Hello, everyone. I received some very helpful comments, when som were just very, very, mean. I really want to thank tansyheart, Vixenshadexwolfstrike, and moonbeam141, they are wonderful people, and writers, but I think I should explain. I come from Sweden, I am learning English but I really i like writing, I wanted to try to write in another language because I heard it is good training.
I know so,e of yomust think I do not read warriors, because one of my reviewers on me and say it is not like it. It is true, I do not read warriors. I asked my friend, if I wanted to write fanficdions, what series I should start, he say warriors. I never read it before, but he explin the facts and show me a bit of the book, so I tried it.
and I want to say sorry if I annoys one of you, I read some of the trolllfics and understand because if I read a lot of these I will be very annoys if a lot ore come out!
LI will try harder to improve, add luckily for me I have this wonderful friend wo lives across me, she will help me translate and write this story. I am going treverie it, but before I rewrite it I will post a chapter she and me write, if you people think there is a thron to improve, please say it, but not meanly. Se will get a ff account, maybe XxSunflower.
Pleasebe understanding and kind...
-Lilly