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When they walked through Diagon Alley nothing seemed to have changed, when they walked into Gringotts which surprisingly was very busy, they hadn't realised that all sorts of people were there to get money out for school stuff just before the new term. After a long wait they walked to the front of the line and requested to change £500 into wizarding money to the goblin who'd called himself Griphook. He stared at them and after checking that nobody was close enough to overhear asked, "are you sure that you don't want to get some money out of your vault, Mr and Mrs Potter?" After they just stared at him he continued, "no shape changers like animage, no potions, no magic, or Metamorphmagus, changes what we see nobody but the goblins can tell who you see you two so is it money from your vault or the changing of that money?" They continued to stare until James got over his shock and took the money off the counter placing it back into his wallet, he said "from the vault please Griphook and perhaps on the way down we could ask a few questions? We've been hiding from Voldermort for the last few months since our memories started to come back." The goblin just nodded and said in his medium toned robotic voice, "come!" They followed, once out of the room the goblin continued "ask now." So they did quickly, "Are Harry, Remus and Sirius alright? Do you know where they are? Where would we find Albus, Hogwarts still? What's happening with Voldermort?" The goblin frowned as he led them to one of the cart that would take them to their vault. "Your son will be at school and Remus as well tomorrow. Sirius I don't know due to him being a wanted murderer and all. Albus is likely at Hogwarts, waiting for the new term to start. Voldermort has disappeared and hasn't been seen since that Halloween when you were attacked. It is said that your son who bears a scar shaped like a lightning bolt is the boy who lived and that he will be the one to truly destroy him. Does that answer your questions?" they looked shocked but nodded and the goblin said, "we are here, get your money quickly we don't have much time." They hurried into the Vault filling their money bags, a few minutes after placing the key in and unlocking it they locked the door again.
The trip back up into the normal shop was spent in silence each pondering their next steps. They thanked the Goblin politely and left, going to their next stop which was to get robes that didn't remind them of that terrible night. They were unaware of people that were watching them curious to see who these people that were dresses like muggles were and how if they had a vault why they were dresses in muggle clothing the only solution people could come up with was that they were squibs but that changed when they went into, Madame Malkin's Robes For All Occasions, the curiosity increased with whispers among familys and friends.
They stood on the stools patiently as they were measured and colours were checked on their skin tones and other things. In the end after half an hour they were free to go with a set of robes each which they were going to wear out of the shop making them fit in more. Lily's were the same tone as her green eyes and James's were a soft gold emphasising his Gryffindor backround they also had black cloaks to keep them warm and so that they wouldn't stand out too much. There were other robes and clothes to be made in certain colours but they would take time and have to be delivered all of which James and Lily didn't mind. Before they slipped their wands into the special slot they charmed their muggle clothes to shrink enough that they would fit into their pockets unnoticed, this also made them lighter and easier to carry around. After insisting that the address was correct and assuring Madame Malkin that two days for the delivery of the robes was fine they left and moved on to their next stop. The stares had increased for now they looked like a very powerful wich and wizard and they looked like they had a lot of money.
They walked slowly down the street getting accustomed to wearing robes again as they walked to Flourish and Blotts. They looked around seeing how much had changed since their last trip into Diagon Alley. When they stepped into the store they noticed they were surrounded by books, there were twice as many as when they were last their while James went to get a copy of the Daily Prophet to catch up on the latest; Lily gazed around at the books looking at titles she smiled when she saw the first book she had read after receiving her Hogwarts letter, Hogwarts: A History. After looking around she found the parchment and quills and ink picking up a lot of each including ties for when they were sending owls. They met up in the centre as Lily was walking towards the counter James with the copy of the day's Daily Prophet and Lily with the rest. When they arrived James asked the old man who was serving them, "You wouldn't happen to have some older issues would you. You see we've been in hiding for a few years and haven't really paid any attention to what's been happening?" he was his usual charming self and although the man thought that they were mad they got around 800 copied of old newspapers not all consecutive just whatever didn't sell. They were surprised that there were so many.
The final stop was the Eeylops Owl Emporium, so that they could send letters again by owl. When they walked in they saw something unusual, it wasn't an owl but it flew right up to them from the top and landed on Lily's shoulder letting both of them pat it gently. They were both surprised to find what looked like an eagle but when looking at it they decided their search was over and they had their Eagle. After paying for it they carried their eagle in its cage out. There was nothing else that they were carrying due to shrinking everything else. After walking back down Diagon Alley and finding nowhere else they needed to go they left the alley via the Leakey cauldron then apparated back home with their prized Eagle.
Their home was exactly how they left it. They first thing they did was let the Eagle they had named Magmania after one of the first animagus. Then they enlarged the clothes changed out of the robes back into muggle clothes. They enlarged the ink, parchment and quills placing them aside for the meantime. Lastly they enlarged the copies of different daily Prophets and ordered them. They found that they had a lot of important days like the day after Voldermort disappeared.
They spent the next 3 days until the robes and other clothes arrived reading over the newspapers. When they got to the present time they were shocked at all that they had missed, and relieved because it explained why nobody had come after them after all Voldermort was said to be dead and the Death Eaters didn't seem to have acted without their master other than the torture of their friends Alice and Frank Longbottom which they felt furious about. There hadn't really been that much that had happened other than Voldermort trying to steal the Philosophers stone to bring him back to his former glory. The stone had been destroyed shortly after his failed attempt. The only other thing was the opening of the Chamber of Secrets which worried them with hearing that yet again Voldermort had tried to get his body back resulting in Harry fighting again, this time having to kill an ancient Basilisk that had once been Salazar Slytherins when he was alive. They were terrorfied for their son. They hadn't found anything about Moony and other than the fact that he had been convicted with the things that had been in the muggle newspaper Sirius hadn't been mentioned other than that he murdered Wormtail which even though they were worried about him spending 12 years in Azkaban they weren't surprised about considering he had given away their location to Voldermort.
It was the second of September when the robes arrived. They each had 4 sets all in different colours and then one set of dress robes. James's were red, gold, navy blue and black, his dress robes were the same green as Lily's eyes; While Lily's were navy blue, black, cream and gold. Her dress robes were also the colour of her eyes. Quickly they got dresses in the navy blue ones so that they wouldn't be mistaken for Death Eaters they didn't want to stick out too much. They didn't disguise their features and were shocked at how much James looked like his father. Lily's eyes stood out against the darkness of the robes. Before leaving they put their black cloaks on and after the cowls went over their head so their facial features couldn't really be seen, they apparated into Hogsmade. Hidden beneath their cloaks they walked into Howards un-hindered although they felt uneasy at how easy it was to get onto the grounds they didn't think about it.
I was just wondering what point of view you would prefer
First person is where you hear the story from one point of view so you hear one person's thoughts and they use personal pronouns (eg i...) When stories are in first person they usually change perspective so you can see what the other person is thinking
Eye of god is when you can hear everyone's thoughts. No pronouns are used and the characters are named all of the time it's like Remus said...while thinking...everyone else was wondering if he was going mad.
If you get the picture sorry if you already knew that. Anyway myself i prefer a mixture because it makes it interesting because you have to work out what the other characters are thinking by what that person which can influence emotions (also not give away too much) while then you have moments of clarity.
Ayway just say what you prefer in a review and i'll stick with whatever you readers want! If I get no reviews I will just assume that you like it how it is with luck in which it is at certain points.