hey heres ch 4 hope you enjoy i know its short but the next chapter will be longer i promise im typing it right now and its going to take me a while, and i took the poll down because nobody voted and i needed to make a choose so enjoy and review


The school was sitting in the middle of two huge mountains, a waterfall and a river. How more secure could it get? But that wasn't the thing that caught my attention. The school didn't look like Gallagher, it was all black with barbwire fences and guard towers that looked like they weren't being used. All put together it looked like a prison.

"Gallagher has its cover and Blackthorne has its cover Ms. Morgan. Gallagher just got the better end of the deal. Mr. Solomon says from behind me.

"So what's there cover a jail?" I asked

"A school for troubled young men or in other words a detention center," Mr. Solomon states. "Ok Ms. Morgan Blackthorne started school 4 hours ago so you will not be starting classes until tomorrow. I will be here until then but after that you are on your own. We will go in in a minute when they leave for classes so you won't be seen."

"How come you can be seen but I can't?" I asked

"I never said that Ms. Morgan." He said

"I read between the lines." I stated

"Very good." He paused "I am an alumnus, and I come here on my time off to mentor a student." He said.

"Oh so when are we going in?" I asked

"In a minute when they leave for class," he answered

"But why would we go then when everybody would be in the halls?" I asked

"Cameron you are a pavement artist you should be able to pull it off." He stated "But we won't find out if you can do it today. The class they will be going to is a mile and a half behind the school." he said relieving me of my worries. "Let's get inside the van so when the boys come out they won't see you." Mr. Solomon said and I did as I was told.

Once the boys left and where out of site we got out of the van and I got my bag from the back. We walked inside and the appearance matched the one from the outside. Everything was one of three colors black, gray, or white. Mr. Solomon should me to Dr. Steve's office and we wnt inside.

"You will not be getting your own room here. You will be sharing one with the boys. But you will not be sleeping there tonight because of obvious reasons. You will stay in this office until breakfast tomorrow."

"Who will I be rooming with?" I asked

"You will have to wait and see." He paused. "I would make yourself comfortable and get some sleep, breakfast is at 6 am and school ends at 6pm." Mr. Solomon continues. "I realize that they are long hours, but in this business nobody sleeps." Mr. Solomon turned to leave and before he walked out the door he said. "Tomorrow wear something you would pick, not something Macey would pick."


hope you liked it. im not going to be able to upadate this weekend because i have a tournement for softball in Dracut which is like an hour and half away from where i live so i might try to update again later today but like i said before it a long chapter and its going to take a while to type. oh and another thing i like it when i get review that criticize my writing it makes me better so don't be aftaid to write a review that is mean because it motivates me to be better.

~mcsweneey