More grammar and spelling fixes.
Third person p.o.v
There was this man who was speaking Spanish to another. They looked as if they wanted to keep what they were talking about a secret. Then a woman walked up to them and handed them a piece of folded paper. One of them opened the paper and then they both left. They got in a car and drove to an abandoned town just outside the city. They drove right up to this crumbling abandoned building and got out of the car. They looked around to see if they were followed. They then entered the building.
"I see that you have arrived, come we have much discuss" a woman said as she greeted them.
They followed her upstairs to her room which had a few other people in it.
"Now lady, are you going to tell us why you brought almost all of the gang leaders in Miami here or are you waiting for us to kill each other now." said one of the men in the room.
"Oh, Fernando you don't need to do that. I just wish to bring you all together to bring the police to their knees."
Everyone in the room looked at her like she was crazy. "You think you can get rival gangs together for that then you are loco." said another.
"Oh, but you have no choice." she said as her vampires sneaked in and grabbed the men and bit them.
"The deed is done, now take them away I will now deal with the others that we need."
"Yes mistress." she then left the building.
She was going to meet with crime bosses around Miami. She was planning to turn them and use them for a very terrible deed. She has a plan that will bring the CSI Ryan into her hands, a plan that will ruin the hunter Jamie as well. She drove up to a dock and walked up to a yacht.
There was a man waiting, "Ah miss Bane you are here, I would really like to get to business." They went inside and sat down at a table.
"Miss Bane your proposal is very intriguing, but as you might already know I own this city, so what makes you think that I'll help you?"
"Oh, I know you won't help me willingly so why don't we do this without making a mess." she said as she showed him her fangs.
He looked pissed and said, "What the hell are you playing at, you think dressing up and pretending to be a vampire will scare me then you are one insane bitch." Rebecca laughed and in the blink of an eye she had the man on his back and in her grasp.
"Im, impossible!" said the man.
Rebecca then said, "No it's not, now will you cooperate with me or do I have to make you?"
"What do you want me to do?" he replied.
"Now isn't that better? " Rebecca said with cruelty in her voice.
She told him what she wants him to do and they got down to business. She continued to gather the scum of Miami. She turned most of them while others stayed human for her plan, and this continued for six months.
Main character p.o.v
It's been six months and Ryan was still partly human. I taught him how to defeat a vampire over these past six months and he is doing very well with that. It seems like we have become good friends as well. The amount of vampire attacks still is very low. It makes me very uneasy even though the number of victims is low. It just seems weird for vampires to not hunt. I was waiting for them to make a move.
"Jamie, you okay?" Ryan asked
"Yeah, why?"
"Well it's just that you look like you're in a daze."
"I've been feeling like something bad is about to happen."
I then left, we were at Mike's place for some training. Ryan had the day off today so it was a great opportunity to teach him more about vampires. Everything was calm, no vampire attacks, there were also very little crimes committed by local gangs or any other criminal organization. It was like the calm before the storm. I then got a call from Jacob, who was supposed to be away from the city.
"Jacob what the hell are you doing? You're supposed to be laying low not talking to a hunter that is still in the city where your face is known by the enemy."
"Well the reason I'm calling you is because I have very important news for you. The vampires are getting involved with local gangs and criminal organizations. I haven't been able to get much more information than this. I thought that you would've wanted to know this. Now I really am skipping town, good luck." He then hung up.
The news he gave me made me even more cautious of this calm. I started to think why would they need criminals. Ryan left to go home and I went to question Tony. When I got there, I heard a sound that seemed like someone was trying to hide. His place was even more of a mess than the last time I was here. It looked like someone had a fight in here. I walked further inside until I noticed someone's foot sticking out from under the bed. I grabbed it and dragged the person out. It was Tony and he didn't look very well. He curled up in a fetal position. I then noticed what was wrong, Tony was no longer human.
"What happened? " I asked with concern in my voice.
"Th, they found out that I helped you."
Of course, I should have known, vampires may like to kill hunters and those who betray them, but they enjoy turning those who hate the idea of being one of them even more. This was Tony's punishment for helping me.
"Jamie, I know what they are planning, they want to attack a building with tons of innocent humans inside and they will do it tomorrow in the afternoon. Please stop them!"
"What about you? I can't leave you alone here."
"Don't worry about me I can deal with this just stop them. "
"Okay I will" then I left to give the news to Horatio.
Third person p.o.v
(right after Jamie left)
"Did you tell her?" said a woman who was hiding in the apartment without Jamie noticing.
"Yes, now will you let me go now?"
" Yes, you have proven that you are still loyal to us. The mistress may have been lenient of your actions because you were still of use to us, but the next time you betray us, you becoming a vampire will not be the worst punishment that could ever be given to you, just keep that in mind." Tony shuddered as she said this, she then left Tony to himself.