Hello I'm back and i suppose some explanations are needed

So lets start

(Pls remember that some things may be tangled because i'm not writing this story using ideal plan made after years of research, I mainly write what comes to my head that's why you are there my bloodhounds.)

0. How Alaya fooled our vampire idk but last time when I asked let' say it hadn't ended before some of my parallel self's were killed and resurrected few times.

1.Villian's power is interfering with world as an all covering darkness, his power makes it impossible to perceive some of the other realities as it starts to cover them. That's why Zelretch was unable to ever perceive this possibility, his power just starts to separate parallel worlds from this one. Plus Zelretch is not omnipotent, God's powers and Alaya's are not so equal in strength but reach same levels that's why he can expand his influence, break free and she can only slow him down. (But she has one ace in the hole).
That's why they needed to be fast before all routs separate.

2. That's why connection with them starts to fade, what scares her the most, here possibilities are fading as darkness approaches, yes there's root but our new god due to its status (as the one of the first gods existing during primal chaos) can meddle with it, especially with his power as a king of darkness, monsters and night, that is opposing to humanity what makes Gaia passive. And his power erases all traces that can signify it's work.
3.
he knows how to use his powers due to root glimpsing experience, but it was short for his own good because his new being was still unstable, plus in chaldea there are masters of their crafts that can easily teach him, but his role is not a fighter but rather barer of something that wasn't present during god's first imprisonment, he can use magic but only through his powers, he can't use Lucifer and Michael yet due to them being bestowed after summoning/during summoning, he knows no magecraft theory, or state of affairs and consequences of using it or arias so he can only manipulate magic using his own powers, why they are sealed because as I written in stats he can imprint on his powers concept of truth and I hope I don't need to explain what it means in nasuverse. Also he couldn't use magic but as it is written his body was reformed together with making magic circuits. Also his powers are restricted, so that he really knows how to use them and trains muscle memory and unconscious actions, what may save his life in case someone meddles with his mind.
4. Why human, easy he was just one of two people compatible with this magic, so she chose him because of convenience.(Adnotation Plus rly have you seen all this fanfic where normal characters are granted power just for fun are not controlled and have all of them class cards, pseudo servants, dead apostle ancestors traits, true magics and reality marbles, granted by Zeltrech. I think my character is pretty easy to comprehend and justified in light of them. And I'm not going to add more power-up's beyond him learning something on his own and things that we question marked in stats.(OF course there are Amy and our duo abilities that were not revelled but know that when it comes to stats and power L&M are Anti-World Np when summoned in full form.( That's what I mean when I said that he can't use them, he for now can only utilize some of their abilities).

he wasn;t trying to fight Alaya despite his knowledge of nasu:

-he's mind has gone wild, he was scared, shoked and things happened to fast not giving him a chance to think clearly

-he has knowledge but is limited, severly limited he only knows basic info about our will and vampire, he doesn't know their thought proces or moral code fully, only very basic things he only watched Fate/Zero, Stay Night, and UBW. Rest is only somethings his friend told him. That's why he was prejudged due to fear that saing no will be not the best thing to do to put it simply, but trust me that revange is coming, when I'll finaly plan it, ideas are welkome.

Answer to CD123505 review.

And these are my personal arguments feel free to despise me:

6. It's my first story written for fun I can hold it and change it or use other story line, and than release it but your response are important for me because you are like bloodhounds when it comes to mistakes.
7. I really wanted to use Salvius as an character so that's there and It was first servant I made.

8. Also why she restricted him rule over concepts and she is a concept plus she screwed him, so she is afraid of revenge that's why plus there is a lot of time before main evil will be finally free.

9. Why him because among all of possibilities he was the only one compatible with this magic is fu***** two to infinity possibility as there is only one more person like him that could bear it all.

10. Why he wasn't resisting

His mind is wrapped, as child due to his oversensitivity and low self value he blamed him self for every fight between his parents and their expectations were thrown into the mix so he unconsciously made himself into machine that lives to fulfil everything that is asked of him, his auntie saw this and due to her problem is not deepening but he still is unable to admit how warped he truly is. Also due to wanting to be perfect child he throw himself into studding and reading(that's also a form of escape to infinite world of fantasy.) What made him acquire one of his origins. ]

11. Story is not interesting rly as I hadn't know it's not the best, I never written such a long one before and I'm not an talented author that's why I seek your participation. I have only rough plot. Also If I will feel it's needed I will delate it (knowing my lazy self with out warning). Also I know I follow rly basic plot line big evil, big ones from good side can't prevent so they seek hero and made him a living universe killer, he wins after some lame monologues and word fights, and we have happy ever after. But what I can tell you is that Salvius will need to confront his devils, but I don't know what route he will take is he going to be normal, pretend to be like it, go nuts, embrace him self as he is, throw everything away and despise him self, go berserk, try to kill himself because of his younger self "stupidity", or magic friendship will save him. ( I have my preference but I need to think how will it work.)

12. I'm tired of people becoming masters concept (and mainly of servants that they fell in love), card made servants especially multiple cards etc. I wanted to use less popular one. I never seen many kind of fic in which oc becomes original servant and not card one or reincarnated as one of legendary heroes.

Also I inform that I have plans to use Salvius as replacement of 4th war caster as he and Ryosuke rly annoyed me and I fell urge to kill them every time I see them.

Also is there someone who knows our vilain already if yes cookie for you.

Or other sweet If you are allergic, I don;t want my readers hospitalized.

And thank all of the visitors and all the good people that support me and my sanity by following and Faved this story.

And that you know I had other plan and have it still for our hero tell me If you would like to know them, maybe you'll like it more?

And is there someone who knows how to rent Sha Naqba Imuru from Gilgamesh It could be very helpful while writing this fic, especially as I screwed first chapter totally, I'm thinking about rewrite. So be vigilant or not is not as I can command you.( Screw my Z- rank Charisma.)

Now to the story.


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(Chaldea main meeting room, Night of the summoning)

-"I suppose every one gathered knows why we are here"- said our beloved master.-"So with out extending this futher let's start, caster and lancer can you begin."- he added in serious voice.

-"Of course our master."- responded two people, one woman clad in blue attarie, many mechanical ornaments like gears were addoring it, her left arm clad in something that looked like mechanical armor was holding a tabled tightly, and a man, clad in black body suit with golden lines and pices of golden armor adored with spikes. Red gem was on his chest and cape of the same colour like a flame was straped to his shoulders. Also he had white hair kept in free maner and golden earing his face was giveing some hints that he is of asian descend.

-"Like we all know, todays incident is really hard to comprehend and is unbelivable even by our standards."- she said in profesional bussines tone.-" For Alaya to act so openly it's very unlikely from what I can say after consultation with other casters and servants involved with her. So there are two main options: he tells the truth and something big is going to happen so we need to prepare, or he is lying and all of this is some sort of trap or attemp of infiltration, but that's the moment Lancer comes in."- said woman noding in white haired man direction.

-"Master and fellow servants, like you know my ability act's in simillar way to lie detector, while listening to his explanation I was unable to find a lie in his speach, but there is a chance his a sleeping agent or being manipulated, that is all I have to say." - said golden clad man.

-"Thank you lancer, now master may you show us what you have found out about his status and abilities."-she asked polietly.

-"Yes, wait a minute."-he responded as he was serching for something in his tablet. Than an image aperade on the nearest monitor.-"Here you go."-He said as soon as that happened.

-Every one looked on the TV with no hidden curiosity, looking trought his stats(the same as on the page before), than a voice echoed-"This mongler can survive my precious treasure while he is on full power, blahemy but it's surely ! Now I'm going to judge him with out question.!- After this statement face of our king got predators look."

-"Yo, let others have fun to, I can't wait to fight him."- added blue lancer.

-"His abilities are power full but have some drawbacks for sure but this two entities are woring me."Said caster from eariel.

-"Despite this he would be fine addition to my army"- said gigantic redhead in loud voice, as some of the servants covered their ears.

-"I think you over looked one think Gil, Cu, and Iskandar, he has no combat expirience."-said goldies friend in polite tone.

-"I think thats not a problem, give me him and I will train him into true hero in no time."- said woman with hair of wine colour, and black combat suit with silver ornaments and black belts, wchile proceding to strike blueish man into his thick skull.-

-"That would be great idea, mind if I join you."- said man of athletic build with long brown hair, mediteran apperance and dressed in old greek garments, emanating aura of wisdom and expirience worth lifetimes.

-"I think you both forgot something to he's caster so there can be only one suitable master for him, me magus of flowers, greates mentor and king maker!"-boosted servant in pastel robe holding his staff while taking in his opinion pose.( Thats how best teacher competition started.)

-"I don't think It's the best idea Merlin."-said woman wearing blue and white batlle skirt acompanied by her alternative versions.-"It want be good If some of you behaviours will become his to, don't you think?-said one of them when radiating deep dark aura, that scared our beloved prankster so much, that he could only cover in fear.

-"But, his powers are based on Christian believs shouldn't man of the God teach him"- said other white haired man wearing priest robes. Smiling in friendly maner.

-"For now I suppose it will be best to wait for evaluation to be done than we can return to this problem."- said child like servant in white laboratory coat and deap dark blue suit, anoyed by others antics.

-"I think it is the best idea Hans, we will do it tommorow for now we should stop."-said Ritsuka.-"For every one intrested evaluation will begin at 12 o'clock.

-"Senpai is right, it was a long day it will do us well to rest."- said girl from eariel now standing with out her shield.

-"Thank you Mash, now I announce end of the meeting."- after this statement everyone returned to their tasks. But still thinking about every thing.


(Next day, training grounds.)

Salvius was nervous again, after being woken up by his new self proclaimed teachers and shield using girl that was present during summoning that introduced her self as Mash, he was informed that his going to go through evaluation, what kind of evaluation you ask, easy, battle one. So nervously he was standing in training grounds waiting with some onlookers for the beginning of test."From what da'Vinci-chan said I'll go through, mock battle with golems and something special, that I'm afraid won't be something pleasant if her companions grin was any indication."- he thought and shuddered.

-"We are starting please leave marked area If you are not participating."-said da Vinci-chan.-"I hope you are prepared."-she added.

-"It can't be better I suppose!"- Salvius responded. "Don't worry we are with you, just listen to us."- familiar voices echoed in his head.-"We can communicate?"-

-"Of course we told you we are your power , also our addition changed some of your abilities for some of them at least one seal needs to be released."- Lucifer and Michael exclaimed in unison.-"But we will manage that, just listen to us."

- "I've told you to end this."-

-"Yes master."; "Yes prisoner."- they both exclaimed accordingly. At that moment earth erupted and golems appeared, most of the 5 m in height, 2 at 10m and 1 reaching 20 m easily. 50 in total.-"It looks like fun begins master, start with something small maybe gravity manipulation, I suppose they seen their share of basic elemental magic."

-"Okay."-

-"Polarization!"- he shouted as violet cracks of energy appeared on almost half of smallest golems as they started to be pulled together into one place.-"Be crushed, Gravity Well." - as he finished all golems were razed to the ground they cores destroyed under pressure. But left over golems only started to move faster.-"It looks like the rest is immune to this magic what maybe I should try elemental attack."-"Use my power prisoner."-Michael exclaimed.

-"Why are you calling me prisoner."

-"Because I'm your jailer, and focus on fight If you don't want to be a dead meat"- he said as Salvius was forced to jump and regain distance, in mid jump he intoned helped by his "guardian angel".

-"O holy fire,

flame that guards Eden,

from sin of man,

obey my call and become a sacred sword,

that passes swift judgement

Heed my call,

let not even ashes be left,

Seraphim!"

As the aria was intoned Salvius raised his hand pointing at his enemy and magic circle appeared above his enemies as red and white orbs started to shine stoping their movement, than thousand of blades forged of light and burning felt onto golems crushing and melting them and below. Only the three biggest ones were left. After this one sided bout cheers and applauses were heard.

-"Splendid but I suppose that we have 3 more to play with, take to the air It's time to welcome them into our garden."- said Lucifer playfully, showing something more than his composed demeanour.

-"Yes, let's show them."-prompted Michael.

-"I'm really lucky that you are here."-Salvius said mentally to them, but loosing his focus on the battlefield wasn't best idea, as colossal stone arm smacked him into the ground. Taking air from his lungs, blood started to spill from his mouth. Than two smaller arms were swung but a shadow appeared few meters behind him holding chain that was tied around his own arm, and pulled him out side attackers range.

-"That was close, Master be more careful next time and procced with the plan! OH! And remember we can manifest by our self only once per day!"- said Lucifer and than vanished.

-"I really suck."-Salvius sulked.-"But I want compromise so easily again!"

"O wings of black and white,

you that carry great warriors,

during eternal battle,

let me reach sky!"

As he intoned wing like plates around his hips and legs transformed into true steel wings and he took into the sky, before next strike could come from golems that were not so many meters away, and intoned once again:

"Seal release initiate."

-"One seal release permitted

-Let Fire be you weapon!"

-said wardens.

Than he continued as red crystal glowed behind him

as aura of said element and holy/demonic energy encompassed him:

"Noble Phantasm Released"

"Oh Seven Lost Gardens

Open

At your Master's command

Thine cursed gates,

Letting only those without sin leave

Blessing all who abide to virtue,

While judging their wrath and patience

In trial of fire.

O! Seven Earthly Gardens-

-Purgatory."

"Territory Enforcement Finished."

At this one moment earth erupted with fire, air was strapped of moisture, and light shined through area as heat scorched earth. After fire and light died a little, landscape like no other was seen, scorched black and burgundy earth marked by fire in vein like pattern was seen, at top of it red flowers not know to man bloomed their petals covered or rather made from flame, hexagonal pillars erupted from vein covered earth of different sizes and at the centre black tree was growing It had no leaves only fire making it's crown and atop it Stood man wearing black attire and red coat-robe with stitched golden flowers covering garden's soil, at his back red wings embraced by fire were outstretched and eight crystal orbs circled in clockwise motion. His hair were in colour of purest crimson with golden high-lights, but everyone knew who he was as no other living being was in area but Salvius. All were dumbstruck at the transformation both space and caster, not paying attention to melting golems. Than voice was heard echoing as more than one being was speaking. -"I deduce this part has been finished already?"-he asked as ash started to cover sight of area and then everything faded away like dream leaving only Salvius in his normal attire and melted golems and scorched earth. Than cheers echoed from many of servants maybe not to prise the battle prowess of caster but, Beauty of the finale.

-"Not quite"-responded genius caster evilly, as earth trembled and mass of earth took shape of another gargantuan golem this time adored with many runes of different origin shining brightly.-"You see we were expecting you to use only your magi abilities that are quite spectacular but there's also need to test your physical ability, so we made this magecraft prof guy over here have fun!"- she ended beaming with amusement, as golem started it's assault, smashing both of his limbs at Salvius.

-"It wasn't good idea to drop your guard master."- said demon.

-"Shit!"-our hero cursed.-"Gravity-less step"-he shouted and in almost an instant appeared great distance away from earth shattering limbs.-"Any ideas?"-

-"He can't be completely resistant but we will have to use high class spells to destroy it and it's not the best to throw our mana away especially as we are still expected to participate in this second trial. Plus you should get some fighting experience."- More communicative member of the duo exclaimed

-"But I don't even know how to use weapon to take down this thing."- Salvius added mentally when trying to keep himself at safe distance from approaching colossus.

-"Just summon one of our armaments they should be enough despite they origin they also count as physical weapon."- Lucifer advised.

-"I guess there's no other way."- He said facing the giant his arm extended.-"Come."-He said and black sword similar to rapier formed in flurry of shadow and black flames in his extended arm's hand with it's white twin in the other hand. blades ware quite long with katana like tip but they were straight, guards resembled black on white sword and white on black sword, wings that were entwining blades, handles were simple and covered by cloth weave at the end were two chines on which two feathers hanged, yet again mismatched when it comes to colour. But audience wasn't able to admire elegant and simple looking weapons as caster speed up to face enemy, powered by his gravity manipulation movement technique. With a shout he risen black blade as it was engulfed in dark energy and vertically slashed it at the golem. Dark energy clashed with it's arms and it was thrown out balance and felt, as giant was going to kiss the ground it emerged from caster jumped at it both blades aimed at puppets core. And than it shattered.

-"I see faker's attitude rubbed of you, caster that wields blades, as if that flowery mongrel was not enough."- golden king exclaimed.

-"Heee...!"-some perverted mage started shouting trying to object but golden ripples forming above Gilgamesh stopped him from continuation.

-"Thank you?"- our man or is it world made servant responded, but golden king only scoffed.-"Is this

-"Ye...Yes, now please relax for a bit, we will continue in 15 min, for now please leave training ground!"- said da Vinci-chan, like she was surprised. What was not so hard to believe that after such a mediocre display something like that would happen, many noble phantasm were beautiful but If someone had asked right now they would say this is the greatest in this category, land that embraces human nature still being faithful to elements, even Golden King was silent at the display even called Salvius a caster and not a mongrel to think he acknowledge his existence so fast.-" Next task is a 3v3 battle against true servants, I hope you will have luck when rolling for team mates and enemies!"-

-"Wait what, I will be fighting with random people!?"


I hope you liked it. And sorry to everyone who reads this mediocre if not worse story of my but I have some problems irl.

And thank you every good soul that follows and likes my story.

Fighting scene:

Pls remember that he was fighting mindless golems.

Garden is not reality marble, despite 9 count aria it was unintentional, because there is no inner world manifestation.

This are natures of wardens combined with caster's elemental affinity ability and territory enforcement.

Size of garden A Rank- 1km B-0.5km. When EX mana supply is active it can be expended through suppling higher amounts of it.

And now task for you who should be a part of our friends team and enemy team please write your propositions, but remember to justify why and try to make teams balanced. But I'm taking one of enemy slots to make it Shakespeare but you can propose how he can save this dying play.

Also If you have some propositions who should be his friend or enemy pls fell free to writ it and justify your proposition.

Pls comment! :)