean out of me and I went flying face first onto the pavement.
The thing that ran into me stopped for a minute a few feet from me. So I then saw that it was a huge dog. It walked up to me licked me on the face.
That's when the shouting got louder. The dog hearing it then raced off. I wiped saliva from my face and muttered, "God damn stopped dog."
I was about to pick myself up when I heard the noise of running feet. "Out of the way!" I heard shouted and since I was still lying on my belly I flatted even more.
I did not see it but I felt it as I heard the whoosh over my head. The person had jumped over me. As the person ran after the dog I saw a short figure with an orange pony tail.
I completely forgot my good mood entirely. I was pissed as I picked myself up and dusted myself off. This is when I noticed the people around giving me amused looks. I glared at all of them and sent them scurrying on their way to do whatever.
About to begin walking towards the park again I released something. The dog and kid were heading towards the park. So if I went there I might be annoyed to death.
So I decided to stay clear of the place. Unknown to me I had unintentually put off the meeting that was destined for today. I had ruined my chances of meeting this person.
I began heading home but not before hearing some news. A group of middle age women were talking in front of a store and I needed to tie my shoe lace.
"Did you hear about Mr. Saruniks?"
"No I did not, what happened to him?" said a red head.
"Apparently his ex wife died. She was taking care of his youngest son. Well the poor dear ended up living with relatives in the states for 5 years before he was told. Well when he heard he got custody of the poor dear and brought him back to Japan to live with him." Said a stereo typical Japanese woman.
"Oh well I hope the dear will be happy and nice after all I don't want any child raised by Americans to be a bad influence on my dear…" I walked out of hearing of them. I didn't know that this piece of information would help me later on.
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I had made my way back to my house. Looking out over the whole of the shrine I just stood there for a few moments. Not really noticing anything just thinking.
Then I made up my mind. I knew exactly where I was going. I headed straight to the back of the shrine and found the path. It did not matter what path I took.
I followed it upward ignoring the statues, which I was use to, and the side paths. I knew from experience that the paths behind the shrine were like a maze and it was better to keep to a signal path to get to where you wanted to go. Or at least most of the time, some days it was a bad idea.
The area behind the shrine wasn't even that big, not even as big as Wind Rose Park. This reason was because it belonged to the shrine and being in the middle of the city it couldn't take up to much cause this part of the shrine was usually not public. The reason for this was because it was magical.
It was too big to be in just the area it was suppose to be in. For one thing I had explored and played here so much by its outer boundaries I should know every nook and cavity of it but this was not true.
I constantly got lost and ended up at new places I had never been or that I did not want to go to. So in a nut shell the boundaries of the land behind the shrine did not fit how huge it was so it must be magical. It must be a place of wonder.
By my age I didn't give a hoot about those things. All I knew was that hardly anybody went here besides me so I usually had it to myself. And I wallowed in my solitude.
So as I thought these things I went deeper and deeper into this place. I continued walking not paying attention cause I would go where the path led me.
I then came out in a clearing with an ancient shrine building in it. I had never been here before.
So deciding it was as good a place as any I walked behind the shrine at down and brought out my cigarettes.
While I smoke something began to nag at my mind. It took a while but I finally noticed it.
The whispers in the back of mind were getting louder and sounding more urgent. I paid attention and tried like when I sometimes tried to understand them.
But as soon as I paid attention they got quieter. But I did her something it went like this, "My….n...me…is…So…n….G…ku…" What could it mean? Is it my name is soana gaku? Or is it my name is son goku? These were my thoughts.
Whatever the person's name is I wanted them to stop calling it was an annoyance. I had always thought this and it was clear now it was coming from someone.
Well now you're caught up with me. My day was kind of weird and not general I could say.
I stared up at the sky and not paying attention I burned myself on my cigarette. Cursing I threw the cigarette down and rubbed it with my foot. Then taking a water bottle out of my bag I let the water flow over the burn.
Then I was thoroughly disgusted with myself. Looking at the sky I decided that I would go take a nap inside the shrine. After all there was still plenty of day light out. I didn't know what this would bring for me and at the time I wouldn't probably of care.
I did release getting up in the morning earlier than usual can cause you to need naps.
1-also known as the desire realms look it up on Wikipedia an example would be mukuro's eye power from hit man reborn he gets a power from each of these realms there's the god, jealous god, human, hungry ghost, animal, nirvana domains.
2-niraya is basically standing for hell in the desire realms.
Naïve: So I revised this chapter. You got to know some other characters. Which you won't learn most names until we are back to goku cause I want to introduce them through their meetings with Goku. Also originally I wasn't going to have Gojyo in but I had to cause I was willed to do it by good.
Hakkai: Wasn't it because Gojyo cornered you then bribed you to put him in.
Naïve: I have no clue what you're talking about. (She quickly hides a bunch of pictures of Goku and Sanzo in compromising positions and the three giant Hershey bars.)
Sanzo: I thought you were revealing the mystery person this chapter.
Naïve: decided to hold off to next chapter where it will be mystery person's point of view to a certain point and then well switch to Goku's point of view and reveal the person.
Lirin: Yeah I was in here again!
Sanzo: Pip down and have a meat bun.
Naïve: We are up to 4 reviews and lots of hits! You guys must like this story a lot! Any way I want to know what you think, so review, any good ideas of what to come, so review, what characters u think I will have, so review, any tad bits of side character couples, so review, and anything else review. I love you all so much.
Sanzo: we don't love you.
