Here is chapter 4!
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4: Burning
BPOV
I was making the popcorn and Jacob was getting the movie. All the other wolves were on the couch waiting.
While I waited for the popcorn I decided to clean my gun. It was so beautiful. English, made in the 70's. It was oak wood and long barreled.
I loved it. It was dangerous, I couldn't use it at all, it hurt me and Jacob laughed at me constantly while I used it, but it was wonderful.
All of the wolves screamed and grabbed their noses, screaming blood suckers!
I was caught off guard and my gun slipped. The safety lock bumped my shoulder, the cock hit my elbow, and my pinky hit the trigger.
I heard a loud noise and a pain in my chest. I looke as everything went blurry the microwave was broken open my gun was on the floor and I was dying.
The bullet had hit the popcorn bowl and rebounded on me and was killing me.
All the wolves were on top of me starring. Then it went dark…
EdPOV
I ran into the cabin smelling Bella's blood all over the place. My nose was burning like crazy. All the wolves were around her and Jacob was crying.
I pushed them, out of the way and bit hard into Bella's neck and ran away with her, Alice and Jasper on my tail.