Chapter 4
Over Reacting
When Loren woke up in the morning she saw that Eddie was sleeping next to her. Loren was scared out of her mind why she was laying in bed with Eddie Loren forgot all about last nite, until she saw that she was naked and so was Eddie. Loren got really scared beacuse she was no longer a virgin. She got up and put he panties on and toook one of Eddie's shirts out of his drore. Loren was clamer beeacuse she knew she loved Eddie even though she just meet him yesterday. She wrote a note, and put it on Eddies nite stand next to his bed. Loren walked down staris and started making some breakfast. About 10 minutes later Loren heard Eddie coming down stairs. When loren Looked at his face he was furious.
Loren: Eddie are you ok?
Loren said kind of scared.
Eddie: What The Hell Are You Still Doing Here!
Loren: I-I..
Eddie: Get Your Stuff, Take My Shirt Off, and Get the Fuck Out Of My House!
Loren was now crying all over
Loren: b-but we m-made love a-and t-this is h-how you treat m-me
Eddie: OH Stop Your BullShit! NOw Get Your Stuff And Get Out Of My House! NOW!
Loren ran upstairs and grabed all of her stuff put on some clothes and took Eddies shirt off and put it on his bed. She got her stuff and ran down stairs. She saw That Eddie was on his couch drinking some whiskey.
Loren: I HOPE YOUR HAPPY! NOW I KNOW THAT ALL MEN DO IS USE WOMAN AND LEAVE THEM!
Eddie: What?!
Loren: YOU HEARD ME YOU ARE A SELF-LESS BASTERED I THOUGH YOU WERE DIFFERENT!
Eddie: OH Boo Hoo
Loren: FUCK YOU!
Eddie : Don't Talk To Me Lke That In My Own House!
Loren: WELL YOU KNOW WHAT EDDIE DURAN! I DON"T CARE ANYMORE! I MEET YOU YESTERDAY AND YOU TOOK MY VIRGINITY! I NOW KNOW THAT YOU JUST USED ME AND A LOT OF OTHER PEOPLE!
Eddie: Whatever!
Loren: i swear your going to hear on the new that you pushed a woman into suisde and ill leave a note by my body saying you were the one that pushed me to this!
Eddie: What I Pushed You To Do It?!
Loren: Ya like everyone in my life. goodbye!
With That Loren left full of anger. She called a cab to take her to her house. When she got there she ran inside and took out a bin under her bed. It had a pistol inside. She picked it up and took it with her. Loren ran out of the house and got in her can.
Meanwhile at Eddie's
Eddie went up to his bedroom to call his dad, he went to gethis phone off his nite stand when he saw a note. He picked it upp and saw that loren wrote it. He opened it up and read it.
~ Eddie
Hey Eddie i had fun last nite! I really hope you don't regret it. I didn't. Well i know i just meet you, but i think i'm fallin for you. I know i told you yesterday that my dad left when i was 4 but i'm hoping you won't leave like he did. but knowing this was all just a sper of the moment, you probaly will leave me. Well i don't know but i'm making you breakfast.
~ Loren P.S this is kind of hard to say but it's true, Eddie i love you.
Eddie realized what he just did. He put some clothes on and ran out the door to his spot hoping Loren would be there. After about 20 minutes he got there and heard Loren signing
Once upon a time a few mistakes ago And he's long gone when he's next to me 'Cause I knew you were trouble when you walked in No apologies, he'll never see you cry He was long gone when he met me I knew you were trouble when you walked in And the saddest fear comes creeping in I knew you were trouble when you walked in I knew you were trouble when you walked in
I was in your sights, you got me alone
You found me, you found me, you found me
I guess you didn't care, and I guess I liked that
And when I fell hard you took a step back
Without me, without me, without me
And I realize the blame is on me
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
'Til you put me down, oh
I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
Now I'm lying on the cold hard ground
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
Pretend he doesn't know that he's the reason why
You're drowning, you're drowning, you're drowning
Now I heard you moved on from whispers on the street
A new notch in your belt is all I'll ever be
And now I see, now I see, now I see
And I realize the joke is on me, yeah!
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
'Til you put me down, oh
I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
Now I'm lying on the cold hard ground
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
That you never loved me or her, or anyone, or anything, yeah
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
'Til you put me down, oh
I knew you were trouble when you walked in
So shame on me now
Flew me to places I'd never been
Now I'm lying on the cold hard ground
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
Oh, oh, trouble, trouble, trouble
Trouble, trouble, trouble
I knew you were trouble when you walked in
Trouble, trouble, trouble
Loren feel to the ground right after singing she pulled out the pistol from her pures and sat it next to her. All Eddie could do was stand there. Loren fell to her side, and srtialed up crying into her her knees. Eddie walked up behind her.
Eddie: Loren I-I
Loren: What are you doing here!
Eddie: i got your note.
Loren: oh wonderful me * sacasticly *
Eddie: Loren i'm soo sorry i over reacted.
Loren: over what. over knowing you had sex with some girl you just met then getting mad knowing it was the biggest maistake slleping with her.
Eddie: no no you not just some girl.
Loren: * crying hystaricaly * Then why do i feel like it i meet you yesterday and we had sex. i Barly know you. I would rather die right now beacuse i thought we had something but then you went ballistic.
Eddie: Loren i'm sorry.
Loren: Eddie sorry dosen't even cut it. it made me feel lie ll men were just like my dad that they were going to leave me after they got what they wanted. You made me feel like the only reason you even talked to me was to just get in my pants.
Eddie: no no no Lor-
Loren: Stop With The Lyes!
Eddie: What?
Loren: You Heard Me I Know That For A Fact That You Just Used Me!
Eddie: i would never.
Eddie wen't to hug Loren but she pushed him away
Loren: Don't You Come Near Me!
Eddie: Lo i love you
Loren: oh sure there you go again trying to get in my pants!
Eddie: I'm Not Trying To Get In Your Pants!
Loren: then what do you want from me?!
Eddie: to have you as my girlfriend
Loren: no Eddie after what you did earler i felt like i wanted to die. Because of that i hate you.
at that moment Eddies heart was shatered into a million peaces.
Loren: please understand.
Eddie: oh i do. Now if you excuse me i need to die in a hole.
Eddie got up
Loren: what?
Eddie turned around and had tears streming down his face
Loren: Eddie i'm soo sorry i didn't know i hurt you.
Eddie: well ya. So n-now you k-know that E-Eddie Duran i-is a big c-cry baby
Loren got up and huged Eddie
Loren: no no your not Eddie. It's ok to let your tears out thats what i've never done so thats why it hurt so bad and mad me want to kill my-self.
Eddie: Loren i love you
Loren: Eddie i love you too.
Eddie: do you wan't to go for a walk in the park?
loren: ya i would love too!
Loren and eddie left for a walk in the park when Loren saw someone she never wanted to see again
Sooo how'd you like it? the song was " I knew you were trouble" by taylor swift.
PEACE!