Chapter 4
At Max's club when Eddie walks in
Eddie- Hey pops
Max- Hey
Eddie- So I want to tell you something
Max- ok ….
Eddie- I'm gonna ask Loren to marry me
Max- Eddie you've come along way I'm proud of you Loren is a great girl.
Eddie- I'm glad to hear you say that because I want to use moms ring
Max- Of course Loren will take great care of it and it will look lovely on her
Eddie- Thanks pops I gotta go I'm meeting Loren for dinner.
In Loren's room
Loren's doing her make up when her mom walks in
Loren- hey mom
Nora- Some one looks pretty
Loren- Thanks
Nora- So what's the special occasion ?
Loren- Nothing why?
Nora – You are just very dressed up and look amazing.
Loren- Well thank you but I gotta go or I'll be late
Nora- Love you
Loren- Love you too
At maxes apartment Max is talking to a picture of his wife
Max- Do you think hes ready….. Loren's a wonderful girl…. She will be good for Eddie…. He is just moving really fast… What about me do you think I'm ready to move in with Nora.. … I just wish I knew what you were thinking.
At Rumors
Eddie is watching the door waiting for Loren to walk in
Waiter- Eddie can I get you anything?
Eddie- No thank you just waiting for my Girl friend
Eddie could not wait to call Loren his fiancé Loren walks in and Eddie walks over to her
Eddie- some one looks amazing
Loren- who
Eddie – you silly
Loren- oh…. Thank you
Eddie and Loren walk to the table Eddie pulls out the chair for Loren
Eddie- Thank you for coming baby have I mentioned how amazing you look
Loren- Where else would I be? … Eddie your acting weird is anything wrong?
Eddie- No I'm great but I do need to ask you something
Loren- Okay What?
Eddie- Will you
Loren's heart dropped
Eddie- Will you go to Cancun with me?
Loren was disappointed with this question
Loren- Of course when are we going
Eddie- We leave tomorrow, My plane is picking us up an noon.
Loren Then I should go pack