UPDATE: I'm sorry I haven't updated this in almost a month! I've focused on other things for the past few weeks and have also been busy. But I'm currently writing the next chapter, so don't worry or abandon this story yet. I'll have the next part up soon! Just wanted to let all of you know this story wasn't dead.
While I'm writing it, here's a preview of the next chapter:
Dipper was in complete horror, shock, and sorrow as he hovered beside the wide bed containing his beloved but currently hospitalized sister, whom was still yet to be treated. The outcome of her health was uncertain at this time, being that she had just been brought in, and though he hated to be a pessimist, with everything that had just happened, he wasn't looking on the bright side in the least, even more so since he knew this was all because of him.
The few others who were in the room, save for a falsely distraught Bill, who was honestly overjoyed with how things were working out, could not see the real spirit of the patient's brother, as he was still a ghost invisible to the world, trapped in the mindscape. Once the guests left, Bill slowly trailing behind them, he looked up at Dipper with the huge yet wicked grin he seemed to love showing in his new body before finally catching up to the others that had now left.