Nightmares

by EightSevens

An AU where Keith has nightmare disorder (sleep anxiety disorder). After a series of nightmares involving Lance he becomes paranoid, and is eventually pushed into a very unwanted state of mind. Lance and Keith start to warm up to each other post-bonding moment. [Warning: If you have an active imagination and are sensitive to depressive thoughts or ideas of bloodshed/death.]

4. Discontinued

So, this is kind of obvious but this fanfiction isn't really working out too well. I've worked on other fanfictions while I waited for a spark for this story, but I just can seem to get anything down. Not only that, but also the other fanfictions I wrote happen to be doing better than this one and I feel like those stories I have the most fun writing. This klance fanfiction started off very strong. I did research and everything I could possibly need for a particular way a character reacts to things. I did all I could on the personality to make the characters feel as close to canon as possible. I tried as hard as I could to make this story something a lot of people would enjoy, but it doesn't seem like a lot of people enjoy this. There is a significant decrease in the amount of people that read each chapter, and that really bothers me. For the other stories, that decrease isn't as dramatic.

Basically, I'm thinking of discontinuing this story, since not just the people but I as well have lost interest in the story. If you think otherwise, then please let me know. Tell me what you think. What can I do to make this appeal to a bigger audience? What am I doing wrong?

Thank you for reading
-EightSevens