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Snowcrystal of Thunderclan
Maybe.
Whoo whoo! All aboard the shipper train!
Leafkit is one of the sick ones.
You ARE AWESOME! Am I being too enthusiastic?
Hehehe…
Onto:
Closed Ears And Silent Whispers
Chapter 4
It had been two moons since Oakfur disappeared, and the sick cats were slowly recovering Bluetip had passed away from the unknown sickness and Mosspaw and Longfur had grieved for her. Longfur had stepped down from deputy so he could grieve and Orangewisker had become the deputy.
Mosspaw was half a moon away from becoming a warrior and was doing her final assessment a fight against, the deputy, Orangewisker who was training Flamepaw, Leafkit's sister. Sadly Leafkit couldn't become an apprentice because the sickness had struck him quite badly. Flamepaw and Silverpaw had become apprentices a quarter of a moon ago, Orangewisker is training Flamepaw, and Silverpaw became the medicine cat apprentice to Bearclaw.
"Come on Mosspaw! You can do better than that!" Greentail called from the sidelines.
"GO MOSSPAW!" Flamepaw shouted in encouragement.
Mosspaw ducted when Orangewisker swiped at her and then he jumped on top of her. Mosspaw relaxed her muscles to make Orangewisker think he had won, Mosspaw quickly jumped up to knock him off and then pounced on him to signal she had won.
"Well done Mosspaw," Greentail said, "I'll go speak with Lightstar."
"Amazing job Mosspaw!" Flamepaw said, "Do you want to hunt later?"
Mosspaw nodded in agreement, Flamepaw and her had become friends quite quickly and Flamepaw was an amazing hunter.
Half a moon had passed since Mosspaw's assessment and she was about to become a warrior, "All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here under Tallstick!" Lightstar called, "Today I shall be performing one of my favorite ceremonies, making a new warrior! Mosspaw please step forward!" Mosspaw shakily stepped forward towards Lightstar, "This apprentice has finished her warrior training and now will become a warrior! Mosspaw do you promise to sacrifice your life to protect the clan?" Mosspaw nodded, "Then here on out you shall be known as Mossheart! May you excellent hunting skills and swift and silent movements help Mothclan in the future!"
"Mossheart! Mossheart! Mossheart!" The clan cheered.
"WAIT!" A ginger tom yelled.
One of my shorter chapters.
Question time!
Do you like Mossheart's warrior name?
Who do you think is the ginger tom?
Do you have ideas for Silverpaw's Medicine Cat name and Flamepaw's warrior name?
Who do you ship Mossheart with?
Am I being too enthusiastic?
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Bye!
Dawnshade was here.