Ok, just to give you some notice, I'm going to take this story down and start over… kind of map it out and edit, and I promise it will be reposted by Christmas at least. But the flow is a little screwed up, and hopefully I can just write it all at once and then post in order. If anyone has a huge problem with this let me know. It may even have a title! But I'm leaving this here cause I don't want to lose all your reviews- thanks for those! If anyone has plot suggestions or title suggestions or anything, let me know on the reviews page!
And by the way, in response to Claire, thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the flow of the story. I'm doing this for me, though. I know where I want the story to end, but I'm having trouble getting it there, so I think I need to take it down and just line everything up so it can make sense to me and I can actually finish it. (hopefully.) So I'll try and get it up quickly, but no promises because I start school Monday. :barfs:
Thanks to everyone who's read or reviewed!
