Well two more reviews is a start.
But you others could be a lot more supportive!
Since these three were so nice heres your spot in the pre story mayhem!
Roxy: WOOO...ehhh...what...
Chuck: what?
Roxy: -stares at name-
Chuck: Ahh ohh -sweat drop-
Roxas: Thats much better
Chuck: So Roxas is gonna write the thank yous!
Roxas: I am?
Chuck: YES YOU ARE NOW GO!
Roxas: okay okay!
Chuck: -smiles sweetly-
Roxas: Jyo-Chan, my server name is about poetry and rhyme scheme!
Roxas: Strike To Incinerate, Thank you for checking it out! Zex on making coffee at a poetry and book store is just to fab.
Roxas: Lamatikah, Chuck wants to thank you so much,he agrees with you 100 that no no one really reads it!
Roxas:blue-amythist, HE CANT WAIT TO READ IT
Roxas:Onemoreparadise, Oh my, HE MAKES ME DO SUCH THINGS!
Chuck: Now that thats over, Lemme say its 9PM here now, I submitted Chapter 3 today. I aim to have this down by midnight! I guess my muse is happy today or somethan! And I have Jennifer Lopez's Lets Get loud on repeat --
WOO REVIEWS THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!
PS; Sora's just gonna get a huge surprise this chappy, ENJOY!
Sora: Whaaa
Chuck: SHUSH!
Sora: -baby face- ohtayy
Chuck: AWEEEE
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Roxas begins to walk down the mall corridor towards the food court area. He passes by shops and stalls, here and there noticing people from school and from around town. He walks past one of the music stores and noticing that Sora and Riku are listening to something. Knowing Sora, Roxas walks over to the two. Both have head phones on and are giggling and smiling uncontrollably. Wait, Roxas thinks as he's walking up, When did Riku laugh? When did he smile? Somethings up. As he came up two them both he notices that they have their pinkies intertwined. OH! Thats it then, well don't wanna scare them, let me go to the other side of the row. Roxas does just as he thinks and sneaks around to the other side.
"Heya guys!" Roxas says as he pops his head out.
Both jump back and blush profusely. "Oh hey Roxas." Sora says timidly.
Riku just stands there looking as normal as possible.
"Sora it's almost four, we gotta start to head back." Roxas calmly walks back around over towards them, he decides he'll ask Sora over lunch.
"Oh is that all come on Riku."
He nods and follows the two brothers to the food court.
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After a good five to ten minute walk they arrive at the food court, their parents nowhere in sight.
Riku and Sora stay behind him as Roxas looks around for their parents.
"Just must be running late, not our fault, lets get some food guys, where are you going, I'm getting from the sub place."
Sora responds much more calmly. "Well we're gonna get some burgers!"
Roxas nods and winks suggestively, "Well you two just stick together and meet me in front of that tree thing." Roxas says as he points at the tree.
A blush creeps over both of their faces and they move away quickly.
Roxas smiles to himself and walks over to the sub shop.
"May I help you today?" The women behind the counter asks.
"Yes, may I have one grilled veggie and cheese sub?"
"Of course sir, by the way, my name is Larxene, It's company policy to introduce ourself so don't feel to special." The older girl says coldly.
"Oh, okay then?"
Roxas watches as she quickly dices and slices all the veggies in a matter of seconds. "Wow that was amazing!" Roxas has never seen someone with so much skill with knifes before.
The women says to him, "You can cut more than vegetables with a knife kid, so cool it."
Roxas couldn't tell if she was messing around or being serious, but after what she just did he wasn't going to take any chances. "Okay, I'll just wait for my sub now." He says sheepishly.
She puts everything together and plops it into the griller and taps her fingertips impatiently.
Roxas sighs to himself and hears his stomach rumble. He is still holding the bags from the two stores and notices Riku and Sora walking over with their food. Sora waves at him and Roxas nods back.
"Still waiting Roxas?"
Roxas nods still slightly scared from the women making his sub.
DING
The griller makes a noise signaling that the cooking is done. She angrily takes it off and wraps it up. Larxene sets it on the counter by the register after pouring a drink for Roxas, they only serve green tee anyway. She adds up the total.
"That will be 30 munny."
Roxas takes out the munny and places it on the counter grabbing the food and walking off to the table where his brother and Riku decided to sit.
"Enjoying your food guys?"
Sora nods shoving fries into his mouth.
"Very good." Riku says slowly.
"This sub is very yummy too."
The three boys eat talking about gossip and such for about five minute. Eventually Roxas just gets sick of waiting and just decides to ask.
"So Sora, how long?"
Sora drops the French fry that was about to be engulfed by him."Wha- What?"
"How long have the two of you been dating?" Roxas asks very bluntly.
Riku is blushing a bright shade of red by now as well as Sora.
"What ever do you mean Roxas?" Sora says.
"Sora thats the same thing you every time you get defensive, save the half hour and just tell me." Roxas is smiling hugely and the other two boys can tell that he's getting a kick out of it.
Sora sighs finally giving in. "Well, I got all dressed up for him, and we spent the day together, we went to go see a movie, and well he ended up putting his around me, at first I thought he was, well not realizing who was in the seat next to him, and he just zoned out of something." by now Sora is blushing so much that his neck has begun to blush as well.
Roxas nods and smiles, thinking about the new happy couple. "Continue."
Riku being much to embarrassed to talk about the subject sits and listens while munching on a fry.
"Well I looked up at him and asked him what he was doing, he didn't respond, so I asked again." Sora takes a deep breath fondly remembering the event. "So he responded, by kissing me, and you know, I really liked it so I kissed him back."
Roxas nods finding the whole story very cute, but notes that he's going have to have a private talk with Riku.
"Roxas?" Sora asks.
"Yes?"
"How did you know?"
"Oh I saw you two with the pinkies at the music store."
Riku looks up and gives Sora a look, as if to say 'I told you it was a bad idea.'
Roxas looks back over towards his brother and smiles. "Don't worry, your little brother will keep the secret safe."
They all agreed on no one will tell and that Sora owes Roxas big time, because he decided, because after all it is Sora, the most generous person alive. Then Sora gets up.
"I'll take care of the trays guys." he walks away towards the bin.
Roxas looks over towards Riku. "Riku?"
"Yea?"
"You know I'm Sora's brother, and just because I'm younger doesn't mean I'm not going to protect him. I've known you since the day you and him became friends but just please don't hurt him."
Riku just nods his head and perks it up when he sees that Sora is walking back with his mother and father in hand.
Their mother yawns and says, "What a day, you boys ready to get home? Riku do you need a ride home?"
Riku shakes no, "Thank you but my father is picking me up."
She smiles, "Oh well then, thats okay dear, come now boys were gonna head on home."
Roxas picks up his bags and follows the rest of his family out to the parked car.
"Well my little Roxas is quite the shopper isn't he?" Their mother says jokingly.
Roxas blushes as he sits in the back seat waiting for them to get home, eagerly awaiting the call from Axel.
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The car pulls into the driveway, and it comes to a stop. The family steps out of the car and walks up to the door.
"Everyone get everything from the car?" Their mother asks.
All three men nod and she clicks a button to lock the doors.
With bags in his hand Roxas waits until his mother unlocks the door and bolts up into his room.
"Where the fire?" His father asks. "I've never seen him in a such a rush."
His mother chuckles, "What about that one year during the easter egg hunt, when he didn't really understand what was going on."
His father laughs and Sora's ears perk up.
"I must have been to little, I don't recall," Sora says intrigued.
"Well he thought he was spoused to steal the other kids eggs, and he took a little girls egg, she started to chase him around, which again he thought was part of the game."
Both Sora and his father started to laugh uncontrollably at the youngest member at the house.
Back in his room, Roxas places his cellphone on his bed still waiting for the call, after all the other stops they made it was about 8:30.
Why am I so wanting this call?
Maybe I just, yea thats it, wanna talk about more poetry
He seemed really into it, so I just wanna learn more and more about him,
whats so wrong about that?
As he closes that thought and sits down at his desk, his cell phone buzzes, startling Roxas to almost falling out of his chair.
He rushes over to the phone and picks it up, out of breath.
"He---, Hello?!"
"Whoa buddy, are you okay?" Axel was outside taking a smoke break outside where all his friends hang out.
"Oh, I'm okay, the phone just startled me is all."
"Sorry about that, so what happened after I left?"
"Oh saw my brother, hold hands with his best friend."
"Wow, she must be a pretty lucky girl to get your brother." He seemed to of said your, very suggestively.
"You mean he must be a pretty lucky guy." Roxas says chuckling.\
"Ahh, I get ya." Axel winks to himself and smirks.
After about an hour of them talking Axel brings up an interesting topic.
"Anyways, I'm going to that poetry bash thing tomorrow night, do you wanna come see me do a poem?"
"What a coincidence, I'm reading a poem tomorrow night there too, looks like we get to see what each has to offer." Roxas giggles.
"Yea, I bet your a very good writer Roxas"
Next thing Roxas hears is voices coming from Axel's side.
"Hey little guy, I gotta go for now, but call me around six tomorrow morning!"
"But Axel I ha--," Is all Roxas gets out before he hangs up.
"Well, I do have school tomorrow so, it's about ten now, so I mine as well head to bed."
Roxas slips off his shirt and pants, ending up only in his undies and decides its warm enough of a night to sleep like this.
Roxas slowly drifts off to sleep and the dream begins;
Your gonna help me right?
Who are you, I wanna help, but I need to know who you are first.
But Roxas, You've always known who I am.
How do you know who I am, that doesn't make any sense.
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So what did you guys think, NO UPDATE TOMMOROW, gonna be gone all day, so I got chapter four done for you guys! ENJOY!