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Ch4
Tenten had to duck to avoid another rain of fire aimed at her. The bun haired girl thought that she had the upper hand in this match. Then out of nowhere this academy student starts firing flames at her!
She made a hard left and took cover behind a tree. How did that guy keep going like that?! They had been running for an hour straight with no breaks. She was sweating and panting well Naruto, from the brief glances she caught, looked ready to run another two hours before breaking a sweat.
The tree she had been hiding behind started freezing over, making the Genin jump away to avoid sharing its fate. To her shock Naruto had punched his way right through the tree with his flaming fist.
"Damn…almost had her" the boy said retracting his fist and looking up, from where he felt eyes on him. The minute he laid eyes on her Tenten cursed and tossed a kunai that had an explosive note attached to it.
Naruto threw his hand forward and sent an electric bolt shooting out to defuse the bomb. When the note turned dull in colour the boy dodged the kunai. Looking up to where he saw Tenten last Naruto saw that the girl was gone.
Pursing his lips Naruto listened for the tell-tale sounds of Tenten running away, which was none existent at the moment. This led the blond to believe she was in the general vicinity.
Thinking on his feet, Naruto gave a smirk and grabbed his goggles "Alright Tenten, if you're here, what I'm about to try out might be considered dangerous is you have a heart condition" he placed the goggles over his eyes "so get ready!"
From where she was hiding Tenten was both curious and fearful of what the blond was gonna pull out now. Naruto lifted his hand up, which started shooting off electricity. Grunting in strain the boy threw his hand to the ground.
Uzumaki Special: Shockwave!
The minute Naruto's hand made contact with the ground an electric field surrounded him then started growing at a rapid rate. A concealed Tenten cursed again and jumped away. As if it knew she was there, the shockwave started moving faster to catch up to her.
With the shockwave hot on her heels Tenten took to the trees in an attempt to escape the growing electric field. Running (jumping) faster than she has ever done in her life the bun haired girl genuinely feared for her life!
Tenten glanced over her shoulder and saw the shockwave was slowing down considerably fast. After landing on the next branch the girl stopped and watched the electric field slow down till it was 10 steps away from her.
After a second, the electric field vanished into nothing back little sparks. The scene that it left behind was something that made Tenten gasp in and stare wide eyed.
Everything…Everything! It was all either turned to ash or was fried completely!
"I-If that touched me…" the girl didn't even want to think of what would have happened had she stayed in her spot from before.
From her distance the girl could faintly make out the form of Naruto, who hadn't moved. Feeling rage mixed with fear Tenten jumped down and ran over to the motionless blond, who had wisps of smoke rising off of him.
"What the hell is your problem?!" she screamed at Naruto, who didn't move an inch "you could have killed me! Do you hear me?! I could have died! Look around you! You levelled half the training ground! What do you have to say for yourself?!" all she got was silence from the blond "Well?! Say something!"
To her shock Naruto collapsed to the ground with his eyes rolled into the back of his head and his mouth open in a soundless voice of pain.
"NARUTO!" the girl screamed and rushed over to the boy. Grabbing his shoulders Tenten started shaking the boy back and forth "wake up! Come on! Wake up please!" she was panicking now.
"Tenten!" the bun haired girl looked up and saw her team enter the fried field. But they weren't alone almost every ninja in the leaf village arrived to see what had happened.
"Guy-sensei! Help!" the girl called out to her sensei. Said man was tall with a bowl hair-cut, a green spandex suit, orange leg warmers and a Jounin flak jacket. Normally the man was loud and joyful but now he had a serious look on his face.
The man walked over to the girl and gently extracted the motionless blond from her arms. The boy's goggles slipped off his face, since the strap broke. If she was in a better state of mind Tenten would have noticed but she was too worried about the blond boy.
Instead, a brown haired teen noticed the forgotten goggles. He had long brown hair, a peach coloured top and brown pants. Wrapped around his right arm were white bandages, which were also wrapped around his right leg. He too wore a Konoha headband around his head but what stood out for this character were his white eyes.
"What you got there Neji?" someone asked making the boy put the goggles into his pocket.
"Nothing" he answered "come Lee. Let us follow Guy-sensei"
"Yosh! Let us join Guy-sensei and Tenten in treating that youthful fellow!" said a pumped teen. He looked like a mini version of Guy with the spandex suit and all the only difference were his round eyes and bandaged arms.
"Yes…let's"
"Where am I?" groaned Naruto waking up "the last thing I remember is activating my new move then it goes blank" looking around Naruto noticed that he was in a very wet and dreary setting.
"Is this a sewer?" Naruto voiced his thoughts in confusion "how the hell did I get here?" realizing that he wasn't gonna get any answers by sitting there, the boy got up and walked down one way of the corridor.
All through the corridor he heard whispers but they were too soft to make out what was being said. Seeing a light at the end Naruto made his way towards it with hope of getting out of this horrible place.
However the minute he stepped foot into the light he noticed that he didn't exit. No, he found himself in bigger room with a gate in front of him. Blinking in surprise the blond moved closer to investigate. It was then that he had to jump back in surprise. Out of the darkness behind the cage a sharp claw was slammed out of the middle of the cage.
"So close" said a malicious and hate filled voice. The very tone sent a shiver down Naruto's spine "come closer again brat. I promise I won't miss next time"
"I…think I'll pass" said Naruto peering close into the cage to see if could make out what was behind the gate "who, or what, are you?"
"Such insolence" grumbled the voice "do you not know a legend when you see it?"
"Don't you think if I could see I wouldn't ask the question?" the boy asked with a dead pan look. What he got in return was mighty roar that sent him towards the opposite wall, where he slammed into.
"Bite your tongue whelp! You WILL show me respect!" a light flashed before Naruto's eyes and showed what he was speaking to. It was a giant fox with nine swing tails.
"K-Kyuubi!" Naruto said in shock making the fox smirk at the fear in the blond "but…if you're here…I'm-"
"In your mind, yes" the giant fox laid his head on the ground to look at the blond "you fucked up royal brat" said Kyuubi "If it wasn't for me you'd have fried yourself so bad even I wouldn't be able to heal you afterwards"
"Huh?" asked Naruto as he got up "What do you mean?"
"What I mean is that, when you created that electric field you could have fried your brains ten times over. Hell, you could have burnt yourself like those trees left in your wake" the Kyuubi explained "these power ups, as your little vixen of a Goddess calls it, aren't all they're cracked up to be. If anything they can destroy their users if used incorrectly, shown by your little display"
"B-But…how?!" yelled Naruto running over and grabbing the bars of the cage "Tell me what you mean!" the giant fox just looked at him with bored eyes.
"Naruto…" Naruto heard someone's voice. It was a whisper but at least heard it. The voice sounded…familiar.
"Tenten?" the boy said looking around "Where are you?!"
"Seems you are waking up" said Kyuubi taking a deep breath "now, leave" with that the massive beast let out a breath and blew the boy away.
"Please wake up" said a teary eyed Tenten as she sat by Naruto's bed. On the stand next to the bed was a handful of gifts "you need to get up Naruto" the girl wept and put face into the sheet "Please"
"Nnngh" Tenten's head shot up and looked at Naruto, whose face scrunched up in pain "What…hit me?" he groaned trying to sit up.
"Naruto!" the boy fell back with an 'Oopfh'. Looking down he saw a head of brown hair.
"Um, hello?" said Naruto as he tried to piece together who this person was, the only person with brown hair that he knew was Ayame Ichiraku. However this person had a different scent that the ramen waitress.
"I was so worried" the person wept into his shirt. That voice sounded familiar… "Y-You were out for three days! The doctors said it take a miracle for you to wake up"
"Tenten?" said Naruto with a confused look on his face. The girl looked up with tears streaming down her face. No wonder he couldn't recognise her! She didn't have her hair in buns "What happened? Why am I here?"
"Y-You collapsed after using that Power Up" Tenten sat up on the bed "I thought you actually knew what you were doing and started screaming at you. The minute I got closer, you fell over with your mouth open in a scream"
"…my Power Up…" Naruto said as his brain tried to remember what had happened. The minute his brain caught up the blond remembered what had happened. He remembered the pain, the electricity crawling under his skin making him stay in place. Worse of all he remembered the electricity burning his skin.
The heart monitor next to Naruto started beeping rapidly as the memories started flashing through his mind as if it was on a constant loop. He could faintly hear Tenten trying to calm him down but his brain only paid attention to the phantom pains he experienced.
A stinging sensation and a loud noise pushed the pains away. Besides the bed the heart monitor started to slowly die down till it was beeping normally.
Looking to his left, since his head was turned to the right, he saw Tenten crying harder this time and holding her hand up. It was obvious that the girl had smacked him to calm him down.
"Stop it please" the girl whispered sending a stinging sensation into Naruto's heart.
"Tenten…" the two faced each other and started into one another's eyes. Tenten crawled closer to stare deeper into the blue eyes of the hospitalized Naruto, who leaned closer to stare deeper into the brown eyes of his sparring partner.
After a while, they looked down at the other's lips and wondered what it would taste like. Leaning closer the two tilted their heads and eventually ended up in a lip lock.
The kiss sent shivers up Tenten's spine. Naruto on the other hand did feel the shiver that the kiss gave Tenten, but…it didn't stack up to the sensation Yumi gave him.
'I need more' thought the boy grabbing Tenten around the waist and pulling her close as he fell back onto the bed. The brown haired girl gasped in surprise and that was all Naruto need to dart his tongue into her mouth.
Tenten saw fireworks behind her eyelids. The blond was such a good kisser! It made her toes curl in pleasure. Naruto's hands started descending toward Tenten's rear and cupped the two cheeks.
Said girl broke the kiss and moaned. Naruto furrowed his brows and started kneading the girl's ass cheeks. Tenten fell forward and placed her chin on the boy's shoulder. How is this happening? How is this guy making her feel so good just by playing with her ass!
"N-Naruto…I'm gonna…" that was all she got to say as she let loose in her panties with a moan. The Jinchuriki looked down at the wet stain in Tenten's pants. He let go of one ass cheek and dipped a finger into the moist panties.
Tenten moaned louder when Naruto stuck a finger inside her honey pot. The boy retracted his finger and brought it to his mouth to taste. It had a similar taste to Yumi's, but it paled in comparison to the deity's cum.
Naruto looked down at the girl's top and got curious. He reached for the buttons to open it, but Tenten's hand shot up and stopped him.
"N-Naruto…wait…this isn't right" she panted out as Naruto stared at her as if he was calculating something. Saying nothing the blond boy pointed to his crotch. Tenten looked down and gasped. His erection was twitching under the sheets, close to her.
"I-I can't…" she tried to deny doing something but the intense look in Naruto's eyes made her release a small whimper "m-maybe…I could…try…" that was all it took for Naruto, who pushed the girl onto her back.
When Tenten was on her back Naruto crawled onto her and straddled her. Reaching down the blond pulled the hospital pants down and stuck his dick in front of Tenten's face.
Said girl gulped and didn't know what to do. Naruto, who looked like a possessed man, reached down and grabbed her hands and placed them on the base.
Getting what he was trying to say Tenten started moving her hands back and forth. She expected Naruto to be at least moaning when she started but he stared at her with those blank eyes and grunted every few seconds.
'A-Am I doing it wrong?' thought a worried Tenten. Since when did she worry about pleasing someone else?
Naruto grunted in annoyance and grabbed the girl's head. Tenten was surprised when Naruto put as much as he could into her mouth without having her deep throat him.
The Jinchuriki growled, why didn't it feel the same? He pushed further, that was when Tenten started pushing on his hips to make him stop, but Naruto didn't budge.
The dick went further in and that was when Tenten started gagging at having her throat invaded. She thought that she'd be at least a bit disgusted…but, the only thing that stuck in her mind was the wonderful taste Naruto left in her mouth. Seriously, it was like his dick had been blessed by the Gods to make Tenten, who would never admit defeat, willing let someone throat fuck her without her permission.
Her eyes rolled into the back of her head as Naruto stuffed his entire length into her throat and left it there. Again! It had the same sensation, but it was a spark compared to Yumi's fireworks that was sent up his spine.
'Oh fuck' thought Naruto as his body started fucking Tenten's face faster 'Yumi just ruined sex with normal girls for me!' his body was a long way's off from cuming and his mind knew Tenten couldn't keep this up any longer. Fighting for control the boy made his body pull out completely and rather jerk himself off.
Tenten coughed the minute the dick was taken out of her mouth. If this were any other person she would have screamed bloody murder but she could only stare in wonder as Naruto jerked himself off in her face.
Reaching down Tenten started masturbating herself trying to keep up with Naruto's tempo of jerking himself off. She imagined herself being impaled by the dick in front of her and it served to send more sparks up her spine.
Naruto started grunting louder and speeding up, which Tenten copied. With a final jerk both teens released. Naruto sprayed his cum over Tenten's face, who was lost in a daze of her own climax.
Naruto stayed rooted to his spot for a moment before falling back onto his rear. He stuffed his pecker into his pants again and fell onto his back.
Tenten was panting heavily. She had masturbated before, everybody has, but it was never…this good! She felt like her very being was touched by a God!
"Th-That…" the girl couldn't find the words to explain how she felt. A drop ran down Tenten's cheek and brought her attention back to what was on her face. Reaching up the brown haired girl scooped some of the liquid up and brought it to her mouth. She stuck her tongue out and tasted the white liquid…the next thing she knew, her taste buds were sent on a wide ride.
"I'm sorry" whispered Naruto "I…I didn't mean it…I just lost control"
Tenten looked up at the blond she had just been intimate with. He looked at the bed with sadness. It tugged at her heart strings to hear the regret in his voice. The girl reached over to the side table and took a tissue from the tissue box.
After wiping her face Tenten reached over and grabbed Naruto's hand. The blond looked up and found himself in a lip lock with the browned haired girl.
"Its fine Naruto-kun" the girl whispered "Let's…not talk about it, ok?"
"Yeah…" Naruto said leaning forward and placing his forehead against Tenten's, who giggled softly. Naruto smiled back and kissed her again "thanks"
The next three days Naruto was kept in the hospital to run diagnoses on the blond, just to be sure. Obviously, all the orders came from the Third, who wanted to figure out everything about these Power Ups. Apparently Naruto was the only one so far to have a Power Up.
Everyday Tenten visited him and during every visit the two got to know more about each other. Obviously, they never mentioned what happened three days ago in their conversations. It was almost like they were avoiding it.
"No way!" said Tenten with a roar of laughter "that was you?"
Naruto nodded his head proudly well laughing a hearty laugh. He had been retelling how he pranked the whole village, by painting the Hokage monument. He told her how he was able to paint the monument, well wearing orange, in broad daylight and he only let them see when he was done.
"Yip, all me" said a proud Naruto "I'm the best at Prank. Hell, I'm probably Konoha's best prank master"
"You sure are" said Tenten as the two shared a laugh. After a while the laughter died down and the two were left letting out little chuckles. Eventually the two were staring into each-other's eyes and felt that attraction they felt three days ago.
"So, er, who did all these gifts come from?" Naruto asked, looking at the gifts on the table, which he didn't open yet. The presents didn't stink and so he was lucky that there wasn't any fresh food in the presents.
"Well, that one came from Iruka" Tenten pointed towards a medium sized present.
"That came from a nice father and daughter" Tenten pointed to a book sized present "they said that they wanted to give their number one customer a get well gift" it was obvious who came by.
"This one came from a little bit of shy girl" the bun haired girl pointed to the small gift that looked like it could hold a jar in it "ran out the minute I opened the door"
"What about the big gift and the flowers?" Naruto said looking at both said gifts.
"Don't know. They were here the second day before I came in" said Tenten, grabbing one of the gifts "why don't you open them? Every day since the gifts came in you haven't even glanced at them"
"It's…weird, ya know" said Naruto "it's weird for me to get gifts" the blond looked out the window.
"You make it sound like you never got a present in your life" when she didn't get an answer from the boy Tenten almost dropped the present in her hands "no, you can't be serious"
"I live alone Ten-chan" Naruto's voice was distant "I'm…not well liked by the villagers. I don't know why" of course he knew. But there was no way he was gonna tell Tenten that.
"Naruto…" the girl reached out to grab his shoulder but stopped halfway when his depressed aura reached her. She looked down and tried to find the right words to say to her new friend.
The girl looked up to say something but got a shock when a menu like screen popped up in front of her. By the face Naruto was making, from what she could see through the transparent menu, he could see it too.
ATTENTION!
This is a menu that will show you what Power Ups you have and how much space you have left.
It will also give a brief explanation on how your Power Ups will affect you, physically or mentally.
Each Power Up has many sub sections to it, and it is up to you to explore them.
After a trial run we have deemed these new features functional and have finally added Power Ups to the system.
Finally, these menus will allow you to organise and read up on your skills
At the end of the message there was a symbol of an arrow pointing to the left. Reaching out, hesitantly, Tenten touched it and it brought her to a screen that displayed info on her and what abilities she had. At the bottom were four circles with question marks in it.
"That little…" Tenten looked up and saw Naruto gripping his sheet in anger. He was grinding his teeth and looked like he wanted to stab something.
"Naruto?" called Tenten, hitting a button that had a X on it (which read close underneath)
"She used me…" Naruto growled out, not paying attention to his visitor "She used me!" he shouted slamming his hands on the bed.
"Who?" asked Tenten climbing onto the bed "Naruto, what's going on?"
"I need some time alone…" Naruto said in a whisper "please Ten-chan" obviously there were more questions she wanted to ask but she respected the boy's wishes and got off the bed.
"I'll be outside waiting for you" said the bun haired girl closing the door behind her. Naruto didn't make a sound as Tenten left.
"-and under no circumstances is he allowed to use that power at full charge" said the doctor as he spoke to Tenten, who stood behind a wheelchair confined Naruto.
"Yes sir" said the two, showing they understood the order given. One was grumpy about it though.
"Alright" the doctor nodded his head "Naruto, you are not allowed to use your charka for at least a day longer, to be sure, so no training and DEFINITELY no sparing with your Power Ups. Do you understand?" the doctor gave said boy a pointed look, which got him a huff of annoyance.
"Yeah, yeah. Whatever" he grumbled making the doctor sigh.
"Please make sure he doesn't do something reckless will you?" he looked at Tenten, who nodded her head in understanding "and make sure he has a healthy lunch and supper today. So no ramen"
"You monster!" screamed Naruto. That got him a bonk on the head by his brown haired friend.
"No worries sir" said Tenten bowing her head. Before Naruto could tear the doctor a new one she grabbed the handles of the wheelchair and pushed the blond away from the hospital.
"That's so unfair" said Naruto crossing his arms and pouting like a little kid "who denies a person their right to good food?"
"Oh quiet whining" said Tenten bonking him on the head again "it just one day…actually you should have a more balanced diet"
"What do you mean? I have a balanced diet!" Naruto tried to defend himself.
"Having different flavours of Ramen doesn't count as a balance diet" countered Tenten making Naruto deflate "So I've decided" the girl announced with a smile.
"Decided what?" Naruto said with a fearful look on his face, he didn't need to look back to see Tenten was wearing an evil smile.
"That, from today onwards I will be coming by every day to check if you're eating right" she smirked at the back of Naruto's head, which had some comical beads of sweat running down it "which means your Ramen will be tossed out"
"NOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Naruto screamed with tears streaming down his cheeks. Tenten just gave a maniacal laugh as she pushed the blond boy down the street.
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