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"I'm sorry, Miss Sanban won't be in for...the next few wee-."
"Seconds?" Jessica's neck almost snapped because the speed she used the turn her head. Her eyes narrowed immediately.
"What are YOU doing here?" Jessica hissed. Kuki grinned.
"Well I thought I worked here, but I'm guessing I got fired over my little break." Kuki said, placing her purse earrings, piercings, bracelets, and other stuff in her worker bin. She straightened her cute sailor tie and turned to walk out.
"You mean the break that you're supposed to STILL be on?" Jessica said. Kuki raised an eyebrow.
"Eh, I felt the need to come back."
"Why?" Jessica snapped. "There's nothing for you to do here, and that thing is locked up." Jessica spoke. Kuki gave a short look of disgust, which wasn't seen by Jessica.
"Okay Jess Betch, I'll handle Beatles. I won't need security guards this time, or ever again. So don't bother sending them despite what happens on the camera screen. I'm a big girl and I'm not going to cry anymore." Kuki started off boldly, but ended her little speech softly with a far off stare in her eyes.
"Did you just call me a bit-!"
"Betch..." Kuki corrected. "I'm scene, idiot." She beamed and exited the room. Jessica silently fumed and spun on her heel, marching back to the phone. She would show Sanban, she was NOT a person to mess with.
"Access Granted." Kuki spoke in sync with the annoying voice. The door opened and Kuki slipped in. Beatles was on the bed, facing the wall, and hadn't moved a muscle upon hearing the door open. She cleared her throat loudly and began to walk towards the bed. She sat next to him, but facing the door of the room. "..." She sat there. After 5 minutes, he shifted and Kuki opened her mouth. "I'm 16." She said. "I think I told you that already, but...I am. I'm 16." She repeated, sounding rather unsure of herself. "I'm sorta popular and I'm a very social person. I talk a lot too, I could talk for hours about multiple things. Like when I was 6, I fell off my bike and scraped my knee. I-I wasn't crying though, I was laughing, cause at the time I found everything funny." Kuki said, starting to babble. "I could also tell you about when I was 13 and went to Fanny Fulbright's birthday party. Her brother Shaunie kept offering me stuff like cake, flowers, drinks, and etc. Finally, I backed away from him and without realizing it I hit the punch bowl. It flew over the banister and crashed on the DJ stand, so the music made weird buzzing sounds. Fanny rushed towards it and her heavy stomping caused the cake to tumble over the banister..." Kuki trailed off giggling. "And it sorta fell on her head." She added. "I know it's not that funny, but at the time...I found everything funny." Kuki explained. "But anyway, back on topic...I talk a lot and to be honest, I might go insane if yo don't at least talk back to me, but seeing as that is NOT likely to happen. I've decided to become mute." Kuki took a deep breath. "Just so I won't annoy you, but if I ever become annoying because I don't talk...you can just yank on this here," Kuki gestured to her navy blue sailor tie. "And start choking me, I talked to management at the nurse's station and they won't send any guards." Kuki said. "So you can trust that you won't get in trouble." Beatles remained silent. So Kuki closed her eyes and wiggled her hips, moving back against the wall, that Beatles was staring at. She stared at him, wondering why she wanted to please him so much. Her eyes ran over his bright blonde hair, which was now longer and covered those bright emerald eyes which she longed to see. She sighed and let her eyes run over his smooth tan skin...Kuki squeezed her eyes shut and fought the blush on her cheeks. He was so hot.
"Ahhh, run! run! run!" Abby shouted. Kuki watched Nigel and Hoagie both run the different bases and she smiled. She really loved playing kickball. She cheered along with Abby for her friends. She never fought Hoagie could run so fast...well, never judge a book by its cover. The ball bounced away and over to a shady part of the park.
"I'll get it." Kuki shouted, running towards the bright, bouncy ball. She leaned over and her eyes widened. "Hey!" She shouted. A few feet away a boy was curled up in a ball, his head tucked underneath his arms. "Hey you!" Kuki shouted, approaching the boy and forgetting the ball. "Wh-Why are you all alone?" Kuki asked, trying to move his arms from his head.
"L-Leave me alone." He said weakly. Kuki frowned.
"No, I wanna know why you're alone. Wouldn't you rather play with me and my friends?" Kuki asked.
"No, I wanna be alone." The boy said, raising his voice. Kuki rolled her eyes, she always got the difficult ones.
"But I wanna be you're friend." Kuki said softly, once more trying to pry the boy's arms from over his head. He released his arms and peered up cautiously.
"You do?" He asked uncertainly, hoping it wasn't all a trick.
"Sure I do!" Kuki exclaimed, jumping to her feet. She extended her hand and the small boy uncurled and slowly reached for her palm. "I'm Kuki..." She said softly.
"I-I'm-."
"What are you looking at?" The amount of surprise Kuki's voice held at the moment didn't compare to the state of shock she was in. He-He had actually SPOKEN! Kuki looked at Beatles, who was occupying himself by glaring at her.
"You can talk?" She asked. He did't respond and Kuki blushed, such a stupid question. "I-I mean..." Kuki had to stop and catch her breath. "I was um...day dreaming." She admitted sheepishly. The blonde stared at her and turned away. Kuki knit her eyebrows together. He obviously wasn't planning to speak again. "That was a bit shocking." She said. He was silent...then...
"I believe my file should tell you, I'm not mute." Beatles said.
"No, not that." Kuki smiled when she saw confusion flash through the blonde's eyes, though his face remained emotionless. "You're voice." Kuki said. "I expected you to sound deep and rich, and I even expected you to sound like a country boy with the blonde hair. Though I saw you're tan and immediately labeled you as a surfer boy." Kuki said, the blonde snorted and looked back at the wall. Kuki was still in a deep state of shock. He was actually talking with her, communicating! And he wasn't even attempting to kill her! She sighed in relief, letting her head fall. Her long hair covered her smile. She tossed her hair over her shoulder, to see Beatles staring at her.
"Kuki." He said simply. She nodded and he turned away. "Tch...cruddy sheila." Kuki grew red in the face...What did that even mean?
"Excuse me, I'm here for visiting." Jessica looked up from a list of patient schedules. Her jaw dropped.
"How did YOU get in here?" She spat in disgust. If she hated anyone in the world it just HAD to be her.
"Well, this thing right here, stupid." Fanny Fulbright pointed to the worker ID card in her hand. "I borrowed it from Shaunie." She explained. "I'm just here to visit my favorite patient." Jessica winced as the red head giggled. A giggle that could turn cute baby kittens to stone. Jessica leaned against the counter.
"I don't know if you aware, you but you didn't even ask. And you can't steal a workers ID just to use as a pass." She muttered. Fanny rolled her eyes and turned away. "Okay then, I'll call the hospital." Jessica called after her. Fanny ignored her and began walking down the hallway. She stopped at a door and slipped Shaunie's ID card through. The annoying buzzer sounded and the door clicked open loudly. She entered the room, her boots thudding against the ground. She plastered a cheesy grin on her pale face and turned to see Beatles sitting on the bed...along with a raven-haired female.
"Who are you?" She immediately snapped. The girl was sitting next to Wally, on his bed. Fanny wasn't even allowed on his bed! WHO WAS THIS GIRL!?
"Oh, hi there." Kuki moved her glance from the blonde to the red-head. "I'm Ku-..." Kuki trailed off, her gaze hardening upon laying eyes on Fanny. "Fulbright."
"Sanban." Fanny mimicked in response. "Why are YOU here?"
"I could ask the same, since there a no visitors allowed, but I'll cut to the chase to prevent a load of drama. I'm Beatles' nurse." Kuki said.
"Hm." Fanny sniffled and turned away. "Well don't bother him too much, he's my boyfriend and I won't have you feeling his cute little brain with any bad things." At this Kuki snorted.
"Boyfriend?" She asked. "This dude doesn't even speak, he's an anti-social mental patient." She snapped, glaring at Fanny. Fanny fumed.
"Don't down talk him!"
"I'm not-!" Kuki paused...she WAS. She flicked her eyes back to the blonde, who avoided locking eyes with her. "I-I highly doubt that Beatles' would be interested in such a person like you."
"And he'd be interested in YOU?" Fanny asked with a sneer. Kuki froze, she looked at Beatles' and he had on his poker face. Kuki swallowed nervously, how to reply? She had no cruddy idea. "We're waiting..." Fanny tapped her foot dramatically. Kuki squeezed her eyes shut. Fanny was right. THEY were waiting. It wasn't just Fanny that would hear Kuki's reply, Beatles would hear it too and he'd judge her and...Kuki sighed.
"I am in no way attracted to 3879." Kuki said softly. "In fact, I don't think he even likes ME? He most likely hates my guts, seeing as he tried to kill me like twice already."
"Silly Sanban, mental patients are for Fanny's." Kuki rolled her eyes at Fanny's God awful attempt at a joke. She scooted off the bed.
"Well I guess I'll just leave you two alone then, huh?" Kuki asked quietly. She looked around and gave a small nod to Fanny, before leaving the room. The door clicked shut behind her.
"And then Fanny Freaking Fulbright just walks in and squeals 'OMG Sanban! What are you DOING here?' and I was all 'Sup Fan-Fan, just chillin' with Beatles, you good?'" Kuki explained, slightly changing her voice to imitate Fanny. Abby chuckled and pulled a sheet over a bed. They were in the Self Harm ward and Abby was making a bed, while the patient was being escorted to lunch by another assistant nurse.
"So you're telling Abby that Fanny actually visits your patient?" The African-American girl asked curiously. "I wonder why...?"
"I have no idea, but still 'visiting'? No Abby, it's more like obsessing. She's like in love with him!" Kuki exclaimed, knitting her eyebrows in anger.
"And you're jealous?" Abby asked curiously.
"No!" Kuki snapped. "Though she walked in all 'Whatchu doin' with ma boi?' and I was like 'your boy? Oops couldn't tell since ya know, he's giving you the silent treatment.'" Kuki said. "I mean he didn't even LOOK at her." Kuki said. "I wonder if his feelings are mutual." Kuki said thoughtfully. Abby shrugged.
"Kuki as much as Abby enjoys spending time with one of her best friend, She's sorta on duty right now. She has like 14 more rooms to tidy up and lunch break is almost over." Abby said softly. Kuki frowned, but nodded in understanding. Speaking of lunch, Kuki had to go up and take Wally to his. She waved goodbye to Abby and began to walk to the elevator. As the doors opened with an annoying 'ding', she stepped in and was consumed by her thoughts. Did Beatles' have the same feelings? Kuki really didn't know... She felt her cheeks grow warm. What did it matter anyway!? She shook her head, why would it matter to her? She could barely get him to speak to her! She sighed as she reached her floor and she walked out.
The nurse's station was empty when she got there. She raised an eyebrow? Oh yea, it was Jessica's lunch break. Kuki checked her watch and realized that Beatles' actually had 15 minutes until she had to take him down to the patient's section of the cafeteria...which was heavily guarded. Kuki didn't blame them, she wouldn't trust mental patients with silverware either...that's why it was plastic. The plates were Styrofoam , and patients only got trays if their assistant nurse brought their lunch to their room. Kuki got bored rather quickly and as 5 minutes passed, she let her mind wander. Beatles' was a really quiet person and he had a...rather sexy accent, which Kuki couldn't place. His tan was practically perfect and his hair was bright and the perfect length. He just seemed so perfect. Especially his eyes...his amazingly emerald green eyes. They held so much emotion, which his face never showed. He never frowned, but anger could be seen in his eyes. His eyes...his eyes...his eyes... Kuki scowled, that was it. Her curiosity was at its peak. She checked around to make sure Jessica wouldn't be back at any time soon, shut the door and locked it. She went to the file cabinet and yanked it open, locating Beatles' file within minutes. She tugged it out and tossed it onto the counter, opening it up to immediately see pictures of a crime scene, some news paper clippings, and a document. Kuki made a grab for the newspaper clipping.
The Cleveland Times
September 17th, 2004
Early this morning between the hours of 12 and 1, a tragic event took place. Two deaths occurred. The first victim was Mrs. Beatles. The victim had short blonde hair, freckles, and bright green eyes. She was murdered with a pair of safety scissors. Apparently her breathing with cut off by being stabbed in the throat and she was stabbed multiple times in the face, mostly around her eyes and mouth. The second victim was her husband, Sydney Beatles. He was found in the bathroom down the hall. His body was covered in scratches though these were not from the safety scissors. The scratches on his body were from human fingernails. Aside from being scratched, he was in the bath tub under the water. Theory was, he backed into the bathroom looking for medical supplies to help his injured wife, though he was surprised by his younger son and slipped on a wet towel, causing him to slip and slam his head on the edge of the tub. His weight did the rest for him and eventually he drowned, since soon after he slipped in, his son turned on the bathtub. Speaking of the son, Wallabee Beatles, aged at the young age of 7, was found guilty for the murder of both his parents. We had an interview with his childhood therapist...
The newspaper clip ended there. Kuki snorted in disbelief. Why did this seem so familiar?
"I'm Kuki." She said softly.
"I-I'm Wally." The boy reached out and took her hand. Kuki's eyes lit up with glee and she momentarily struggled to pull him up.
"That's cool!" She squealed. "I like how you're voice sounds all funny when you talk." She commented.
"Th-That's cause I'm Australian." He said.
"I like your hair," She reached up and ran her hand through it. "It's soft and very bright. It's like the sun. Ooh, Ooh, how old are you?" She asked.
"I'm 7." He said, boldness seeping into his voice.
"That's cool!" He was met with another high-pitched squeal. "I turn 7 next month, but Mommy said time will fly. Ne, does time have wings? Cause how will it fly without wings? I don't have wings and I can't fly. It's unfair. I should get to fly too. Hey do you like the color purple? I like the color purple, I like green too and that's why I think you're eyes are amazing. I think I love your eyes. Can I marry them? Mommy said when you love something very much you can marry them. So can I marry your eyes, I think..." Wally tuned out and blushed crimson.
"Cruddy Sheila..." He mumbled. "Making me blush like this..." Though Kuki didn't hear a word. She was too busy rambling on.
"Huh...?" Kuki pouted. "That...That...Wallabee Beatles? She thought. "No...it couldn't be." She decided.
"What are you doing?" Kuki slammed the file shut and tossed it in her bag as Jessica entered the office, how had she gotten in? Oh yea...spare key.
"Erm nothing really," Kuki said non-chalantly. "Just fixing myself up." She said.
"You have a lot of work ahead of yourself." Jessica snickered.
"Oh boo hoo, you betch." Kuki inwardly giggled as Jessica flinched.
"Whatever, aren't you supposed to be taking Beatles to lunch." Jessica asked.
"That's what I was going to do next." Kuki spun and opened the door.
"Thought you were fixing yourself up." Jessica questioned. Kuki threw a grin over her shoulder.
"Not much to fix." She said with a wink. Jessica rolled her eyes, maybe Kuki wasn't that bad...maybe.
Sup guys? Good chappie, no? I think it came out pretty good, but we all have our own opinions, right? Oh my gumballs guys, thanks SO much for your support and I DO read your reviews. And since I do: We'll be seeing more of Nigel and Hoagie. I think you guys will enjoy them, the only thing you won't enjoy is Hoagie's puns...bleh. ^-^
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-Jade (No der, I'm Blue2B)