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Plz tell me if you find any mistakes o.o(I know I make a lot of grammar)
PLZ can I have more reviews -.-''' tell me what I should improve on as well(not the grammar b/c I know that already)
ANIME/MANGA DOES NOT BELONG TO ME IT BELONGS TO ARINA TANEMURA
plz review on this:
also this is from the manga mostly as well
right now, I'm just typing it as ideas pop in my head. Idk the ending yet. I know a general idea but it's going to be rough
Chapter 4
"Mitsuki!!!" Meroko shouted. Her pink hair was pull back. "Mitsuki." Meroko shouted again.
"Mi-ki." Izumi calmly said over the shouting Meroko. Shaking her, Izumi sigh. She was sleeping in and she can't do that today. "Mi-ki. You're going to be late today. You can't be late or Masami will be mad." Mitsuki open her eyes. The bright light made her close her eyes again. Sitting up, she blink a few times to be more awake. Looking at the time, she quickly got up and change. Running out, she said good morning her grandmother.
"Meroko. Izumi. Why didn't you wake me up?" Mitsuki ask.
"We did." Meroko scoff. "You didn't wake up." Running into the rehearsal room to see Takuto only.
"Eh. Good morning Takuto." Mitsuki smile. Looking at her watch to see she was bit early since she ran instead of walking. "How are you today?" Sitting next to him to see Nana wasn't here. Remembering that she had school, Mitsuki felt odd without her here. Feeling a little odd today as well, her head throb of a headache since that morning. Waking up even later than usually was not normal.
"Morning Mitsuki." Takuto answer back. Noticing again the key chain of the rabbit and dog. "Where did you get them? I have one that looks like it's handmade. But it's a cat." Takuto asks. Mitsuki looked at the cat key chain. The very one she made for Meroko and Takuto at first. She made one for Izumi later on.
"I made them." Mitsuki answer him.
"Does it have anything to do what I don't remember?" Takuto ask. He's been studying her. Even if the girl look like 'that' girl he had in the 'dreams'
"Like I said. I won't be helping you for that." Mitsuki said. She did wanted to help but what was the point of loving someone if they don't even remember that they love them.
"Mitsuki. I've been wondering why you won't tell him?." Meroko ask. Mitsuki look at the angels.
"It's because I want him to find out. Not me, if I do that there's no point of him remembering me. I be just a other girl to him." Mitsuki responded. Meroko didn't understand that. If Izumi had forgotten about her, she would try to do anything for him to remember her. Mitsuki smile at Meroko. Mitsuki knew Meroko wouldn't understand.
Looking at Takuto, Mitsuki really wanted him to remember. Biting her lip, she place a mark. If he doesn't remember in a year and a half, I will give on him. I hope..... Mitsuki thought(don't worry...happy ending still) Getting up she got a cup of water. Placing her hand on her forehead to see it was burning. Ignoring it, pushing it back in head saying it was in imagination.
"What's wrong Mitsuki?" Takuto ask once he notice how pale she looked. "Are you sick? If you are you should be at home resting."
"I'm fine. I'm just a little tired from just waking up." Mitsuki lied. Even so, she wouldn't go back home no matter what. Tonight is the night of the live concert. She has to put in her best effort despite of her fever. Takuto looked at Mitsuki with care in his eyes. Letting out a heavy sigh he just played along with her.
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"Okay Mitsuki. You will be entering first on this side instead of that side." The director said. "Takuto will follow you after the second song. The order is Eternal Snow, then Myself with Takuto." He explain. Mitsuki nodded understanding everything. Yet it felt like she can't process what was going on. Only slowly. It took Masami a few seconds to get her attention. Unlike her, Mitsuki usually respond on the first call. With a wave of a hand, the sound check began.
Five, four, three, two....Mitsuki ran onto the stage toward the screaming crowd. Wanting to pull her hands to her ears to hid the sound, but went against it. Forcing a smile, she wanted for the cheering to stop. Even so, they soon die down.
"How are is everyone tonight? I'm happy to see with Route:L singer Kira Takuto." Mitsuki began. The crowd chair the responds. "Well, great." Mitsuki laugh. "Okay, lets start the concert." With a gust of wind, her hair sway above her as the music started.
Kimi wo suki ni natte Dorekurai tatsu no kana
Kimochi Fukurande yuku bakari de
Kimi wa Kono omoi kidzuiteiru no kana
Ichido mo kotoba ni wa Shitenai kedo
Mitsuki smile to herself. Yes this song does make sense with Eichi and Takuto. Singing with all her heart she started to move around the stage. Without care, she started to sing with more emotion. Wanting her song to reach out to everyone in front of her. Masami, Meroko, Izumi, her fans, the directors, Eichi...and Takuto.
Yuki no youni Tada shizukani
Furitsumori Tsudzukete yuku
Suddenly she felt like she was drained of strength. Holding onto it, not wanting to faint. Looking toward her fans to see some of them singing along. Smiling more, the song ended as the lights faded. They slowly dim back. The crowd cheer for the performance.
"Thank you. Now for Route:L Kira Takuto." Mitsuki shouted into the mic. Takuto walk onto the stage as the girls cheer for him. "How are you Takuto? This is one of your first live concert every since you woken up correct?" Takuto nodded.
"But this will be your first concert duet as well. Why don't we cut to the chase and sing Myself?" Takuto smile at the crowd. Mitsuki nodded. Takuto walk over to her and move the mic away. "Are you okay? You look really sick and tired. Why don't we have a rest after this?" He lower his voice. Mitsuki looked into Takuto's blue eyes. Looking away she remember the day she last saw them before he forgotten about her.
"I'm fine." Mitsuki responded. "Don't worry about me." Mitsuki looked at him sadly. "Until you remember those times." Mitsuki wonder why she made these songs in the first place. Knowing it was to reach Eichi, she didn't know what to do with them now. But show them to the world her songs.
doushite doushite suki nan darou
konna ni namida afureteru
Mitsuki looked over to Takuto. They never did rehearse properly. Fooling around, having fun till they had to start the song over again. Stepping forward toward the middle in the front.
ano koro wa ushinau mono ga
oosugite nani mo utaenakatta
Without a second thought Takuto came in with Mitsuki. The same verse they always stop at.
sukoshi hanareta basho
soko ga watashi no ibasho datta
Both of them looked at each other. Stepping toward each other than back.
kimi no hitomi no oku ni ano hi samishisa o mitsuketa
futari niteru no kana fuu
Looking out to the side, their arm reach out to each other. Mitsuki looked down as the lights shone on Takuto.
kitsukeba itsu mo tonari ni ite kureta
Mitsuki looked up again as the light shone on her. Tears could be seen. Some wonder if it was real or fake. But even so they loved it. Picking up her mic as well, the duet started again. Takuto's deep voice went hand to hand with Mitsuki's voice.
doushite konna ni suki nan darou
kimi no koe kanashii hodo hibiiteru yoima made nani ga sasae datta ka
tooku hanarete wakatta yo
Closing her eyes, she open to see Takuto was smiling. He was having fun, like how they were in rehearsal.
naki nagara sagashi tsuzuketa maigo no kodomo no you ni
kedo soko ni wa eien nante aru wake nakute
Takuto took the rest as Mitsuki drew back into the shadows again. Looking at Takuto, wondering this is how he see's her when she was singing back then. Singing and far away from reach. The duet was beautiful. Both of them can see that. But both of them are wondering is this how they both are. Mitsuki knew the answer, but kept quiet as they switch off. Coming to the last line, Mitsuki cut off as Takuto began. Takuto looked at Mitsuki. This was a duet line. Yet she wasn't singing.
doushite kimi wo suki ni nattan darou
kantan sugite kotae ni naranai
Before Takuto knew what was happening after the song, Mitsuki fell down. Her face was red. Breathing heavily. "Mitsuki!!" Takuto ran over to Mitsuki. She was unconscious. Moving his hand to touch her forehead, before he touched it, he knew she had a fever. Picking her up, he nodded off the Madoka. She was a surprise guest star.
"Madoka..." Madoka looked at Takuto then to Mitsuki.
"Man this girl cause so much trouble." Madoka sigh. Looking at Takuto again she walk onto the stage. _____________________________________________________________________________
Takuto place her onto the couch. Mitsuki was sleeping soundly even though she had a fever. Letting go of her arm, she reach out. Her face show fear, fear of letting go of him. Takuto sigh. Picking her up again, he carry her to the kitchen. Opening the cabinet, he grab some medicine. Helping her to eat the medicine, Mitsuki didn't seem to notice anything.
"Hey Mitsuki." Meroko shouted into her ears. Izumi tug Meroko. Looking at Izumi he shook his head.
"Let her sleep. She needs rest." Izumi explain. Meroko sigh. Fading up into the roof. Izumi followed.
Takuto sat down onto the couch. Looking at Mitsuki she was like a little kid. She wouldn't let go no matter what. Even trying to let go of her, she grasp it without thinking. Takuto check her fever again to see it was the same still. He knew something was wrong with her yet he didn't stop her from doing this. His eyes widen when he realize that he was actually worry of her. Sure he was worry that she will be sick but not as worry as someone truly cares for her.
"Mitsuki." Takuto call out to her. Mitsuki didn't seem to respond to him. Takuto place his hand onto her. Somehow he felt like he could be with her forever. His heart pound whenever he see's her. Could it be that he loved her and forgotten? Shaking that thought away he laugh. He was getting the reality and dream world messed up. Freezing in his tract, it could be possible though. There was on way to find out. Get it through Mitsuki.
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the longest chapter I have written ever in all my fanfictions. I just kept on typing -.-...this could've been two chapters o.o??
Anyways off topic thing
I LOVE THIS NEW anime that I found a few weeks before my b-day(which was in April) and I love it...it's 07-Ghost...Read the manga and watch the anime plz..and tell me what you think in the next chapter review ^^
PLZ review....review review review review plz plz plz plz plz
IMPORTANT!!!!!!!!!!
Also can you give me some tips of what I should do with how I should do it
1-should I do a three(or so) month(maybe a year now to think of it.....but I think that's too long) skip after this-might make this fanfiction shorter but I doubt it
2-Takuto leaves and don't talk to mitsuki for a while
3- Mitsuki leaves Takuto and go on a journey as a singer around the world(-.-''' very bad idea but it's one of them)
4-None of the above and an idea from you with your permission to you it
just give me one or two(more would be great but I'm thankful for all the reviews ppl give me still) on this...since I want to know how the story would be going. I'm on a road block right now. -.-'''''
Preview-------------------------------------------------the three ideas up there will change it a little. The first choice will have this in the chapter(not word to word)
Takuto pin Mitsuki down.
"Tell me. Why won't you tell me? It is something bad? Is it important to you only?" Takuto asked. Mitsuki sigh. Impatient as ever.
"It's important to me that you learn it yourself." Mitsuki answer. Looking at Izumi and Meroko they nodded. "The time I spent together with you were fun. Not just know but before as well. But I don't think it's would be in your real body. That is your hint. I give you a year. If you don't answer me than, I would give up on you."
"Huh? Give up on me?" Takuto ask not understanding the clue. Mitsuki smile.
"Once you remember, you will understand." Mitsuki left the room to go back onto the stage.
"Wait your fever." Mitsuki smiled
"Thank you for taking care of me."
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thks again and plz help me choose from the idea above !
Also I have exams coming up so I might be late. Also I have a anime convention I'm going to...so.....well it's a three day so you won't be hearing me probably in....well I have three weeks to finals....so I might type a chapter (if you place a review on the ideas) before review(after next week) of finals..........URGG I got to study TT^TT i don't remember anything of history and science of the beginning of the year....