IM BACK!!! AND YES I HAD FUN PROBABLY MORE FUN THAN YOU GUYS LOLN JK
Thanks to my reviewers: Aamayzaintwilight2, His. Butter. Scotch. Gold. Eyes., Alltheabove, twilight addict, 4everbellaxedward, laondablanca
and i dedicate this chapter to laondablanca :)
Notes to reader:
The characters are a little OOC. Bella's blood isn't as attractive to Edward as in the book, but still makes Edward have to be extra careful around her. Bella is NOT a klutz because I think it's overused how Edward's always catching her. And she doesn't blush as much because she's not embarrassed that often- she has 6 months to live and doesn't care what people think.
also, on my totally awesome cruise, i typed up 2 chapter 19 yay! however, it seemed to be going a little too fast boo!!
so i was thinking, do you guys care or not really? i mean, it kinda 'shows' the attraction more, the love between the 2, but theres still like 6 months left lol
so tell me if u think i should retype it (cuz the place where i can change it is chapter 10) however if i do, the chapters will be posted ALOT slower cuz thats alot of retyping lol
"At least I know that it'll have a good home." I said. He raised an eyebrow. I shrugged. He nodded even though I knew he was still confused. But we headed downstairs to where his family was waiting.
"So, what's the verdict?" Carlisle asked.
I nodded. "Yea, you guys took my couch."
Chapter 4: First Crush
EPOV
It was that girl again! When I had gotten home after Alice and I had picked out the couch, I told Carlisle about it. Alice said she'd be going to our school. So Carlisle told me to learn how to control my thirst even though I had been perfecting it for the past…100 years. Joy.
So I knew I'd have to be strong. Not think about her scent. Her warm, heavenly scent. And the taste her blood would have under my tongue…
"Edward!" I jumped. That was a first.
That was a first Alice said in her head. Exactly what I was thinking…
"Yes sister dear?" I growled. I was busy…fantasizing about the girl with her brown, doe eyes and the taste of her blood…
"Well, I was thinking that we should take Bella to the park." She said, slowly. And I snapped out of it. Crap, the girl was right next to me. If Alice hadn't snapped me out of my daze, I'd probably end up killing Bella who was right next to me.
I wonder why she's not afraid of us…. Carlisle thought.
The poor dear! But she's not even scared….. Esme was thinking.
It's the best of both worlds! Alice was obnoxiously singing Hannah Montana.
Not even afraid,…no trace of fear…. Jasper was puzzled. Humans were normally terrified for their lives when they were around us.
"It's October Alice. It'd be freezing." I said, glaring at her. She must know how hard it was to stay away from Bella and her scent! I was barely controlling myself. She was a nice girl…but I didn't want to end up killing her.
Bella's tinkling laugh rang through the room. "I don't care. I want to go to the park!" she exclaimed.
"Oh but Bella. October here is different from October in Phoenix. You'll catch your death from the cold!" I tried persuading her to say no. I wanted…needed to get away from her!
But she merely laughed. The whole-throwing you head back and laugh-laugh. What was wrong with her? Did she think death was funny?
Alice could see me visibly fuming.
Stop Edward. You don't know anything about her! She scolded. She no longer seemed her happy chipper self. And she was still blocking me. Whatever.
APOV
Edward was acting like such an ass! We were in Bella's Porsche- and I totally wanted one- and he was ignoring her.
I knew her blood called to him, but still. She was dying. I saw her in a hospital bed and the doctor said "Well, Bella I hope you enjoyed the last 6 months of your life. I'm sorry." And there really wasn't much more he could say. It would be very awkward and uncomfortable.
I felt Edward stiffen behind me. Did you hear that? I asked in my mind.
He shook his head. Aww it was probably the fact that he couldn't stand being in the car with Bella's intoxicating scent. He nodded.
Hold your breath then! I know you just want an excuse to stay away from her! But I like her so deal with it! I mentally screamed at him. He just rolled his eyes. He could be so infuriating at times!
"Bella I love your car! I might have to get me one of these! Edward, will you get me a yellow one like this for Christmas?" I batted my eyelashes at my brother.
"Sure Alice." He said gruffly. I smirked.
"No need Alice. You can have this car in 6 months."
"Really Bella? That's so nice! But I couldn't…"
"Don't worry Alice. I insist." She said. I knew she didn't want to tell us her news. So I just nodded and thanked her. After all, this was a really and I mean really nice car. And it was new!
EPOV
Wow Bella takes hospitality to the next level! Giving my sister her brand new Porsche. I could even tell that the car was new because of the leathery smell. Or maybe she was just trying to flaunt her wealth by giving away her car. That would seem more natural for her. Rich mom plus rich child plus good looks equal bitchy snob. I would know.
Cough cough Rosalie.
Or maybe she's just nice like that. Why must you always see the worst in people Edward? So cynical my mind said. Grr…. I just wanted to get this Bella girl out of my hair and away from me and my family. But then again, her and Alice seemed to really get along.
Before I knew it we were at the park. Forks Park Central. It was actually one of my favorite places. But whenever I went, girls would hit on me. So I usually went into my personal meadow away from all the girl fanatics.
And surprisingly, Bella hadn't hit on me once. Not even once. No flirty eyes, no stroking my arms, no staring at me. She was a human that treated me like…like a human. Which was so very unusual. I liked it.
As soon as Bella parked, she was out of the car and running towards the lake. And she was a fast runner. She probably did track or soccer or something at her old school. And I suddenly found myself interested in her. I had so many questions! And not being able to read her mind didn't help.
I wanted to know why she wanted to give her car to Alice. Was she simply being nice? What sports did she do? What did she like? Where did she go before? Why did she move here? Why wasn't she fawning over me- I appreciated it, but still?
Then the more personal ones- what was her favorite color? Food? Subject? Movie? Book? Song? Hobby?
Then I saw what Bella was wearing which stopped me in my tracks. It was 50 degrees out. And she wearing shorts. Very short shorts. And a tank top. And flip flops. She was going to get sick!
"Jeez Edward. I'm not Jasper but I can feel your emotions. Well, one emotion. Worry. What are you worried about?" Alice asked me.
"Bella could get sick! She running around in a tank top and shorts! It's already cold enough! She should bundle up before she gets so sick that she'll…she'll die!" I exclaimed. And if I could have blushed, I would of. Wow. I can't believe I just told my sister my worries. I knew I was going to regret it.
"Aww… Does little Edward have a little crush? It's okay Edward. There's a first time for everything!" Alice chirped. See, I knew I was going to regret it!
Then I turned at the sound of splashing. Bella had just jumped off the pier and into the lake! What did she think she was doing?! Some of the people in the park were looking at her like she was crazy. But she came up for air and started laughing. Carefree. As if she wasn't already about to get sick and die from coldness.
Without thinking, I sprinted over to the lake and dived in after her.
Preview:
Well, he wasn't able to breathe because of Bella's intoxicating scent. And he had an annoying sister to deal with. And since he couldn't breathe…. I could torture him without any witty comeback from him. Hehehe. This was going to be fun.
oh haha chapter 5 is called schizophrenic and is actually kinda funny lol
also, on my totally awesome cruise, i typed up 2 chapter 19 yay! however, it seemed to be going a little too fast boo!!
so i was thinking, do you guys care or not really? i mean, it kinda 'shows' the attraction more, the love between the 2, but theres still like 6 months left lol
so tell me if u think i should retype it (cuz the place where i can change it is chapter 10) however if i do, the chapters will be posted ALOT slower cuz thats alot of retyping lol
so REVIEW PLS!!