if you think i'm rushing things just tell me cause i'm new too this and i will love too here your opinion on things,BUT i will not listen if its people saying my story sucks and if you don't like SCREW YOU

hugs and kisses,

reaper-sama

P.S. sorry it took so long

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" 996...997...998." Naruto was starting on his new training. "999...1000… There, I'm done; now 1000 with the left hand."

"Naruto I never said you only need too use one hand on your push-up you know."

"I know, Aru-sensei, but this way both my arms are stronger," Naruto said with a grin.

"Ok, whatever works," Aru said as he finished his one-handed handstand pushups. After Naruto saw him doing them, he asked if he could work out with him; Aru, being the semi nice guy he was, let him, but it was intense: 1000 pushups, sit-ups, chin-ups, punches with both hands, and kicks with both legs. "Hey Naruto what would you say I told you we were going on a trip to train."

"I would say when can we leave," Naruto said with a grin.

"As soon as I get the hokage's approval but I'm sure I will."

"Better I need out of this place for a while its driving insane," Naruto told him, finishing up his work out.

"Ok, but before I go, I'm going too tell you about your bloodlines," Aru told the young boy.

"Wait a second isn't there usually suppose too be only one bloodline?"

"Yeah but the reason you have two is because I'm going too give you mine and while we're on a leave of absence we'll activate your other one" Aru said.

"But Aru sensei how are you going too give me your bloodline?" Naruto asked. Aru grinned in response as he slammed his left hand into his right arm and pulled out an odd glowing light. He threw it at Naruto, causing Naruto to block and the light to go into his right arm. When it happened, Naruto felt an odd feeling in his body and scratched the top of his head, but when he did he felt like something was off. He slowly looked at his right arm, which almost caused him to shit himself. Where his right arm should've been was a huge metal arm, and his hand was replaced with a giant orange claw. He moved his newly modified body parts in awe when something caught his eye. Three blades were hovering a few inches from his back.

"Damn" was all he could say. Aru laughed at this reaction.

"And that is my bloodline; it's called the Right Arm of God."

"Nice name," Naruto said.

"It makes your body damn near unbreakable and lets you use emotional bullets, also known as shell bullets; watch and learn, little bro." Aru moved his hand away from him then his arm split apart between both his right ring finger and middle finger and his index finger and thumb. The split traveled to his shoulder. Then two glowing ribbons wrapped themselves around his arm, thus bringing the arm back together. A flash of light erupted, and went it had died down, Aru had an arm that looked just like Naruto's. His arm reopened, causing a pod to appear in his hand. He shoved the pod into his arm, and his arm snapped shut.

"SHELL BULLET OF FURY!" Aru yelled, launching forward. His fist connected with a tree, causing a shock wave to ripple through it and annihilate everything in its path. After he was done, Aru's arm popped open again and launched the pod into the air. Naruto's jaw had hit the ground, amazed that his big brother had so much power.

"Now you try," Aru lightly commanded Naruto. He began to instruct the blonde of the steps. "Focus on the strongest emotion you have at the time and focus it into your hand. It sounds weird but just do it."

Doing as he was told Naruto focused on his strongest emotion, which happened too be pride, and focused into his hand. When he did it, he felt something form in his hand. He sneaked a peek and saw a pod that was just like Aru's

"Now, clench your fist and pull it back."

Naruto followed his brother's instructions; he recognized the step and knew what to do then. Putting the pod into his arm, he opened his fist, his arm closing in the process. He pulled back to punch and let out the same attack yell he had heard Aru say. However, instead of getting launched forward, his arm punched forward out of reflex. What happened next shocked him: a huge dragon shot out of his arm and went in the direction Naruto punched, scorching the ground as it went. After the dragon disappeared, Aru whistled in approval.

"Damn that was a good one, pretty good for a first try."

"Aru-sensei, why was your emotion fury?" Naruto asked. Aru's body grew tense but relaxed after he gathered the conclusion that Naruto would understand what he would tell him.

"Because I know that people have tried to kill you…because I know people have been stupid and tried to hurt you..." Naruto let out a burst of laughter, causing Aru to give him a suspicious look. "What's so funny?"

"You are, onii-san. What's done is done, and now is all that matters. There are no worries, right?" Naruto replied with a huge grin.

"Yeah, guess you're right." Aru smiled back at the boy.

"Anyways, what's my other bloodline? And how are you going to teach me too use it?" Naruto asked. Aru frowned

"I'll show you," he answered. A moment later, he started to unravel the bandages that covered his eyes. Naruto gasped when he saw what was under Aru's bandages: scars at last 12 all across or near his eyes. But the scars weren't the only thing; his eyes were silver, and there were three small diamonds connected by a triangle with a diamond at each point. (A\N: if you're wondering, it looks like the Sharingan, but instead of commas, they're diamonds and instead of a circle it's a triangle) "This..." Pointing too his eyes "...is the Sankakugan, and if you're wondering what it does, which I know you are, I'm going too tell you."

After saying that, everything seemed to slow down to Naruto. Even when he moved his fingers, they were very slow. He slowly looked to his brother to see a slight grin on the other's face.

"I see you're feeling the effect of it, aren't you?" Naruto tried to nod his answer, but it was very slow. "I'll stop it now."

As soon as the words left his mouth, everything was back up to speed again.

"When you use this, time slows down to the point where you can copy someone else's jutsu. Not master, but you can make a hell of a lot of jutsu this way," Aru explained. After a few seconds, he seemed to remember something he had forgotten. "Before I forget…again…it's called Quicksilver."

"What's the second diamond do?" Naruto asked out of curiosity.

"The second diamond allows you to copy bloodlines but for only one time. You can make a single modification to one of your bloodlines, even the time-shifter."

"Wow" Naruto said in amazement.

"And the last one lets you use your bloodlines at the same time. But now, we should get going. I want to leave tomorrow morning, so lets go," Aru said as he started to walk away, and his arm returned to normal.

"Um, big bro, how do I turn off my arm?" Naruto asked hesitantly as he looked at Aru for the answer to his current problem.

"Just think of it being your normal arm," Aru said. Naruto thought about his arm, and with a flash his right arm when back to normal.

"Thanks, onii-san."

"No worries, otouto-kun."

---------------------------------At Hokage Tower------------------------------------

Sarutobi was having a bad day. It wasn't paper work because he finished it a long time ago. No, what was giving him a bad day was the man standing in front of him. The man was none other than Aru.

"So tell me again why you want to leave again," the hokage asked.

"Because he's not going to get better in this village. If they had it their way, he would be dying in a trash can by now in the middle of a bon fire." Aru said. Sarutobi sigh because he new it was true. Naruto could be a great ninja, and Aru was more powerful than the fourth from what he knew. Naruto could learn a lot from him.

"Fine, you may go on a training trip, but how long will it be?" the old man asked. He cared a lot about Naruto and didn't want him to be gone too long.

"Four years, so he can go to the academy after we're done and meet his peers."

"Sounds fine as long as Naruto is fine with it," Sarutobi acquiesced.

"Its perfect!" Naruto half-screamed in happiness.

"Ok, then you may go."

"Thank you, Hokage-sama"

"Yeah, thanks, jiji-sama."

The Hokage sweat-dropped at the last comment as they left, but little did he know that when he would see that boy again he would be more than he ever thought possible.

-----------------------------At Naruto and Aru's new home----------------------------------

After living on Naruto's couch for a week, Aru finally got around to buying a house that was in the middle of the woods and had all the things that he wanted were there. The house had three bedrooms, a big dinning room/kitchen, and very big living room. There was a forge to make swords which was also their workshop, and they also had a dojo complete with a training area sized back yard. Also he cut out a wall, thus creating a basement/shooting range.

"Naruto make sure to pack only what you need too survive."

"Yes, sir!" Naruto took a moment to jokingly salute as he packed. After he was done, he walked outside to meet Aru.

"You ready?" Aru asked.

"Yep!" Naruto answered. Aru nodded and was about to start walking when he remembers something.

"Be right back Naruto," Aru said before running into their home.

'Hey, Kit, before you leave I'm going to start making you another set of chakra coils, ok?' Kaze spoke to his boy.

'But, Kaze-sense, why do I need another set of coils?' Naruto questioned confusedly.

'Because with two coils you can do two jutsu at the same time, or you can start one jutsu with one chakra and power it up with your other chakra to make it ten times as powerful. It's very useful.'

'Ok, go for it,' Naruto told too him in his mind and Kaze started. Just as he started Aru came back out with a scroll in his hands.

"Ok, Naruto, let's go!"

-------------------------Near the border of Wind and Fire country-------------------------

"Naruto, I'm going to do a jutsu that makes another dimension. When I do this I'm going to slow down time so that one month is two years. Now, when in this dimension, I can control everything from where we are to what everything looks like, ok?" Aru told the young boy.

"Gotcha, sensei!" Naruto exclaimed, eager to see this technique. Aru nodded at that and started to do the seals. It lasted a few seconds because it was a pretty long jutsu (A\N: Aru can make 3 hand seals pre second and when I mean a few seconds I mean 12 seconds so that 36 seals). He then spoke the name of the jutsu, "chamber type: dimension splitter". Everything with in a five-yard radius was inside a glowing ball of silver, and once the ball disappeared, there was no one there.

-----------------------4 years later At Konoha gates-----------------------------------

Now many things have passed though the gate during the chunnin's watch: a man who made weapons from blood, a circus of Goths, and even a man who could make his fingers five feet long. But when two guys wearing black trench cloaks walked up too him too let them into the village they were the...nicest. Very polite even if one was a little lazy, so he let them in but as soon as they walked in and shut the gates behind them. The poor chunnin forgot to ask them there names and what they were there for BUT he brushed it off. After all, people that nice couldn't possibly do anything bad right...right?

--------------------At Hokage Tower----------------------

The Hokage was a little upset. New students at the ninja academy were coming in, and once they finished the academy, it would leave one team with only two people. Just as he was going to try to figure out the problem, the window broke, and two figures rolled in.

"Damn it! I told you too open the window first," the first figure scolded.

"Well, sorry. How was I suppose to know I was the one supposed to open the window?" mystery figure number two retorted.

"Because I told you before we even came here. You're just too goddamn lazy to listen."

When he heard this, the hokage sweat-dropped. He no longer had any fear that these people were a threat. After all, what kind of criminal forgets to open the window he's about to jump through?

"Anyways, hi, Hokage-sama," the first "stranger" greeted. Sarutobi knew who it was already; the man's hair was a dead give-away.

"Hello, Aru-san. Now, where is Naruto?"

"I'm right here, jiji-sama," the second person who was obviously not Aru replied indignantly. The person was wearing a black trench coat, a blood red T-shirt with the kanji for chains under it, and had black cargo jeans that were torn at his half calves. Wrapped around his legs were black bandages while his feet were adorned in combat boots. Hanging from his neck were both a silver cross that was broken in half on a matching chain and a set of orange headphones. His blonde hair was shaggy and hung in his eyes a little, but he could see fine. His hands were covered in bandages. "What's up?"

Sarutobi was about to answer when he saw something on Naruto's back. He, being a curious old man, inquired what it was. "Naruto what's on your back?"

He slapped himself for being rude. Sadly, he had an ink brush in his hand. He grabbed a cloth sitting nearby, wiping the ink off his face. Oh, how the world would laugh if it knew this was an ordinary occurrence.

"Oh, that? It's just Rai Nami, my guitar," Naruto replied nonchalantly. It was completely different now then when he saw it last. Now, it looked almost like Aru's guitar, but it was red and had different emblems from Aru's.

"Naruto, what happened too your guitar?"

"It evolved to the next level," Naruto answered as if it were a normal occurrence, guitars evolving.

"Evolved?" the Hokage asked, having never heard of this regular anomaly.

"Yes, my guitar evolved." Naruto said. Aru sighed

"Sorry, he's too lazy to do things sometimes, like explain things. What he means by evolved is that he got stronger with it, and as he got stronger the weapon got stronger and evolved."

"Interesting… Well, now that you're back, I'm sure you want to enter Naruto into the academy. Correct?" the old man presumed. Aru nodded

"What's the point of having power and not testing it, right?"

"I suppose you're right," the Hokage told him, adding in that if that was all he may leave.

"Thanks, jiji-sama," Naruto said with a bow as they left.

'He will be a great ninja one day...now if I could only get him to stop calling me an old man.'

--------------------- On top of Hokage moment--------------------

Up on top of the fourth's head was a figure hidden by the shadows of the setting sun. "Dad let me play something for you, ok?" the figure said to no one. He pull his guitar too in front of him as he started to play a soft solo and started too sing (A\N: there will be some songs that people will sing so deal):

Tell your friends not to think aloud
Until they swallow
Whisper things into my brain
Your voice sounds so hollow
I am not a leader of men
Since I prefer to follow

Do you think I could have a drink
Since it's so hard to swallow
So hard to swallow
Turn your television off
And I will sing a song
And if you suddenly have the urge
Than you can sing along


I touch your hand, I touch your face
I think the fruit is rotten
Give me lessons on how to breath
Cause I think I've forgotten
I think I've forgotten

After that he strummed his guitar harder and started shouting the words.

One day, up to a cliff
That overlooked the water
I jumped in to save a girl
It was somebody's daughter


And now the ring is on my hand
It was given to me by her
To this day we all sit around
And dream of ways to get higher
To get much higher


Tell your friends not to think aloud
Until they swallow
Whisper things into my brain
Your voice sounds so hollow
I am not a leader of men
Since I prefer to follow
Do you think I could have a drink
Since it's so hard to swallow

He whispered the final line.

:
So hard to swallow

"Did you like it father? Did you enjoy it? Maybe one day I'll play it for you in heaven," the figure said. "I'll make you a promise, dad, that I, Uzumaki Naruto, will become the greatest ninja in the world and make you proud."

Naruto jumped off the monument and onto the streets below, scaring everyone as he ran full speed down the road as soon as his feet hit the ground, making a shock wave. Naruto sweat-dropped as he saw all the people staring at him.

'Hehe maybe I should stop doing that,' he thought to himself. Then he just grinned and ran faster, making a very small sonic boom as he when back to his home to sleep.

------------------At the academy-------------------------------

"Two fingers," Naruto said.

"You should only need one," Aru told him.

"You know I like over kill, so if I felt like crushing this building, I'd use two fingers," Naruto said as if it was the simplest thing in the world.

"You just don't want to say that you can't do it with one finger," Aru said grinning. He had caught the little bugger at his game.

"Yeah, you're right," Naruto said. "You take the fun out of everything."

"I know."

After their conversation, they walked into the building. Then after many flawed attempts they finally found the classroom. The whole classroom was in chaos. People were throwing things everywhere and making traps for people they didn't like. It was getting on Naruto's nerves.

"Please stop," Naruto calmly requested of the class. The chaos just got worse.

"Please stop," he said a bit louder, but once again, the chaos got even worse.

"Please stop!" Naruto yelled, but unlike the other times, it got ten times worse.

"IF ALL OF YOU DON'T SHUT UP AND SIT DOWN, I'M GOT TO RIP OUT YOUR SKULLS!"

Everyone quieted as they all stopped what they were doing and when back to their seats. The new kid could yell.

"Thank you," the teacher told him with a grateful smile covering his visage. "You must be the new student."

"Correct," Naruto replied.

"Well, I can see I'm not needed so I'll leave. See you later, Naruto," Aru said.

"Bye, sensei" Naruto said as he walked too the front of the classroom.

"Hello, I'm your new teacher, Iruka. How about you tell us a little bit about yourself," Iruka said.

"Fine with me," Naruto told him as he turned to the class. "Hello, my name is Uzumaki Naruto. I like music, fighting, swords, my guitar, and my gun."

Everyone in the classroom had a confused look flit across their faces as they wondered what a gun was.

"I dislike people who think they're better than everyone else just because something happened to them, and I also dislike people who think they're better because of a rank. And my dream…hmm…my dream is to become the strongest person in the world," Naruto finished.

"Well you'll never be able to do that because Sasuke-kun is the greatest!" a girl with pink hair exclaimed.

"...Oh, I see, you're a fangirl, and fangirls always see their idols as gods. Hmm, I know! What hell is it? Ooh, I know it so well, and I guess since I came out of hell that makes me a demon, doesn't it?" Naruto thought aloud. Everyone was shocked speechless. No one, not even Sasuke himself, would have thought that Naruto was someone who came out of nowhere would say he thought of himself as a demon. Iruka snapped back to reality after the blonde had finished.

"Ok, how about you sit in the back, Naruto, since all the other seats are taken?"

"Fine with me," Naruto told his new sensei. As Naruto took his seat he felt someone give him a death glare and when he found who was he wasn't all that surprised. 'I mean, who wouldn't be upset if I told them they couldn't beat me?' Naruto thought to himself. The glare was starting to get to him so Naruto glared back. Sasuke smirked; no one ever beat him when it came to seeing who could outlast the other, but then he noticed that Naruto held up his hand. It looked like he was going to flick the air, but when he did flick, there was an explosion right in front of Sasuke's face.

"WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?" Iruka asked.

"OH MY GOD, SASUKE-KUN!" the pink-haired girl and a blonde-haired girl screamed at the same time, and both of them started glaring at Naruto, who was at the time listening to music and trying to sleep.

"YOU!" the two girls yelled, pointing accursedly at the disinterested blonde. Naruto, of course, did not hear them because he was in a great dream about a cute girl in a mini skirt and a tube top.

"Naruto, GET UP!" they screamed and then decided that they were going to rip Naruto's headphones off. So they walked up to Naruto, and when they were standing in front of him, they could hear some humming. They shrugged it off and ripped Naruto's head phones. But when they did they had music blasting which should destroy someone's ear drums.

Oh I think she's had enough
She just put me in the past
She holds her head up high
Says I would never last
That lady loves to lead me on
And she's done her job so well
Yeah, she saved the best for last
Made my life a livin' hell

The sound was heard though the whole village before it was stopped as a pink-head girl ripped the cord too the head set in half Naruto woke up...and was pissed.

"What the hell did you do that for!?" Naruto yelled, upset for being ripped from his sleep.

"What did you do to Sasuke-kun?" the pink haired girl demanded angrily. "Tell me, or you will suffer."

Naruto just stared at her and shot back, "One, I've been asleep, and two, Sasuke is in the front while I'm in the back so unless I somehow magically put an explosive note to his face from here, I'm innocent."

Then the blonde girl spoke up. "He's got a point you know?"

"Yeah, I had nothing too do with it," Naruto lied though his teeth, but why should he tell them he was the one who did it? They still wouldn't believe how he did it.

"Fine but if I find out you did anything too Sasuke-kun..." That's when Naruto cut her off.

"Never finish that sentence. Do you even know what a real ninja is? A ninja's life isn't a fairy tale; it's not knights in shining armor to come to your rescue. Most of the time, you have to rely on yourself. There's always a good chance you're going to get hurt. Your life is on the line 24\7. Can you do that risk your life all the time for every one?" The girl was speech less. She didn't think ninja work was so serious. Her thoughts were cut off as Iruka started talking.

"Ok, it seems there's nothing wrong with Sasuke so how about we go outside and do a little sparring." All the boys cheered while all the girls sighed. "Ok, lets go."

Iruka walked out the door with the kids following. When they got there, Sasuke wanted to know what Naruto did. Sasuke grabbed Naruto shoulder.

"What the hell did you do, dope?" Sasuke demanded none too friendly. Naruto stared at him and walked away. Sasuke grabbed him again, but this time, Naruto grabbed Sasuke's wrist and threw him over his shoulder into a tree a few yards away. Everyone was glaring at Naruto...Everyone meaning the girls. Naruto shrugged it off. Iruka checked Sasuke for injuries and stated he was fine before he asked who was fighting whom.

"Ok, I want to see how good you are, so why don't you choose your own sparring partner?" After hearing this all the girls started running after Sasuke, who just before they got there, grabbed…Naruto as a shield?

"Sorry, I'm sparring with Naruto," Sasuke said quickly as all the girls glared at Naruto again. Naruto once again shrugged and walked to a sparring area.