Okay guys, just wanted to say something to those reviewing. Guest, Cutesy bunny, Kingsman, creativity shines, Simonettefan, and all of those reading and enjoying as I was reading your reviews, the one thing going through my mind was "Gosh, I love this kid." for every one you you. You guys are so nice and supportive, every few chapters I just love telling you what happens in my mind when I read your reviews so you know that I get to read those reviews and they mean so much. I want to be an author when I grow up and the reviews you guys live every one just adds like 200000 confident points to fulfill that dream. If it ever does happen that I write a book I would tell all of you who have ever even considered reading this and/or reviewed and then send you a free copy just because I zippin' love that I'm loved on this site. Yeah so what if I only know of five people who are reviewing this... One by the name of guest, I think you are all great, and I would never do what I do without your support. But enough of this sappy tale of my mind, This chapter is for you guys. For those of you who review please tell me about a character made up on the spot or during this story, CHIPMUNK or HUMAN, and for chapter five if you do I will include your character and mention who invented that character. It's a if ya want to thing. And Creativity Shines, I know your OC's already and you can tell me if you want me to use those instead. i don't own Redwall and I suggest that you watch it after you have read this if you don't get it. Okay now it's really time for the show:

Friday.

Possibly mankind's greatest invention. A day where relaxing was right around the corner, and the day itself was crazy, but a good crazy. Of course any child reading this knows that, especially if you are in middle school.

That particular Friday was definitely superior to the rest. It was the last Friday of national Children's book week. So of course Jeanette, Jammie, Simon, and Steven enjoyed this Friday. The library always got a shipment of new children/adolescence books on this day, and Any older books were handed out for free to those under the age 17. Because November was also national adoption month Jeanette and Simon always enjoyed this time of year.

"in approximately three hours the library will be our domain!" Steven said cackling like a mad scientist, as they sat at their lunch table. Jammie smiled at him. She has a bit of a crush on the young teenager. unaware that he felt the same way. Jammie had jet black hair and indigo eyes. She wore a pair of small wire-frame glasses on her head until she had to read something. her shirt had long orange-cream sleeves, and she always wore orange poofy pants. She was pale, without freckles, and found herself rather plain -although not really minding. Steven had braces on his back top teeth because his front row of teeth lined up with his two front teeth that, because he was a chipmunk, were supposed to go out farther than the rest. He had fur like Simon's but hair that was a very dark brown. His shirt was black and read 'I get it...' with a lightning bolt under it. And his cheeks had three freckles on each, his nose wide and eyebrows dark. Giggling at his antics Jammie blushed to Jeanette who knew of her crush. She shrugged towards him as if to say "go try" Jammie smiled. Normally she was very confident among her friends, but as she got older she found it more difficult to not blush while around Steven. Earlier that month she had recognized this and compared how she behaved to how Jeanette behaved before Simon asked her out.

"That's funny, and kinda ... cute." Jammie said to Steven then stared down at her feet the way Jeanette so often did. Steven smiled at her when he heard this and replied,

"Thanks. Your kinda ...cute too." Jeanette and Simon smiled and allowed their friends to flirt back and forth in peace as they scooted to the other side of the table.

"You are so adorable." Simon whispered in Jeanette's ear, "I love you to pieces, you know that right?" Jeanette nodded and Simon glanced with his mouth still to her ear. Noticing Brittany's table staring at them he added quickly, "Don't freak out but they're watching us, now act like I just said the funniest thing in the whole world." Jeanette winked at him and Began to laugh and playfully pretended to slap his shoulder. Simon smiled and laughed himself, glancing back he noticed that Brittany and her posse had turned away. He smiled and winked at her. And she stopped laughing.

"They are going to catch on you know. Either that or Ellie and Theo will crack. " Jeanette said worriedly.

"No they won't. They're too loyal- like Jammie. Don't worry. If they give you any crap I'll handle it." Simon winked cockily. Jeanette blushed at him thinking to herself, Dang! how does he still have this affect on me- isn't the crush supposed to end after you get together? Simon smiled and thought to himself, How is it that I'm always so goofy in front of her? Isn't my crush supposed to end after you get together? Simon and Jeanette looked back up and into each other's eyes as if searching for their answers when it hit them at the same time- If I never get over my crush I guess it means we're never supposed to be apart. They both smiled simultamiously.

The library was empty, even on the rare day of giving out books. So Jeanette and Simon and Jammie and Steven all got plenty of books- to last them at least until Christmas. Walking home with heavy book bags and smiling faces. Jeanette smiled at all of them,

"So, what do you want to do now, guys?" Steven shrugged and Jammie thought a moment. Simon didn't do anything- he was staring at Jeanette with a loving gleam in his eye.

"Redwall- the usual, no shows required this time." Jammie suggested, they all enjoyed the Teletoon's version of Redwall. (if you have never seen Redwall it's about an abbey called Redwall where small rodents live. Martin the warrior is the founder, try looking it up on Youtube if you don't get it by the end of this chapter- and sorry for those of you who don't know- I'll make it make sense)Maybe it was because they were rodents, as in Redwall but also as big as what was portrayed. Maybe it was the mystery- even though they all new how it ended. Maybe it was because the usual was when they'd always be in a mood to act like children again and pretended to be their favorite characters out in Jammie's backyard. Jammie loved Constance, while Steven enjoyed the way Clunny was portrayed, though he did enjoy the shrews. Simon was left to be Matthias so they could have a plot and He had convinced Jeanette to be his Cornflower. Steven smiled looking around,

"Double it." Simon had snapped out of his revery and called,

"All in favor?" And Jammie, Jeanette, and Steven all called,

"aye!"

"Plot ideas anyone?" Simon asked. The other three looked at each other and waiting for someone to shout an idea.

"Season 1, right? I suggest that Cornflower has been kidnapped, and Constance and Mathias have to seek her. But they don't know the Clunny is alive and holding her hostage. Objection?" Steven said recalling their last event. Jeanette shrugged- this was very like the games they always played and she just wanted to know if anyone agreed to her objection,

"Why's it always the youngest girl who gets captured? I suggest young Mathias is captured- and it takes some girl power to get him back." she and Jammie high-fived and Steven rubbed his hands together cackling like Clunny and said,

"Woo! Plot-twist!" Simon smiled,

"Double. All in favor?"

"Aye!" everyone called, they looked up and realized they were already at Jammie's house.

"let's go!" Jammie called and cleared her throat then said in Constance's accent, "I mean- tallyho!" Steven smiled a toothy grin and grabbed Simon's hoodie, saying,

"I am Cunny the scourge! Redwall, Redwall, Redwall must fall!" Simon laughed and then called as he was dragged into the backyard,

"Constance! Cornflower! Help!" And like that the world before their very eyes was transformed. The old tree-house that had been in the backyard before the last inhabitants of the house became Redwall's tower, where Martin, the dead warrior defender of Redwall, and Matthias's old ancestor's shield should be placed. The flower beds became Mossflower woods where Clunny's army rested.

"Constance!" Jeanette/ Cornflower called. "Clunny took Matthias!" Jammie/Constance grabbed a plastic chair and held it above her head,

"Let's get that dirty rat!"

Behind the flower beds Simon/Mathias held a fake harmonica to his lips, And made small harmonica noises with his mouth.

"Shut up, mouse!" Steven/ Clunny called. Simon/Matthias banged on this invisible cage saying,

"They'll come for me! And you Clunny will be very sorry! Not only that but they'll bring my sword, and I Matthias, I am that is will cut off your ugly rat head!"

Steven/Clunny just laughed, "You think a weakling mouse, and an miniature skunk can defeat me?!" Simon/Matthias raised a brow,

"I never said anything about a weakling mouse or mini skunk. But I know Constance who is a big tough badger, and Cornflower the bravest mouse I know can defeat you." Steven/Clunny growled.

"Arggh!" And then looked up to find Jammie/Constance with a chair over her head. Steven/Clunny ran away as Jammie/Constance followed. Jeanette/Cornflower smiled and unlocked the imaginary door which held Simon/Matthias. Seeing this as an opportunity, Simon/Matthias kissed Jeanette/Cornflower for a moment to two. Smiling as they broke apart, Jeanette/Cornflower said,

"I never knew a warrior mouse could be such a good kisser." Simon/Matthias smiled at her,

"I never knew a mouse who worked in the kitchen could be such a fine, and brave young lady." He pecked her lips again, and they climbed up to the tree house, and Jammie/Constance followed, as Steven/Clunny fell to the ground and pounded his fist,

"Not fair! I'm Clunny the scourge I should've won!" And with that their game ended with the three coming down, and Steven standing back up, all four laughing.

Another half hour past and Simon and Jeanette, and Steven all had to leave.

"Thanks for having us, Jammie!" The three called as they headed out the back gate.

"See ya Monday! Have a great weekend!" Jammie called. After walking for about half a block Steven turned waving,

"See ya Monday!" he called and walked towards his street. Now it was simply Simon and Jeanette.

How should I put this? how can I tell her how I feel? Simon thought watching her eyes closely as they walked.

"Jeanette?" Simon asked but before he could finish he was interrupted by a violent cough, and felt his throat almost raw.

"Simon? Are you okay?" Simon nodded to her as she looked into his eyes with her own worried set.

"I'm fine, just a cough. but what I wanted to say was-" he was interrupted again by a worse cough than that before and had to sit down on the flower bed beside the sidewalk.

"Simon you're not alright. Do you want me to call Dave? He could come get you and bring you home so you don't have to walk?" Simon shook his head as he coughed.

"I'm okay!" Simon said quickly and softly so he couldn't cough again. "But Jeanette, it's not a petty grade school crush. I love you so much and my crush hasn't ended even after we got together. I'm so proud to say I'm your boyfriend- you don't even know! I only thought we shouldn't tell anyone to protect you! I'll scream it to the world!" he said with much enthusiasm. Jeanette blushed, and he stood up to his normal height and whispered in her ear,

"I am in love with you, Jeanette Miller." Jeanette smiled and then asked curiously,

"Why did you whisper it to me when you said you'd scream it to the world?" Simon took a step back surprised she didn't understand and know how much he loved her,

"Because, Simply Jeanette- you are my world."

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