I noticed that a gust reviewed ch.1 and said they had an OC, if your a gust and you have an OC you would like to submit just put it's bio in the review, I read them all. Also special thanks to Dante Watterson for helping me with the this chapter and for his OC Soren Spessartite, who will appear in this ch. Also as always If there is anything that you want to suggest including OC's I will read and most likely respond to you or respond to the comment in my notes before or after the story. Reviews and constructive criticism is allowed and encouraged. By the way I just saw the grammar errors in ch. 3, sorry. :(
Chapter 4: Shadow wake up
(Lapis's prov)
( wait he was the boy I saved from the water? No way, well I guess that explains why I thought he looked familiar.) " so he was the boy I saved from drowning. But why is he here only in time for him to get hurt again." Lapis said aloud on accident.
(Pearl's prov)
"Well Lapis I have three questions for you. One why would you save this human, you don't even like humans? Two how did Jasper get away after three years? And finally why didn't you help in the fight? Pearl asked curios about the first two and angry about the last one. "I was wondering that as well?" Garnet said agreeing with Pearl
(Lapis's prov)
"Umm... well I saw him save all of those people and then they wouldn't let him on, I couldn't let him die for being kindhearted and wanting to save others lives." Lapis answered the other gems truthfully. "Jasper Broke her restraints and attacked me from behind nearly shattering my gem"Lapis said as she turns around showing her gem to them, "this is also why I didn't fight.". Steven walks up to Lapis and uses his healing power to fix her gem. "Thank you Steven" is what she said before the warp portal activated.
[ok I have no idea how to describe this OC without using the bio, so here is Soren Spessartite's bio.
Name: Soren SpessartiteAge: Precisely the same age as the Crystal Gems, but he looks like a seventeen year oldGender: MaleHeight: 6'5Skin Tone: Fire (Red, Orange and Yellow)Hair Color: Fire (Dark Blue, Sky Blue and Blue)Hair Style: Messy with a bang covering his left eyeOutfit: Wears blue jeans that start from his waist to his ankles, blue and red shoes, and a reddish orange shirt with two stars on his short sleeves.Gem: SpessartiteGem Locations: Top of his tongueGem Color: Blue and Red FireWeapon: It's a Sword and a BladeHomeWorld or Kindergarden: HomeworldPersonality: Loyal, Honest, and sometimes angered or annoyed bye any-gem that is yelling or bossing him around, except for the Crystal Gems and humans.Hobbies/Talents: He likes to help People and Good Gems that are like the Crystal Gems.Abilities: He can breath red fire and shoot blue fire from his palms.Relationship: Amethyst.Head cannons for my Oc: He absolutely hates his Homeland because of every-gem telling him what to do and not to do. After using a escape pod to Earth he lands on the right side of a beach and meets up with one of the Crystal Gems know as Amethyst who's really fond of his colors, and decided to show him around Beach City. After Amethyst introduced Spessartite to the Crystal Gems they gladly accepted him as one of them.
Just so you know I altered his hair when it was sent to me it said his one eye I changed it to left eye, for clarification. I got permission to change the cloths.]
( Soren's prov)
"Hey Amethyst, I'm back. Are you ready for the double date with Steven and Connie?"He asked. But to his surprise there was someone else next to her and the rest of of the gems.He then asked " What did I miss?" while moving his hair a little to get it out of his face. Soon after Amethyst goes outside and explains what is going on.
( Shadow's prov)
"Aww what happened?" Shadow asked as he woke up. The first response was from some gem he had not yet met, "I'm Soren, and why do you have a gem in your chest" Said the new gem. All of the others walk in and stare waiting for an answer.
Ok so I know this chapter wasn't eventful but I still hope you enjoyed it. The next ch. Will have a good fight in it. No spoilers
