Thank you guest your review made my day because you're the 1st review of the story
Now to answer your review
1. Its moving this fast because I intended this story to have 1 chapter per tailed beast.
2. The Akatsuki don't exist in this story them members are still part of their village, Zetsu was eaten by the seven tails and Nagato is at full health so he doesn't have to use his paths. The reason Konan is not with him is because she is watching over rain with Yahiko
3. Don't worry I had to check my spelling for Akatsuki and the names for the tailed beasts ^.^ll
4. I update this fast is cause I was aiming for a chapter a day
5. Here's the next chapter
xxxxx
Chapter 4
How to capture a tailed beast- four and five tails (yes I said 1 chapter per tailed beast but is Nagato really going to go to earth country, to giant island (will be explained now) and back?)
"tailed beast talking"
"normal talking"
"normal thinking"
xxxxx
Nagato wandered around what he had originally assumed a beach but was really a REALLY big island that was connected to land. The only reason he didn't know earlier was because he happened to reach the island by land the first 2 times and arrived through by water the third. He almost got lost a few times but during those few times he found a dormant volcano, a forest that had trees with leaves the size of a house, a lot of bugs, a natural dam and a desert which he moved Shukaku to. He decided this was the best place to put the tailed beasts and was glad he stumbled upon it.
xxxxx
Now Nagato is off on a journey to find the 4 tailed monkey and 5 tails dolphin/horse…thing
"Seriously" he thought, "Why did the sage think a dolphin, horse hybrid is a good idea?" as he pondered this he saw foot and hoof prints. "Did bigfoot have a unicorn?" he tried to remember as he followed the tracks.
After a few hours of walking he started feeling tremors. "Earthquake?" he thought. That thought was lost after a shout of "WOOO HOOOOOOO" that blew him back a few meters.
After picking himself up Nagato saw that he found them. "That was easy" he thought.
It seemed that the monkey was riding the horse…holding a stick and they were charging at… themselves?
"They can use clones?" he thought in disbelief. He watched the former 4 tails impale the latter which promptly burst in a shower of lava. "Great" he thought, "I won't even be able to get close without melting". However it seemed that the horse sensed him and came running at him in full gallop which only took 5 seconds to reach him nearly a mile away. "Fast" he thought. "Hello human, what you doing here?" boomed the monkey. "I came here to offer you to join my island" he managed to squeak out. "And why would I want to do that?" he laughed. "Because it's a nice island?" he questioned/replied "Why would I choose an island over my own forest the size of a country?" he questioned. "Shukaku, Matatabi and Isobu are there." Nagato answered. "It would be nice to see them again" came the 5 tail's voice
"Very well since my brother here decided to go, so shall I"
Nagato released a breath he didn't know he was holding "Very well follow me"
"No we go by sea, land is too boring." Refused the 5 tails.
"That's ok, it's about 100 miles southeast from here" Nagato told them.
"Climb on and hold on tight" they instructed "we will be there in a hour"
"Right, please don't drown me" he whimpered the last part out.
With a boom they were off to meet their siblings.
A/N: so that's chapter 4
Read and review
