HORRAH! The first hate comment and criticism. Look I'll be honest, I really don't care about those kinds of reviews anymore mainly cause no one wins. I mean all you do is go on a rant on why something you don't like and list reasons on why it is a bad thing. Plus any readers who hate the story, i'm going to say one thing. Don't read it. If you don't like it then go to someone else's story. Why you take the time to criticize me i have no idea. Also just because a description of a character is too long and time wasting to you and you feel the need to get to the point, I did it because I wanted an imagery in readers so the imagination makes a scenario of it in their minds, plus its boring if its just a character with no definition in their own detail. This is my first time responding like this to a review, mainly because to just say what I think about people who rag on others work. Its called fanfiction for a reason after all. Unleashing your imagination. Sorry if everyone is offended by anything I say. I'm not trying to piss people off and if I do I'm sorry. Its not my intention to. Well anyway see ya guys I'll get back to making the next chapter for you all.
Bye~