And here is another chapter redone of the sucky story I wrote a few years ago I hope its better!
Disclamer: I'm a girl so I don't think that I can possibly be Rick Riordan. Which means that I don't own PJO!
As I walked down to the beach I wondered what Percy saw in Rachel. I mean really. When I got there I found Rachel crying. Crying? Wait. What? When I went over to talk to her (What is wrong with me? Me? Talking to Rachel?) I guessed she sensed that I was there,you know...the whole Oracle thing?, because she said "Hi Annabeth."
"Hey. What's wrong?" I asked thoughtfully.
"Touché" She replied. Huh? How did she know that? Wait for it, wait for it…..ah she's the Oracle, duh!
"Okay, you first."
"Sure, well my Alice my dog died yesterday." Rachel said.
"Oh….shoot." I said as I realized that Percy didn't do any of the things I accused him for, he was just trying to comfort Rachel. How sweet of him! That just makes me love him more. Wait! Love? Oh gods. I love him. I love Percy. And that I had to apologize and tell him!
"Hmm?"
"Rachel, I love Percy and I blamed him for a lot of things that he wasn't guilty for and I really need to tell him. So I'll talk to you later Rachel! And I'm sorry about Alice! She was probably very sweet!" I said as I got up and started running to Percy's cabin.
"Kay." I heard her reply. She also mumbled, "She was." and starts to cry again. I feel really bad for not staying but I really need to talk to Percy.