Keep Calm and Carry On

by CJMusic

What if instead of Amara bringing Mary back to life she bought back another familiar face from the brothers past? How will this newly resurrected friend adjust to being back after so long and how will the brothers adjust to his/her presence. Is this the lucky break the brothers needed or is their world about to be turned upside down once again.

4. Need Some Help

Hi,

Ok so this is not a new chapter but since I'm currently working on the second chapter I've decided actually map it out like I've done with another story, that way I'll never forget where the story was going and it'll be easier to pick up.

First of all this story will only sort of follow the first two episodes of season 12. I didn't like episode 2 torture techniques (the whole Toni and Sam in bed thing), therefore in order to complete chapter 2 I need a bit of help. I'm not good at writing torture scenes (I don't like hurting people and call me a goodie two shoes but the worst thing I've even done was slapping my younger brother in the face many moons ago after getting sick of him being a smart mouth to me after telling him to stop. In fact once in primary school a saw some kid bully him and he started crying which made me cry, I took to tickling him as I knew that would make him laugh and all was forgotten.) Sorry about that unrelevant little story, but due to the type of person I am I can't come up with really bad torture ideas. Due to this I really need some ideas of what Toni and co can do to Sam, any ideas are welcome.

Second to map this story out properly I thought I'd ask to see if there are any characters you'd like to see back, I already have a few planed. If you'd like to see back how would you like them to appear, bare in mind they can't all come back permanently.

I just need some ideas to give this story some more depth to it and I tend to come up with stuff half way through when it makes no sense to include. I'd hoped to get the next chapter out by first the week of June but it depends on how many torture ideas are received, so far I have 3 but that is nowhere enough. Sam is tough so I need possible ideas that can slowly start to break him, things that can eventually make him want to give up (hope I'm not giving to much away for where this chapter is going).

Also please don't forget to review on the chapters themselves, good or bad (just please nothing to do with spelling, grammar,etc as I know there are properly some of those sort of mistakes) as reviews are my muse and they help me determine how I can make my stories better (as well as motivate me to update more often).

Thanks

CJ