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KIM POV
I felt like I was dreaming, I mean, besides the fact that I actually was. I was floating. Looking down at everything as it happened. See? There's my body, and there's Jack. Wait, what's he doing here? He's fighting someone. Who is that? Is that… ANOTHER JACK? What's going on? Why are there two Jacks… he never told me he had a twin. I thought we were best friends, even more. and he never told me he had a twin brother? Omg… that fight does not look good. I can't even describe it. But it's definatly not brotherly fighting. It's more… I'm going to kill you if I win fighting. I have to wake up. Wake up. Wake Up. WAKE UP!
I tried to sit up, but my hands were tied behind my back. Meanwhile, Jack and… Jack are still fighting. I couldn't even tell the difference between the two. It looked like they both had the same amount of karate skill. One of the Jacks kicked the other in the head, making him loose focus. Then he punched him multiple times, sending him backwards. To finish him off, that same Jack flipped and then kicked him in the stomach, causing him to fly backwards into a tree. He looked unconscious. The Jack who was still standing came over to me. His eyes were so cold, if I looked in them long enough, I would freeze. His hair stuck to his forhead in sweaty clumps. Something about him was off. It wasn't something see-able… he was just different, and not in a good way.
I think this was the wrong Jack. And I don't know what's going to happen to the right Jack, or me.
I woke up and I was in a dark room. There was enough light for me to see, but just barely. I couldn't tell where I was, or what time of day it was. I didn't know how long I'd be here.
JACK POV
(By the way, when it's in Jack pov, it's the good Jack. If I wanted it in the other Jack's pov, I'll say evil jack pov. Ok?)
I woke up against a tree. Literally. My head hurt like hell, and as I tried to stand up, a wave of dizziness came over me and I fell back down. I took a deep breath. 'You're doing this for Kim' I thought. I struggled to stand and keep my balance. The world was spinning around me, or I was seeing double. Probably the latter. I took several deep breaths to get my head cleared. This all took very few seconds, and I had an audience of rabbits to watch me. Yay?
I took step after step, following the footsteps of the other me, following to get the person that matters to me the most. Kim. And nothing, I mean NOTHING will stand in the way of me getting to her.
Well that. Was chapter 4. Hope you liked it… if you did, tell me. If you didn't, tell me. I know it was kinda short… I was going to make it longer, but this seemed like a nice place to stop the chapter. And I still don't know what I'm doing with the rest of the story. I might start another story, so if you hve any ideas what it should be about, tell me please! I love your input!