Chapter Three The Traning Under The Star
OMGOSH GUkys im so sorry but SOMEONE glares at rainy days FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. OKKAY IF you dont LIKE thestor y you dont have to readit u know.

Chapter Three The Traning Under The Stars

Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! (She shed one what? Tear? Lol interpreting this is "hard") Noone cod hurt her family now.

StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!"

"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?"(Wrong type of "write/right".) "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new."

"Ok." They went to the frost togather and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog." (*Imagines a StarPaw panting and barking over-excitedly and licking random cats on their faces and shudders violently* O_o I shouldn't have done that.)

"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything! (Especially if I came up to you and said, "You are not special. You are a frog-faced blob of camel spit that does no deserve all this attention."?)

"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit. (You just. . . claw them. Easy enough.)

"Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding. "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome." "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god was she relly special like the porphesy meowed? (Oh no, Firestar's bledding! What a horrible thing! Take him to the hospital! Take him to Jayfeather! Or Yellowfang in StarClan! Who has committed this crime? *Glares at a purple cat*)

"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.," (Whoa, calm down. . . I understand that we all hate her, but seriously? You're supposed to pretend you like her! But seriously, "scourg"? Like, without the capitalization and the "e" at the end?)

"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur. (Imagines someone saying "Omgosh" and decides that it sounds like someone's coughing up a hairball while choking)

"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired. (They put a train on the floor? By the way, shouldn't it be ground, if they're in the wild. . .?)

"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry."

"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_.

Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. (I'm pretty sure brung isn't a word or proper grammar?)

Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there."

"Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!"

"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) they were best friends. She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head. (Uhhmmmm. . . How does anyone sleep while dead cats whisper in their heads? That's like, the opposite of a peaceful night. . . By the way, if you had to say, "NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS" then why'd you use that word choice? Get a dictionary, please.)

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