To me those who write flames such as 'Kill yourself' or 'go die in a ditch' and 'need to be killed' are pathetic readers who can't just say what is wrong calmly or just stop reading. Before criticizing the story of someone, write one yourself; I work my ass off to translate this fic so that everyone can read it, I know it is not perfect I never pretended it to be. So don't like don't read but don't pollute the review space for those who enjoy reading it. RANT OFF ! Damn that felt good !
plums : I know I wrote massive paragraphs but I did not find a way to cut them so sorry. I already got four women for the harem and I might add Hinata because as I said it the harem will be LARGE !
To everyone else I appreciate your support and thank you.
Naruto is not mine.
As the three Kunoichi separated, Naruto was talking with Akimi.
He appeared directly into the living room where Akimi was waiting for him in a sofa.
'OK, what went through this perverse mind of yours to make you use my pheromones that way ?' Asked Naruto, displeased. 'And in front of my Mother and my sisters at that ! You better give me a good reason or I will find a way to lock you behind a new seal !'
'Wow, easy there, no need to get so upset.' Said Akimi trying to calm the Uzumaki. 'I was just trying to break the ice between you, Kushina, Asa, Beniko and Tsukiko. You can not really consider Kushina as your Mother and Asa and Beniko as your sisters, for two reasons. First: until yesterday you did not know them, you spent your entire childhood without any parental figure, then your DNA is too different from theirs, they could be distant cousins but nothing more: you are too different in this respect.'
'Try to explain that to them.' Cut the blond.
'NARUTO !' Replied an irritated Akimi. 'Calm down and tell me what's wrong.'
'Not now ... don't wanna.' Mumbled Naruto. Before disappearing from the seal.
-ANL-
The next day Sasuke and Sakura were released from the hospital and confirmed the version of the Uzumaki about what knocked them out; Sasuke not wanting to admit that Naruto was stronger than him and Sakura faithfully mimicking her Sasuke-kun. The Uchiha challenged Naruto several times but each request was received by the silence of said blond; on the fourth time the Uchiha insisted and found himself pinned to a wall with a Kunai at his throat by a Jinchûriki more than a bit irritated. Haruno and Uchiha wisely decided to leave the Uzumaki alone and the rest of the day was only disturbed by their encounter with the team of Suna and their unstable Jinchûriki and by the arrival of Team 9; strangely Neji Hyûga was glaring at Naruto and Tenten turned as red as a tomato whenever she met his eyes.
The team of Kumo along with the Jinchûriki of Nibi arrived later in the evening, without him understanding why both the Jinchûriki and the redhead of the team gave him a nod of greeting upon arrival. Listening to their conversations he discovered that the redhead was called Karui, the Jinchûriki Yugito and their teammate Samui; he also heard that they had met the team from Uzu before they were interrupted by a Jônin coming to guide them to their room. On their way out Yugito eyes met Naruto's and after a blank look he associated to a discussion with Nibi she stormed out, her cheeks burning. When she was outside a cry of 'NIBI !' rang in the tower drawing amused laughter from her teammates.
-ANL-
Later when Naruto went to sleep in a room as far away as possible from his teammates he found himself before an Akimi wearing a stern look.
'Don't bother trying to escape from the seal, I brought you here and you can not leave without my permission. I spent several hours accumulating enough chakra to keep you here as long as necessary.' Explained Akimi. 'Now will you tell me what the matter is ?'
The blonde lying on the bed and surrounded by a halo of red chakra remained silent.
'No in a talkative mood, isn't it ? Okay, I have an unrelated topic that I can talk about. You remember Yugito the Jinchûriki of Matatabi ?' Began Akimi while sitting in a chair in front of the bed. 'This blank stare is indeed the sign of a discussion with your Bijû; Matatabi is quite perverted so when Yugito looked at you she saw a fine specimen and you could hear the reaction of Yugito to what Matatabi thinks.'
Naruto remained silent but had a small smile.
'Ah! Finally a sign of life !' Said Akimi said sarcastically. 'Good, two days ago you freaked out when I used your pheromones with Kushi-chan: first clue. Yesterday you got pissed by the same subject: second clue. Between these two events you thought of the death of the Ichiraku .. and of the way in which you reacted .. ... Oh Kami-sama !' Exclaimed Akimi suddenly understanding the reaction of Naruto.
'Go on, say it now that you understood !' Cried the Uzumaki in tears.
'Do not tell me you seriously believe it, Naruto ?' Asked Akimi starting to shed tears.
'You know what I did, the people I killed, the monster I am becoming !' Replied the blonde suddenly angry.
'You think you're unworthy of love? Look, you killed these families because you were influenced by my chakra and ... 'Began Akimi.
'I wiped an entire village under the influence of anger, from the oldest elder to the youngest infant, I killed them all ! And I liked it ! And there was that time after the Ichiraku's death, that was not entire families but I liked it !' Yelled Naruto furious.
'Listen to me Naruto !' Yelled Akimi in turn, immobilizing the head of her Jinchûriki so he could look into her eyes. 'NONE OF THIS IS YOUR FAULT ! When you went to this village you were under the influence of anger and that of my chakra, you just discovered the betrayal of Sarutobi and the instructions from Namikaze. You reached four tails in this village, you could not control anything ! After the death of Ichiraku you killed those who deserved it, and again you were under the influence of my chakra.'
'But I'm still becoming a monster, in a few years when the seal will eventually absorb all of your chakra, you will disappear and I'll become a ...' Protested the blond.
'You will have a demon part, so what ? You will remain yourself, the only changes will be your taste for fighting, you'll be more likely to kill your opponents, you will be more bloodthirsty and you will become quite possessive.' Countered Akimi. 'I will disappear in several years, when you have absorbed all my chakra, by then you can probably find a way to keep me alive. I am going to let you realize that I am right; I will not talk to you 'till you meet with Kushi-chan and tell her what are your current and what will be your future changes. I will still give you my chakra but nothing more.' Ended the vixen by ejecting him from the seal.
Naruto woke up in his bed sweating and in tears. A glance at the window told him it was still dark; he then remembered that at noon the Exam would end and that the Hokage would be there to announce the result and the next part.
-ANL-
It was almost noon when the teams lined up facing the dais on which stood the Hokage and several others. In the galleries on the sides of the room were the sensei and several spectators all watching the Genins with interest. In front of Naruto on his line were Sasuke, whose seal had been sealed, and Sakura that was too busy with the Uchiha to bother him.
Around him were several teams, each with a different attitude. The two men from the Oto team were shooting at Sasuke dark looks; the team of a Genin named Kabuto was very relaxed as if they knew what was coming and did not care; Asa, Beniko and Tsukiko looked at Sarutobi as if they wanted him to take fire; Team 9 was strange: Lee was doing pushups on his thumbs, Tenten was sharpening a Kunai, while being careful not to meet the blonde's eyes, and Neji looked at Naruto with contempt; Choji, Shikamaru and Ino were watching the Uzumaki with wide eyes, his fight two days ago still fresh in their minds; the team from Taki seemed anxious, but the Jinchûriki was looking at Naruto with a keen interest; the members of the Kumo team were all watching the blonde: Karui and Yugito with interest and Samui, their teammate with a calculating gaze, it was noted that Yugito cheeks were still red.
Before the Hokage could speak to the Genin teams before him, he was interrupted by a voice coming from the entrance of the tower.
'You see Hinata-chan, I told you that we would be on time, now we can take care of more pressing matters.'
'K-Kiba-kun, I ...'
'With your behavior in recent days, I do not think Hinata-san is in the mood for this Kiba-san. Be certain that I will give my report on this matter to Kurenai-sensei.'
'Geez Shino, I'm sorry for what I did to you, it was a stupid move.'
'You try to apologize for what happened to me so that I would not report you to Kurenai-sensei, but you appear to feel no regret for what happened with Hinata-san.'
'I am the Alpha male, she should feel honored ...' '
'Enough, Kiba-san ! My insects tell me that our sensei and many Genins are in the room ahead of us.'
'HA ! As if anyone could do better than the Alpha ... '
The voice went silent as the door at the back of the room opened, letting the occupants of the room see who the latest arrival was. Naruto had long since recognized the voices of Team 8 and hearing what Kiba was saying had the sudden urge to neuter him. Team 8 fell silent when she saw that she was the last one and lined up next to Team 7, and by chance Hinata just happened to find next to Naruto.
'T-Thank you for what you did, N-Naruto-kun.' Hinata whispered.
Naruto, ready to play the innocent act turned when, TILT! He remembered that Hinata had the Byakugan a Dôjutsu able to recognize the chakra ! OOPS! He had forgotten that little detail !
'You're welcome Hinata-chan, what Kiba-teme tried should not have happened. This is unforgivable.' Whispered the blonde in a growl.
While Team 8 fell in line and Hinata thanked Naruto, Sarutobi had explained the purpose of the coming test and why they were holding preliminary matches before being interrupted by a sickly-looking Jônin.
'(cough) Hokage-sama, (cough) allow me to organize the matches.'
'Go ahead, Hayate-kun.' Agreed Hiruzen.
'(cough) Thank you Hokage-sama.' Then turning to the Genins, added; 'Since there are so many of you, (cough) we will hold preliminary matches. (cough) Each match will be one on one, but before that (cough) is there anyone who want to withdraw ?'
'I do, proctor-san,' Said Kabuto, raising his hand. 'I was injured during the Exam, I do not feel able to continue.'
'You're Yakushi Kabuto ? You can go now.' Hayate replied before continuing. 'Your name will be displayed on the board above the platform. The two chosen, stay here, the others will go into the galleries on the sides. There is a small change in the rules: only participants can stop the match the sensei and I are only here to observe.'
While Kabuto walked away, Naruto looked at him suspiciously, Kabuto had the same smell as the Sanin Orochimaru, he knew that this was not the first time Yakushi forfeited before the preliminary matches and according to his way to move he was not a simple Genin and was far from being injured.
Meanwhile the board flashed names and announced the first two opponents:
NARUTO UZUMAKI VS KIBA INUZUKA
While other Genins headed for the stands, Kiba said: 'HA ! Me against the dobe, it will be quick! I will show Hinata why she should choose Alpha like me instead of a loser like him. I'll make her my bitch, that's all what females are good !'
At these words every Kunoichis of the room, from the smallest Genin to the sensei of his team looked at the Inuzuka with contempt.
'So you think that Kunoichis are only good for sex and cooking, even your Mother, your sister and your sensei ?' At this moment Kiba began to look uncomfortable. 'I am sure they will take in account your words. But my problem with you is different: you consider Hinata as a prize ...'
'Of course I consider her a prize !' Interrupted Kiba, becoming angry. 'She is all the time trying to follow you while I am Alpha, not you ! When I am done with you, I will make her mine !'
'Ignoring these nauseating words, my problem with you is more personal: first you threaten me, that I can still let it pass because you're not the first, but I can not stand to behavior with Hinata-chan I do not like the people who see women as a prize, so I'll take care of you so that that you can not bother a woman ever.' Replied Naruto calmly.
'BEGIN !' Yelled Hayate before stepping back so as not to stay between the two Genin.
'You see Kiba, now that the fight began I can make whatever I want to you without repercussion.' Said the Uzumaki before slowly drawing a Kunai.
'HA ! A dobe like you ? I bet that you will not even manage to touch me ! Come on Akamaru !' Yelled Kiba before realizing that his dog had run away and was standing trembling behind Kurenai.
'Akamaru is smarter than you, he knows who is the strongest.' Commented the blond.
Indeed, Kiba's senses shouted him that Naruto had become a true Alpha, that he was now stronger than him, that he should not provoke him. But Kiba still saw Naruto as the weak little Genin from when they entered the Forest. He decided then that his senses were playing an illusion on him and that he would prove to everyone that he was the only Alpha.
'HA ! With a loser like you I will not need help.' Boasted Kiba.
'Before we begin, the person who knocked you out earlier: it was me.' Said the blonde with a smirk.
'TSUGA !' This was the response of Kiba to this revelation that made him furious. Naruto simply stepped aside to dodge the attack and let Kiba run into the wall. 'You had no right to come between me and my bitch ! I'll make you pay !' Shouted the Inuzuka before being interrupted by the cold voice of Naruto.
'Kiba, I give you three chance to make me to give up or to give up, think about it carefully because after that I will against attack. You've already used one.'
This time the Inuzuka launched several Shurikens to prevent Naruto from dodging the Tsuga that followed.
Again the Jinchûriki dodged by using a Shunshin to appear behind Kiba.
'That makes two tries, it would be better for you if the third one hit me.' Sneered the blonde.
This time Kiba created several Bunshin so that Naruto would not know who the real one and every Kibas launched again several Shurikens and used Tsuga. Naruto jumped in the air to dodge but every attacks followed him 'till they hit the Jinchûriki who fell in a cloud of dust.
'HA ! Gotcha, get back from that!' Boasted Kiba under the anxious eyes of Hinata. 'Now I will make Hinata my UGH !' Did he keep on saying before collapsing under the curious eyes of every spectator.
'Impressive.' Said a voice coming from the dust cloud that dissipated to reveal Naruto unharmed. 'You managed to hit me. For your information, your body just hit my Raiton armor so you will have to wait to get back up. We're gonna have a course about male anatomy. Do not worry it will not hurt. For me, I precise.'
'Proctor, I AAAAARGH !' Kiba began before screaming in pain a Kunai in each knee.
'Let it be Kiba, we have just begun.' Said the blonde of a sadistic tone before nailing Kiba to the ground a Kunai in each member. 'Now we can begin.' He said while using his Fûton chakra to tear up the pants and boxers of the Inuzuka. 'You can see that the genital part of our dear Kiba is ridiculously small, even at rest.' Which drew laughter from the Kunoichis in the room.
'Please Naruto, I ...' Began Kiba before screaming in pain when the Uzumaki stirred the Kunai in his hand.
'TUT TUT-Kiba-chan, wait until I'm done.' Said the blonde, before continuing. 'As you can see by the pitiful erection of Kiba-chan, he is a big pervert and an exhibitionist, but not for much longer !' He finished pulling out a rusty Kunai.
'Wait Naruto you're not gonna to ...'
'Oh yes Kiba-chan.' Said Naruto before driving his rusty Kunaï in the lower abdomen of Kiba. The minutes that followed were filled with cries of pain from the Inuzuka, laughter from the Uzumaki, cheers from the Kunoichis and winces from all Shinobis even Gaara, (Mother pity you) that protected their own crotch.
'Now you can tell it Kiba-chan.' Said the blonde with a smile.
'I-I give up.' Stammered the Inuzuka faintly. As soon as these words were uttered by the Inuzuka, several med-nin rushed to evacuate Kiba on a stretcher.
'Winner: (cough) Naruto Uzumaki !' Hayate shouted, drawing applause from the Kunoichis.
Meanwhile Anko fantasized about what she and Naruto might do to Orochimaru before realizing that her crotch was dripping because she did not have panties while Ibiki thought, 'I could make a successor out of him.'
All this was interrupted when Hiruzen cleared his throat and said, 'After this... pretty special fight. Let's launch the machine to see who will fight next !'
During this time Naruto had regained the stands where several Kunoichis came to congratulate him while all Shinobis stayed away. Kurenai who had heard all of what had happened in the Forest came to thank Naruto for his help, something in her scent and her voice reminded him of something but he could not say what or who.
Then came the fight of Sakura and Ino, it could have been seen as a simple brawl between Academy students until the Yamanaka used her family Jutsu, Sakura was about to give up when Sasuke commented on how weak Haruno was. That motivated Sakura enough to eject Ino from her mind, they demonstrated again the same pitiful level in Taijutsu until they knocked each other out.
Then there was the fight of the Jinchûriki of Taki, Fu and Yoroi Akadô. This fight was quickly finished as Yoroi Fu charged and tried to steal her chakra, Akadô soon realized that his body could not stand the poisonous chakra of a Bijû, when it began to eat him away from the inside until he died.
During the fight between Shino and Dosu Kinuta the Aburame used his insects to keep from being hit by the sound-waves from Dosu and to neutralize his weapon. Once the danger was neutralized, his insects slowly sucked the chakra of the Oto-nin until he passed out.
Then came the fight between the two Hyûgas, Naruto could immediately feel the hatred that Neji had for Hinata; when the fight began Neji insulted Hinata and belittled her until the blond intervened by calling Neji a coward for trying to get Hinata to forfeit while encouraging her. Hinata took courage when she heard the words of her blond and engaged Neji in a Jûken fight. Unfortunately for her Neji proved to be stronger than her and after a few words of Hinata saying that she understood his pain, he tried to kill her in a fit of rage.
At this instant the senseis and Hayate rushed to stop the Hyûga and at the same ttime Naruto disappeared in a Shunshin. Immobilized by the senseis as he was about to give the killing blow, Neji spat: 'I see you are all there to protect the Hyûga clan heir.'
'Not really Gaki, look more carefully.' Replied Asuma.
Indeed Naruto had appeared before Hinata and was aiming a Kunai towards the eyes of Neji. Fortunately for Neji, the Katana of Hayate had stopped it and was now pushing against the pressure coming from Naruto.
Suddenly the blond withdrew his Kunai and said, 'Pray, pray Neji that I do not meet you in a match of the Chûnin Exam because otherwise you will die.' Then turning to Gay added: 'If you want him to live you better train him well.' Gay's only answer was an ashamed look at Neji.
Then the Uzumaki turned to Hinata that had fallen to the ground. Na-Naruto-kun did I ...' Began Hinata before coughing blood.
'Hinata-chan, hold on ! A doctor !' Yelled Naruto without seeing any med-nin appear.
'Thus perished the failure of the H…UMPH !' Began Neji before being interrupted by Naruto's fist into his jaw.
'Naruto stand down !' Interjected Kakashi. 'I'm sorry, there's nothing to do, we can not save her.'
'You said the same for Haku, Hatake. NO, I refuse !' Then a desperate idea came to him. 'I'm sorry Hinata-chan, this will hurt. Please Kurenai-sensei step aside. '
Kurenai whom the med-nins had told that the heart of Hinata was damaged and she was dying, turned to him with desperate eyes and asked: 'Can you save her ?'
'I will not lie to you: I'm not sure. And even if I saved her life I do not know how she will react to what I'll do.' Replied the blonde.
Kurenai after confirming that the med-nins were helpless said: 'Do it.'
'Step back please.' Asked Naruto before concentrating his chakra in his hand, creating a mix in equal parts of Akimi's chakra, his own and his new silver-white chakra obtained with his Rinnegan. All this with the purpose to repair and restore the heart of the Hyûga
Once the mix stabilized, it produced a green chakra with red hints and a silvery glow. Thinking it ready he put his hand on the chest of the Hyûga and forced his chakra to enter the bare chest of Hinata. Once all the chakra sank in the young Hyûga, he waited.
He waited.
And ...
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