"This chapter is told in Edward's point of view. It's a little twist to his character, but I liked it. Now comes the good stuff!
Chapter 4: Edward's Pain
It took Alice an hour to get back to the D'Nahli's. Edward was waiting for her outside. She walked over to him. He was starring at the moon.
"I went to bring her here," Alice said.
Edward said nothing.
"She didn't want to come," Alice told him.
"Does she hate me?" Edward asked, pain in his voice.
This time Alice said nothing.
"He told her," Edward said, seeing her thoughts.
"I'm sorry," Alice said. "If we told her before-hand, she might not have been so mad."
"She's made her decision." Edward said, already read Alice's mind. "She's chosen him over me this time."
Alice remained silent, leaving him alone with his thoughts.
It finally happened, Bella finally chose Jacob over him. He felt a heavy weight crushing his chest. His worst fear has now become reality. If he could cry, he would. He lost Bella, his reason for existence. That filthy mutt took her away from him! Hurt and jealousy swirled in a blur inside him. He clenched his fists.
No way was he going to allow that mangy dog steal Bella. He couldn't have her if he wasn't around. If Jacob were to meet some misfortune, Bella would come back to him.
But first, he had to speak to Bella. He had to see if she truly did choose Jacob. If she had, then Jacob would feel the full wrath of my pain.
There you go! O.O How'd you guys like that little twist? Review plzzz!