Author's notes
Hey guys thank you for the reviews and the advice. Like I said this is my first fanfic and I knew for sure this was not going to be picture perfect. I will post chapter 3 right now, but first I need to say something important. Honestly, I rushed chapter 3 so it might not be as well detailed as I would and what you guys would've liked and I'm truly sorry for that, but there's a reason for this. I decided that next chapter I will do a first person POV of Joseph during his death and learning about what he has become and his new powers. Chapter 4 will be the final time I go back in time to the past then back to the present. Sorry if that confused you guys I was trying to show you guys the memories of what he was before he turned and have it show at specific points in the story that build up to a certain point in the present. Now for the POV I want to try first person because I really want to focus on just Joseph's character. I want to show you what he feels, tastes, touches, sees, smells, all those five senses. I want to show you how he feels about the monster he has become and what he plans to do with himself. What he thinks about the other characters because they are now his food supply. What I'm basically trying to do is put you into the mind of a vampire, a blood thirsty monster, he knows he needs to kill and caribou is limited because that's the other characters main source of food supply. If he doesn't feed he will die. The question is who will Joseph kill? Who will he spare? Will he hide his true nature? Or show it to the world? Will he find love? Or will he isolate himself from the rest of the world? This is my plan let me know what you think of first person POV of Joseph when chapter 4 comes out and if you want me to stick with it or just do what I was doing before and try to make it better. Or I could do first person POV of view for other characters as well if you want me to do that. Thanks for taking the time to read this and I'll see y'all later.