Ok, there was the original chapter 4 but face it; it was rubbish so here is the new and improved chapter 4. I couldn't write anything till it was fixed but don't worry...HALF TERM ROCKS…chapter 6 up tomorrow and trust me; well not really, it's kind of worth the wait. Oh I am evil. But that's why you're reading this!

Disclaimer: Yeah I wish

BPOV

Oh my god. What was this? Horror struck me. This just couldn't be Alice's favorite store, it just couldn't. Lace and frills and oh, who was I kidding? I hated shopping but this had to be a whole new kind of torture. I looked around me but even words couldn't describe this horror.

"C'mon!" Alice said exasperated. "I need to get you the best wardrobe ever… We don't have much time Bella."

I laughed at her sheer exasperation. It was so funny how she bounced up and down, her spiked hair always perfectly in place. She pouted and I smiled. Suddenly she burst into a huge evil grin.

"Just messing with you," she laughed. "Bella...Bella…Bella…Silly, silly girl."

"Alice," I whined.

"Ok. No more chatting I have work to do. No offence but that shirt does not go with those shoes and I've seen…Never mind. You need a little bit of makeup, smoky eyes would be a good start. Hmmm…some jewelry and well the whole wardrobe change. Let's get to work."

I groaned. Oh no. One day and I was already into this mess.

"Shoot," I yelled as a blue tank top hit me in the face.

"Well, you weren't looking," Alice grinned.

I was forced into the dressing room with a pile of other clothes Alice procured. She forced me to pirouette around and either approved or disapproved of what I was wearing.

"Ok," she suddenly said, after I had a huge pile of clothes. "That's our casual and day wear section done…"

"Wait, hold up a second," I practically screamed. "That was just the casual. I thought we were done."

"No, silly Bella…we aren't done. We need the hotter and for a lack of a better word sexier clothes for dates and night time."

"Great," I sighed.

"Well, I plan on a huge social life for you. You're my new best friend and it's my job to make sure that you're the best you can be…now here…try this on."

A black mini-dress was thrown my way. It was gorgeous but so not my type, it was just too…revealing? Another dress, this time red and strapless with a bow, flew at me. Mini skirt mountains and tank top tons later, we were done.

"Thank you Alice," I said as she paid. I didn't want to see the bill; it was no doubt a hell of a lot. "You know I could pay for…"

Alice cut me off. "You're my best friend. I can afford it for you. Give it a rest, I don't want to hear any more about this…So we're going to my place now."

"What?" I asked.

"It's a Friday…SLEEPOVER!" she squealed. I covered my ears with my hands.

"What?" I repeated.

"Bella, you look like an idiot. An adorable idiot but please, close your mouth."

We both laughed.

"Bella," Alice said again. "What's Charlie's number."

I blurted it out without thinking and in a flash she was dialing the number. The conversation was long and boring so I won't go through it but it ended in me going to her house for a sleepover.

"Hey?" I asked. "Why isn't Rosalie here."

"Last minute homework." She decided to ditch. "No biggie."

"Alright," I said. "So how exactly are we getting home?"

"Edward's coming to get us. Don't worry he just drives fast he's not drunk."

"I heard that," Edward said, appearing out of nowhere. "Let's go."

I watched him run his hair through his already tousled, bronze hair. I mentally sighed. Ok, so I couldn't appreciate a good looking guy…?

Ah…the end of a chapter much better done. I was like, well pretty young when I wrote the last version. Under 100 is all I'm gonna say. Helpful right? But please review. Flames are welcome…not liked but useful. Please…please review. Pathetic but I'm begging you.