UPDATE
I got stumped, and I felt like no one was liking ti so I stopped working on this story, but a guest reviewed with some tips I'll put to use. Firstly, i'll rewrite the current chapters and put more depth, change stuff around and other stuff. Please read. Also, guest(s) please make an account so I can directly reply to you. Also, I will be removing Leia dieing in the story, as Carrie Fisher(Leia's Actor) unfortunately did die. May the force be with her.