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The Prince grabs a black cloak that will allow him to blend in the shadows and darkness. With everyone in the kingdom sleeping believing it was a nightmare, the Prince quietly walks to the church, finding the nun praying.
I can't let her see me! I have to hide!
Once the nun is gone, she opens the door to a hallway, illuminated with torches. The Prince follows her without making a sound. While hiding, the mirror reveals another message:
Follow the nun to her study room. There, find a book that contains her entries. Don't let her see you!
Hiding in the corner of the dark hallway, the teal-haired nun walks out of her study room, tired and sleepy. She walks further into the hallway, and then turn left where the exit door is at. Once she's gone, the Prince finds her study room opened with documents and books all over the place.
There's so many books and crap! How do I know which one?
The mirror reveals the rose that lost its second petal, and then it reveals another message:
Find the book as red as blood.
Digging through all the books, none of them are red. He then checks the shelf and finally found the red book. Turning the pages, he found the most recent entry when he met Luka:
"…the girl known as Luka came to our kingdom. Oh how she was beautiful! Charming everyone with her beauty and even touched the Prince's heart! It makes me jealous. I know the Prince for a long time. I've been in love with him ever since we met as children. But Luka stole his heart; she was nothing but a stranger the Prince didn't even know! Oh how it hurts my heart! As I pray, I started to believe that this woman is a witch. Then I had a plan: because of the way she charms people, this would be a great opportunity to me to tell everyone and the Prince that she was a witch using black magic to make people like her and even making the Prince fall in love with her…
But alas, before the fire of justice could burn her to death, unknown to me, she started to sprout black angel wing. Those wings well me that she is in despair. As she sore back to heaven, I was glad that she was gone for good and I can finally have the chance to be with the Prince…
In the next page:
…suddenly, the Enchantress of Heaven arrived on the day after attempting to burn Luka to death. I fear her more than anything else. She was greater than god! She was greater than any being in the universe! When she mentioned about Luka, there was nothing I can do to stop her from allowing the Prince to uncover the truth. No matter how I try to destroy the statue of Luka, that barrier will not allow me to do so. The townspeople tried to escape, but no avail….
There has to be another way to end the curse… I'm still planning…"
That bitch! This can't be true! Why the hell would the nun do something sinful? Thought began to race in his mind in confusion.
The mirror reveals another message:
Everything that the nun wrote is true. Things are not always of what they seem. Take the book with you and go back to the castle, in your room. I have something to show you, but hurry! The rose has already lost three more of its petals!
Nobody likes bitchy girls.