hey I edited chapter three. Not much is changed, I added a bit of dialogue. You can re-read it, but it doesn't really change the story.
She opened her eyes. . blinding. And immediately closed them
The lights were hurting her head.
"Mari, did you open your eyes." A concerned voice spoke gently, but the voice was like a knife grating against her head. Was she Mari? Her eyes were closed. A gentle hand touched her shoulder.
"Mari, please open your eyes."
She groaned and opened her eyes slowly.
God that light was so bright. She squinted and looked around. L Her eyes focused on beautiful green ones. They were sparkling in the light. shining. As if he'd been crying. He was scared. She wanted to comfort him, the green eyed boy, but she couldn't move her head without worsening the headache.
Questions filled her brain. Questions she couldn't answer. Where was she? Who were the four people surrounding her? What happened? Who was she?
"Nod your head if you can hear me." The tall woman spoke to her.
She slowly nodded her head and winced.
"Okay, do you know where you are?"
"I - I'm on the floor." Her voice sounded funny. It wasn't hers. She wasn't right. "I don't really remember."
"Thats normal for someone who has suffered such massive head injuries." The nurse patted her shoulder reassuringly. "Tell us what you do know."
She had head injuries. "I know that I'm clumsy." This got a small chuckle from the green eyed boy. She paused and tried to focus. "I think I'm 15. I'm not great at math. I like to bake and fashion."
the tall man smiled. "Thats something Marinette."
"Marinette. That's my name?" It was more of a question than a memory.
"Do you know anyone here?"
She gestured towards the tall man and small asian woman. "They must be my parents." She looked around. "And I know that my head hurts."
"Anything else?"
"I keep imagining myself as a superhero. " The green eyed boy gave her a funny look, but didn't say anything.
"What do you remember?"
"I can't."
The green eyed boy looked at her. "Do you remember me?"
She looked at him. She looked into those vivid eyes. He was familiar and distant at the same time. Then it hit her. She gasped. "I kissed you! Or is it my imagination?" She exclaimed.
He gave a gentle smile. "Do you remember my name. Anything?"
"Don't push her Adrien... and when did you kiss my daughter?" The tall man... her dad, looked at the green eyed boy- Adrien.
Adrien looked nervous. Something serious was going on. Something she didn't quite understand. "Do you remember?"
"I'm sorry, Adrien." The name sounded unfamiliar on her tongue. "I want to know you, but honestly I don't remember you."
He looked relieved and concerned at the same time. Was that the wrong answer? What was he hiding?
