I tried my best to make the characters be themselves. So I read one of the books. I also tried adding detail. Tell me if I added any good to the story.

Will's P.O.V

We all looked at Gilan's almost dead body. It had a bunch of cuts on his back. Bruises all over his legs. And one big cut on his chest. Halt got his medical kit, and started getting to work.

He first cleaned the wound with alcohol. Then he wrapped/covered the cuts with bandages. Gilan slowly got up. He groaned, and fell back down again.

Halt said, "Gilan isn't going to be playing anymore." Gee what makes you say that? "I'll take Gilan's turn, Will Truth or Dare?"

I said, "Dare." Halt said, "I dare you not to ask me any questions." I said, "I'm probably going to lose that, Horace, Truth or dare?"

He said, "Truth." I asked, "Where you EVER in love with Jenny?" Horace said, "Yes, but that was before I met Evanlyn." Evanlyn smiled.

She said, "Thank you sweetie." (I just read book 10 and they got married at the end.) Horace asked, "Halt Truth or dare?" Halt said, "Dare." Horace said, "I dare you to go on a boat as soon as possible for a entire day." Halt paled. He just took off his cloak. Speaking of ships. We heard some snapping of branches, stomping, and some sneezing.

We then saw a big man emerge from the woods. He had a hat with horns on it, and a battle-ax. All of us (but Halt) yelled/asked, "Gundar?" Halt was not so delighted. Because a Skanadian meant there was a ship near by.

Gundar said, "Hello everybody. The Obearjarl gave me the week off. What are you doing?" Horace quickly explained what was going on. Gundar said, "I'd like to join. So whose turn is it? By the way, creative game General." Horace nodded to the acknowledgement. Halt said, "It's my turn ,Gundar Truth or dare?"

He said, "Dare. I ain't chicken." Halt said, "I dare you to ride a hoarse." Gundar said, "Fine". He then jumped on Abelard. Halt said in panic," No not my hoarse (I think it is his hoarse)! It was too late. Abelard just kinda collapsed. Gundar said, "Oh well, General Truth or dare?"

I dare you to review.