I'm not going to update too much soon, because High School is starting for me, and I'm in three honors classes, so, Wup-de-do! I'll update if I can, but I'll work hard to update a few times before school starts!
Now, I REALLY need the reviews! They are important to my self-esteem and stuff! Reading the reviews is what really makes writing fanfiction worthwhile! Well enough of me now, you guys want to read about who's going next! Also, remember to vote on my pole for who you want to win! They're 14 choices at the moment so be careful! Any of them could win…
"Last time, on Total Drama B.C." Chris begins. "The new team dynamics were already beginning to unfold, and drama coming with it! JJ and Ali seem a bit more interested in each other then they're teams, as they snuck out to meet, even though they could have bin caught! Connor developed some feelings for a certain American girl, and Edith seems to have caught Mathew's attention as well! In the challenge, Garret's clumsiness got him hurt, and Mathew's attempt at asserting dominance, cost his team the game! In the end, it was Bella's mistake of making out with Mark during the challenge instead of being useful that got her kicked off!" Chris explains with a chuckle, ending the flashback.
"We're down to 14 contestants, and we have endless possibilities of ways to hurt these kids! Can Mathew manage to become the team leader? And will Connor win yet ANOTHER victory for the Towering Tiki's? Find out right here, on TOTAL…"
"DRAMA" The screen fades out to show the entire ruins.
"B.C.!" The screen fades out so the ruins are in the distant, and some ancient drums play in the background.
Title Sequence plays
Yo mom and dad I'm doing fine, you guys are on my mind!
Michael and Jaden are swimming away from a herd of alligators
You asked me what I wanted to be and I think the answers plain to see
Dawn sees them and calms the alligators down and sends them to attack Mark and Bella
I WANNA BEEEEE FAMOUS!
Mark and Bella swim away, and then Monaco takes off the alligator head, and laughs in a crazy manner
I wanna live, close to the sun,
Brendan and Connor are fencing on a bridge, when Connor accidently knocks Maddi off the bridge
Oh pack your bags cause I've already won
Maddi is saved by two arrows shooting her shirt to the wall, and then Mathew and Edith hug each other before backing away awkwardly.
Everything to prove nothing in my way, I'll get there on dayyyyy
Manitoba smirks at Ali, causing her to blush, and JJ glares at Manitoba from behind Ali
Cause I WANNA BEEEEE FAMOUS!
Garret is swinging on a vine and then crashes into the wall
Nanananananananananaaaaaaaaa
Lauren pulls of some awesome moves while going through the temple
I WANNA BE, I WANNA BE, I WANNA BE FAMOUS!
Drew draws a very strange and elaborate in the main chamber of the temple
I WANNA BE, I WANNA BE, I WANNA BE FAMOUS!
Suddenly the symbol gives off a very bright light, suprising Drew and devouring the screen with light
*Whistling* Dodododododooooooo!
Connor and Lauren are holding hands and looking into each other's eyes before being surprised by Monaco
Title Sequence Ends
In the lounge of the McLain Palace…
"Ugghhhh, turn that DISGUSTING American trash off right now and play something civilized on the speakers please!" Connor complained. "The music is cutting into my reading time!"
"Well excuse me for having a more exotic taste in music then you stereotypes!" Lauren retorted. "Go eat a crumpet… or whatever!" She said before turning her back towards Connor.
Confessional (Connor/Lauren)
Connor: "That girl INFURIATES me! How in the world would Ali think I like her? *Turns head to the right and raises his chin while closing his eyes* "What a fool that girl"
SHIFT
Lauren: "Connor really gets on my nerves with his "Proper" crap! No wonder he was voted off when he was! I guess the accent's kinda cute…" *very slightly blushes*
Confessional over (Connor/Lauren)
Ali is lying out by the luxury pool in her swim suit, which was a baby blue two piece, when the teen Archeologist/co-host walks up.
"G'day Sheila!" Manitoba greeted Ali, who looked up to see Manitoba in a green swimsuit with his usual fedora on. But Ali's eyes drifted and saw an 8 pack abs on the archeologist, which really surprised her.
"Oh hey Manitoba" Ali greeted, her eyes still focused on the 8-pack. "How are you doing?" She asked, trying to spark up a conversation.
"Good, 'ow bout you" Manitoba replied.
"I'm, fine" Ali replied.
"Well, nice ta talk to ya, I'm actually gonna go for a swim!" Manitoba said, walking towards the large diving board.
"Actually, a swim would be nice! Help me cool off" Ali told Manitoba, also walking towards the large diving board.
"Eye, you indeed seem hot" Manitoba said slyly finishing with a wink.
Ali could then only help but blush and look away at the same time.
Confessional (Ali)
Ali: "Okay, I know what you're thinking, and for the record, I do not like him! He's hot, but you can think some ones hot while not liking them! And plus, JJ is my boyfriend, so I'm not gonna let it distract me!"
Confessional over (Ali)
IN THE MCLAIN PALACE DUNGUEN…
The Screaming Tribe is again hanging around the dunguen, trying to pass the time, which is not easy when you're confined to a small space.
"Believe it or not Edith, this is much worse then what I went through last season" Mathew explains dryly. "We wouldn't be here if SOMEONE had done their job!" Mathew complains, glaring at Mark.
"Whoa dude, take a chill pill." Mark says. "It's not my fault you suck at this game!" the bully taunts.
"Oh really?" Mathew says. "Maybe you should follow my orders, and we could work together! Ughhhh, I'm on a team of idiots!" Mathew vented as Edith followed him.
"You do realize that everyone can here you right?" Edith asks smugly. "And FYI, Mark is just trying to pull your strings!" Edith explains. "You've got to chill out or you're out!"
"I guess" Mathew mutters. "But I am not spending another night here! All I need to do is make Mark listen and I'll be golden!"
"Fat chance of that happening" Edith replies. "Mark is too hard too resilient, we should just get rid of him"
"Yeah, you're probably right" Mathew says. "Now, leave me alone, I need to think"
Confessional (Mathew/Edith)
Mathew: "I have to say, edith was a good choice for an ally. She's strong and smart. Downside is that Edith is a serious rebel… Keeping her on a short leash is gonna be tough."
SHIFT
Edith: "I saw last season, and I'm guessing Mathew is trying to control me like the bossy dick he is, and there is NO way I'm letting him control me, even if his skills are pretty cool, or his amazing strategy… What I'm saying is, I will not be constrained!"
Confessional over (Mathew/Edith)
JJ is sitting at the crappy wooden table that dungeon had, playing a round of BS with Garret and Monaco.
"Two fives" JJ said as he placed his cards down on the deck hoping to get away with a lie.
"BS! BBBBBBBSSSSSSS!" Monaco called, jumping out of her seat.
"God Damnit Monaco!" JJ cursed out loud. "How are you so good at this?!"
"I'm related to a pro cards player, so you know, I'm like a card wizard, WOOOO!" Monaco said giving her normally crazy and occasionally insane one.
"Okay?" JJ replied, looking at Garret who just shrugged.
"ALRIGHTY CONTESTANTS, COME ON DOWN TO THE DOCKS FOR TODAYS CHALLENGE!" Chris blared through the speakers. "NOOOW!"
AT THE DOCKS….
"Good day Team Screaming Tribe, and hello to you Towering Tiki's!" Chris greeted the teams. "Who's ready for today's challenge?"
"Stuff it Chris" Maddi answered dryly for everyone. "We wouldn't be here unless we had to" Which caused most of the contestants to nod their heads in agreement.
"Whatever" Chris replied. "I still get to watch you suffer during the challenge"
"You are one sick dude" Maddi retorts.
"You just figured that out?" Chris asks, causing Maddi to roll her eyes. "Now, todays challenge will be explained by the Co-Host."
Manitoba walked up to Chris and began. "Back in ancient times, all boats would be made by hand, usually by the owner of the boat. Today's challenge is to build a stable, floating boat that can fit y'ur entire team on it' and once we say its good, ya then head down the riva, which has some traps all ova it!" Manitoba explained. "You can intafere with the other team, in fact, we encourage it!"
"Well, nice job Manitoba" Chris complimented.
"Thanks Chris" Manitoba said, tipping his hat towards the main host.
"Now, the supplies will come from the supply pile towards the entrance to the docks. You will have three runners, who will take turns grabbing supplies for the rest of the team, who will be building your boat. Once it's been givin the O.K. from me AND Manitoba, you will begin down the river. And remember, you're ENTIRE TEAM, has to make it to the finish, so make your boat safe." Chris explained.
"Now GO!" Chris said, blowing his foghorn.
"Alright, I'll be building!" Mathew declared. "Back at scout camp, I built a long canoe, which won me the councilor race that year!" Mathew finished in a horrible attempt to brag.
"Wow, talk about a loser" Mark said. "Just about as much as JJ is!"
"I'll help build!" JJ volunteered. "And hey!" JJ said, obviously offended
"Hey, just telling the truth" Mark said, causing JJ to throw a rock at him, which knocked him into the water.
"Hey, what was that for?" Mark yelled, glaring.
Confessional (JJ)
JJ: *Twitching* "Yeah, Mark has really been getting on my nerves"
Confessional over (JJ)
"I'll help build" Monaco said. "Did you know that I built a solid metal boat with nothing but a junk yard and my bare hands?"
WITH THE TIKI'S
"I'll supervise the building, Brendan, Drew, Maddi, and Jaden, you help me build!" Ali said. "The rest of you will gather supplies!" Ali finished, before the team broke off and started working.
Confessional (Ali)
Ali: "My team is SUPER stable right now, and we are just gonna keep winning and winning!"
Confessional over (Ali)
Mark and Drew are at the supply pile, and Mark decides to get devious.
"Heheheh, time for some fun!" Mark says to himself. Mark puts his stuff behind him and rushes at Drew.
"Hey Mark, what are you DOOOOIIIIINGGGG!" Drew trails off as Mark picks him up and throws him into the water. "What was that for?!" Drew asks sternly after he resurfaces.
"Sorry, wait, why am I sorry?" Mark pondered. "I just want to win, and that's what'll happen!" He exclaims as he dashes off to his team, with the stuff that he AND Drew collected.
Confessional (Mark/Drew)
Mark: "That was like taking candy from a baby! Wait, that's offensive to babies!"
SHIFT
Drew: "Hopefully Maddi didn't see that… Wait, do I have a crush… It's weird. I've never felt this way…
Confessional (Mark/Drew)
Drew eventually swam over to his team, who were waiting impatiently for him to get back.
"Finally, mate!" Connor said as Drew got back. "That took forever!"
"Sorry guys" Drew whimpered. "I was too careless"
"Don't worry Drew, that could have happened to anyone" Connor said. "If it happened to me, I'd be throwing a fit" Connor chuckled.
"Yes, he would have his cloths messed up!" Lauren said sarcastically. "Now, get some supplies Connor, they're ahead!" The blonde skater commanded.
Connor then started running towards the pile and grabbed as much wood as possible, and then started back.
Within 30 minutes, Mathew had already built a canoe, more or less, that could hold the entire Tribe team.
"Good job mates, now you can go!" Manitoba instructed.
"Heheh! Yeah!" Mathew cheered. "I'll be in the back to steer, the rest of you in the front for power!" Mathew instructed as the team entered the canoe. "Now, STROKE! STROKE! STRO-"
"Shut the fuck up!" Mark yelled. "No one wants you as a leader!"
The camera then turns to Chris and Manitoba. "Well, our two teams seem ta be on a rol'!" Manitoba exclaimed. "Wit the Screamin' tribe ahead fer once, it seems the Towerin' Tiki's may lose! What a ya think Chris?"
"Well it's still anyone's game Manitoba! Will either team have a cozy ride down the river? Now on my yacht!" Chris chuckled at his joke. 'Who will win, and who will be flung off the show? There are so many good choices, but only one person will fly! Stay tuned for more, after the break!"
COMMERCIAL BREAK
WITH THE TIKI'S…
Ali and Lauren are tying up a large raft full of jagged edges, which looks VERY unstable.
"Umm, that seems a bit unstable" Jaden pointed out. "SHouldn't we make it safer?"
"Yes" Dawn agreed. "It is full of negative energy! We should make it safer!"
"Normally, I would agree" Brendan said. "But we can't lose any more time then we already have!"
Dawn sighed. "Fine…"
Confessional (Dawn)
Dawn: "No one on this show has been listening to me much… I can tell I freak them out, but I will make people heed my wise warnings! I have to help them all!"
Confessional over (Dawn)
The Tiki's take off and begin down the narrow and jagged river, full of rushing water's and rocks.
"Watch out!" Lauren yelled, clutching onto Connor, until they realized what they were doing and awkwardly separated.
"That was an accident!" Connor and Lauren assured themselves.
"Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!" Jaden cried as he began to fall off.
"I gotcha mate!" Connor yelled as he tied a spare rope hanging off of the raft to himself and dived into the water, in order to rescue his teammate.
"H-help me!" Jaden called, as Connor grabbed his leg, and gave a thumbs up to Lauren.
Confessional (Connor/Jaden)
Connor: "Like I told you before, I learned some VERY powerful skills, and life saving is one of them"
SHIFT
Jaden: "Wow, I'm Frikkin alive! WOOHOO!"
Confessional over (Connor/Jaden)
After they were back up, Jaden looked at Connor. "Thank you, you saved me, and now, I'm alive. I can live the life I want to live, and I-"
"Jaden" Lauren said to get the chatter mouths attention.
"Yeah"
"Shut up!" Lauren yelled.
AT THE FINISH LINE…
The Screaming Tribe is now within view of the finish line. The bad part is, that the other team is as well.
The teams both hit beach and looked at Chris, who was the only one who knew the winner.
"Tonight's immunity winners are…."
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"THE SCREAMING TRIBE!" Chris announced, causing the team of six to rejoice in their first victory.
"I told you I'm a good leader!" Mathew boasted.
"Tiki's, I'll see you at the elimination ceremony, if this weren't a REWARD CHALLENGE!" Chris announced, adding another twist. "Tribe, for winning you get not only a stay at the palace's luxury levels, but also will get a cruise for the next two days in the bay!" Chris announced, causing the teams to cheer.
LATER…
"See ya Ali!" JJ said to his girlfriend before kissing her goodbye.
"I'll miss you!" She replied as JJ boarded the ship.
The boat departed and Chris turned towards the camera.
"Were still at 14 competitors, but not for much longer!" Chris said. "Tune in next time for more action! More drama! And defiantly more DANGER! Who will be the next human cannonball? Find out when we come back with a new episode, of TOTAL…"
"DRAMA!" The camera fades out to show the entire ruins.
"B.C.!" The camera fades out as bongos play in the back ground.
Whew, I did this all in one day, so I am exhausted! Well, I'll post again soon, and it will be just as good! Well, R&R, and I'll see you later!