Hey, I'm back!! I was waiting to update until they (btw, who the hell is they? I hate having to always say they and not know who they is!!) fixed the email thing because I wanted you to get the emails to read it like as soon as you could so you reviewed sooner. Well anyway, here I am with chapter 4...also, how long would you like this story to go?? if any of you read my other stories, you know my writing style, and as far as this story goes, how long do you want it? I'm holding a poll(s). I'm into them now, I don't know why. It'll pass in about a month. But anyway...

How Long?

a couple more chapters

very long... ... ... ...

finished now. (if you say this one, you will be severely injured in the days to come. lol that was a joke...maybe.)

Who should Appear?

Chris

Rory (L&L's Rory same as C&L's Rory, but just not C's)

Rory (C&L's Rory so against this idea)

Rachel

Jason... ...

Nicole... ...

Please tell me stuff...thank you to all my reviewers...and now I'm getting mad. 5 reviews. seriously people. 5????????? why? what have I done to you? I just reread my last chapter because I forgot about it, and I thought it was good!! I really liked it! but I got 5 reviews, not happy, no I'm not. Did I not say, give me more because I wanted to have a better ratio of chapters???????? horrible. come on guys, Next chapter, 10-14 reviews. To the people who did review, thank you btw.

chelsea- thanks, love to hear it

Jo O'Meara fan- yea reviews are great, on whatever chapter. thanks, I'm gonna be doing a lot of coversations like that.

LukeNLorelai637- Thanks, and don't worry...I will. :)

4everJavaJunkie- aw thank you so much! aw is a great word..I'm calling it a word. If I use it, it's a word.

JavaJunkieLL4Ever- the someone other is like a warning that they'll have to be aware, not a relationship eyes away, just an awareness.

Thank you all, but this chapter might be bad because lack of reviews.

Chapter 4 Everyone! (applause)

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Chapter 4: First Date

previously: (A/N) if you don't remember, L&L kissed and are going out)

"I just...I don't know, I don't want to give you the wrong impression about my Mom." Lorelai said, taking her hand out of his and putting her arm around his waist. He took her hand again, and kissed it shortly.

"Whenever you meet her officially, I'm sure she'll love you." Lorelai lied.

"Really?"

"No. She'll hate you, but if she likes you any, she'll pretend not to hate you. She'll say a few mean comments and then forget all about it." Lorelai said, sighing. "Where are we going anyway?"

"It's a surprise." Luke said, with a smile.

Lorelai pouted.

"I'm not going to tell you."

She flipped her hair.

"Still not telling."

"Fine." Lorelai said, defeated. "I'm sure it will be great." She said, looking up at Luke for confirmation.

"It will be." He said.

"Good."

"Yeah, good."

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"So, I'm guessing this place is in walking distance?" Lorelai asked after a couple minutes of walking.

"Yes, not that much farther now." Luke said, speeding up a little bit.

"Luke! Where are we going?" Lorelai said, looking at him. Luke just smiled and stopped walking. "Luke!" Lorelai turned, and saw where they were. They were at a bridge over a small lake, and a little picnic was set up. "Wow. Luke this is...amazing." Lorelai looked on in awe. "Nothing Chris would've ever done." She muttered under her breath.

"Who?" Luke asked.

"No one, an old boyfriend, treated me badly." Lorelai said quickly, wanting to get back to the date. "But this is amazing Luke. I guess this is how you treat all your girls." Lorelai teased.

"What girls?" Luke asked innocently, leading Lorelai toward the blanket and basket.

"Butch Danes must have some kind of past."

"Not really. Rachel, that's it." Luke said.

"So, not much of a dater?" Lorelai questioned, slowly approaching the topic she wanted to discuss.

"Nope, not really." Luke replied as they sat down.

"Well me neither. Chris was, well a pretty bad boyfriend. He was always getting drunk. That bugged me. A lot." Lorelai said. "So Luke, then this is serious for you? This as in us, I mean." Lorelai asked.

"More than you ever could know." Luke replied right away, his blue eyes staring strongly into Lorelai's. "What about you?"

"Very serious for me." Lorelai said, smiling. She leaned over the picnic basket and kissed Luke. The kiss grew passionate. They broke apart and Lorelai smiled. No kiss she had ever had could compare to Luke's. It was perfect. Every little touch and kiss made Lorelai's heart flutter. This had never happened to her before. She had never been in love before. 'I'm like Sarah Brown,' She thought, smiling to herself.

"What?" Luke said, watching her smile.

"I'm like Sarah Brown." Lorelai said, thinking that Luke probably wouldn't get the reference.

"I guess I'm Sky?" Luke asked.

"Woah, how did you know that?" Lorelai said, her face reddening. She wondered if he got exactly what song she was thinking about.

"Saw that play on broadway, my sister was obsessed with it and we all had to go." Luke said.

"Wow. Who knew, Luke Danes at a broadway play." Lorelai said, her smile getting wider.

"Yeah, well. I've never been in love before either." Luke said. Lorelai stared at him. 'Did he just say-?'

'Did I just say-?' Luke thought.

"I do love you. I think, yea I'm sure." Lorelai said after a minute.

"I love you too. It's amazing how we've known each other two days and we're already in love." Luke said.

"Well, things happen when you least expect them to." Lorelai said, taking a bite of the burger Luke brought her.

"Yup, they do." Luke replied.

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"So Luke, what do you have planned now, after that amazing picnic?"

"It's a-"

"Surprise, yes, yes I know, but it's only 8. So come on, tell me." Lorelai said.

"Just come with me." Luke said, taking her hand and leading her down a familiar road.

"Luke, we're heading to the diner."

"I know. I figured you wanted some coffee before we went to the surprise place." Luke said.

"Well, you figured right." Lorelai said happily and walked hand in hand with Luke toward the diner.

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"So, Luke," Lorelai asked as she walked out of the diner with a coffee in one hand, and her other arm around Luke's waist. "Where are we going?"

Luke shook his head and walked up to a green truck. He opened the passenger door. "Get in." He told Lorelai.

"Such a nice gesture, the whole holding the door open thing, and then you ruin it with a demand." Lorelai said and Luke rolled his eyes, getting in.

"Luke, really, where are we going?" Lorelai asked as they started moving.

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"Are we there?" Lorelai said for the umpteenth time.

"Yes." Luke finally answered.

"Ooh where are we?" Lorelai asked, unbuckling her seatbelt. She waited for Luke to open her door and got out. They were in a park.

"The Park."

"Okay." Lorelai said, smiled, and took Luke's hand. She liked that things with him didn't have to be all fancy. A picnic on a bridge and a walk around the park...'the perfect date.' She thought.

"So, how did you like tonight?" Luke asked after a few moments of comfortable silence when they were both lost in their own thoughts.

"I loved it." Lorelai answered.

"Enough to do it again, say tomorrow night?" Luke asked.

"I'd say yes." Lorelai said smiling. Luke grinned and pulled her in for a kiss. They stopped walking and Luke deepened the kiss. He slid his arm under her jacket and she pulled him closer by putting her arms around his neck. They broke apart, both smiling. "That is one of the things I love the most." Lorelai said. Luke laughed and they continued walking, slower than before, neither wanting to rush the perfect moment they seemed to be having.

They had talked about a bunch of stuff during the picnic, and Lorelai knew more about Luke than he ever thought any woman would. He also knew a lot about her, but he somehow knew that she told a lot of people these kind of things. He told her all his feelings, including ones about his mother's death when he was young. Surprisingly, it felt really good to be telling her this. It wasn't awkward at all. When he was with Rachel and she would ask a simple, small question about his past, he would become nervous and change the subject. But with Lorelai, it just felt right to talk with her, to walk with her, to be with her. It was perfect.

"This is perfect." Lorelai whispered.

"My thoughts exactly." Luke whispered back. "Why are we whispering?" Luke asked after a moment.

"It's more fun this way." Lorelai whispered back, laughing slightly. Luke smiled. "More perfect."

Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry. I didnt update for a really long time. things were really crazy, but ill try to update sooner...if you cant remember what has happened, go back and read the story again...that's what I did. I'm so so sorry.and guys, REVIEW!!!!! come on now. i expect 15 reviews. the minute i get 15 reviews, I will either start writing or post. I PROMISE!!!!

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