OK I got an OC! YAY!
Popstar 4 thanks for the OC and remember guys ill accept any OCs and I will most likely use them but something's wrong with my account and I can't look at reviews sooo i'm trying to fix that now but until then…
Also guys I'm going to start on another book that I think you Enderlox fans will like! :)
NOW ON WITH CHAPTER 4!
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A unicorn stood at the opening to the castle. His black mane and tail flying in the wind. He is a sea green unicorn with a black mane and a cracked hourglass for a cutie mark. His electric blue eyes wandered up the castle. He was almost positive that he could hear the sounds of ponies screaming but he wasn't sure.
He walked up the stone steps to the door and slowly opened it and peered inside. Nopony was there so he decided to enter and explore. He was fascinated with the Legend of the Pony of Shadows his whole life and he wanted to know if it was true. He followed the sounds of screaming and as he got closer he realised what they were screaming.
"HELP!"
He had know idea what to do. He thought quickly then ran through the halls to find the source of the screams. Then he found it. The door was closed and locked.
"Hello?" he called through. The screaming stopped and he her somepony say…
"Wait. Did you guys hear that?"
"Hello?" he called again a little louder.
"Help!" called one of the ponies inside.
"H-hold on!" he called through as he used his magic to unlock the door and open it slowly.
He was shocked to find 4 ponies inside, well one weird thing that he knew it's name was Discord and 3 ponies. One he recognised to be one of the princess! He rushed forward to find them all chained to the floor.
"W-what happened?" he asked stunned.
"We will tell you once you get us out of this!" yelled Rainbow.
He stumbled forward and helped them out of the chain but when he went to Discord and found him already out Discord burst out laghing.
"What!?" Twilight asked him furiously.
"You ponies could of asked ME to get you out but NO you go screaming your heads off!" he said still laughing.
"Thankyou." Fluttershy muttered to the unicorn.
"So," Twilight said turning to the unicorn, "what's your name? How did you find us?"
"Um, my name is Clocks Worth and I wanted to find out if the Pony of Shadows is real and thats why I came here." he said
"Well she's real, real and evil. Lets get out of here before she comes back!" Rainbow said sternly.
"Wait, 'come back'" Clocks Worth questioned.
"She's the one who put us in these chains, she also made a deal saying that Celestia has to step down from her crown or else she will wreak havoc on all of Equestria if she doesn't." Twilight said sadly.
"Well she should be aloud to get revenge on Celestia, especially after what Celestia did to her."
"Wait, what?" Rainbow asked, her eyebrows raised.
Clocks Worth sighed and then said, "My teacher says that a young filly, with her faced deformed, was brought to the castle, the filly grew and the Princess learned that her singing was absolutely beautiful! After a few years Celestia grew jealous, the filly seemed to love Luna's singing but not her's. Eventually Celestia forced the filly in a room and locked her in there, for 32 years, her sad singing could be heard throughout the castle and it haunted Luna. Thats how the legend began, Luna described the filly to be something like a shadow." When he finished every pony starred. That almost fit perfectly with Discord part of the story.
Discord brought the filly to Celestia and Luna, the legend started about 42 years after the girl had disappeared! It was slightly creepy to Twilight, she could not believe Celestia would do that!
"Celestia would never do that! And anyway, your teacher, who is she and how would he or she know any of this?"
"My teacher, is Princess Luna." he stated calmly.
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Dun dun dun! ok guys i'm going to be on vacation for a week and maybe a half so i'm not going to update for a bit, but hey you're welcome to leave reviews, if I ever figure out how to read them… and yay… I'll see you guys later! Bye!