The other chapters say it all...I don't own it!! None of the characters are mine. Not even Kalo. So if you turn me into the authorities, I will haunt you in your sleep...
Hey, thanks sooooooo much doctor anthony. You are such a life saver!! You're great!!
The star-strewn sky dazzled above the fire nation capital. A messenger hawk was the only thing that caused shadows, preventing stars from being seen at times. The bird seemed to have it's destination set in stone.
A solitary manor house stood on a hill, over-looking a fire nation town. Down one of the many halls of the manor and take a hard right, you would find yourself face to face with a set of doors that would make you stand and stare in awe for minuets. The doors were hand made, with carved flames licking edges. Go through those doors, and you would see a man sitting in a high- backed chair with green, purple, and blue flames surrounding him.
It was too this man, that the messenger hawk was sent too. And it was too this man, that a letter would be sent, that would change quite a few people's lives.
The hawk rapped on the glass of a window, catching the man's attention. He stood from his throne-like chair and, with flames following him, retrieved the letter then sat back down, watching the hawk soar away.
Tearing himself away from the hawks retreating form, he turned to the letter in his hands. As he red, his hands shook with fury.
Sir Kalo,
Your sister, Mai, has been arrested for treason, and is currently in the Boiling Rock. She had taken down several guards at the Boiling Rock. Not only that, but she was willing to fight Princess Azula, along with a the other girl they were traveling with, TyLee. It appears that TyLee took Princess Azula down before Mai could.
When we questioned Mai, she simply stated that she was protecting the man who ripped away her heart. We have reason to believe that it was the traitor, Zuko that she was referring too. Princess Azula has ordered that Mai and TyLee be put away in the Boiling Rock for the rest of their lives.
We just thought that you would be interested in you sister's fate.
All the Boiling Rock sentries
As he finished the letter that simply stated that his little sister was condemned to a life in misery, the green flames had reached a peak, and began to lick the ceiling. The closed his eyes, then opened them again, regaining his thoughts.
He thought of what he needed to do. Free his sister. Bring down Azuls. And most importantly, make the man who hurt his sister like that sorry. He was going to make Zuko pay for ripping Mai's heart out.
"You better run Zuko. And when I find you, you won't ever hurt Mai again."
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Okay people... it doesn't take much to push the purple-ish button that says "GO". I want feed back. Thanks to doctor anthony (again thank you sooooooooo much) I don't have writer's block. YEAH!! Now, sad news... I have like...5 writing contests to do (Maybe-hopefully- I'll get published again does little happy dance), school (Iick! XP),a science fair project to do, and I'm working on another story for Harry Potter for here, sooooo I won't be able to update as much as I would like too. Hopefully I will be able update on weekends, soooo keep your fingers crossed that I won't have a mental break down, and I'll be able to update soon. Cross them like this...X.
Thank you soooooo much to all my reviewers:
doctor anthony: words still cannot express my gratitude
Sakura kaxe fuku: we'll see where it goes from here. : )
kairiyuna 15: thanks for saying it was cute.
Absolutely Deppraving: thanks for being harsh on me. I'm a writer, and criticism is welcome, even if it ticks me off for 5 minuets : . Grammar always has been my suck-isk part anyway. Don't feel too bad. And yes, I know there's no between Ty and Lee for Ty Lee. It doesn't look right without it though. My personality, just like the part of my hair that covers my left eye.
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