Hello CotT fans,
How are you? I'm great. Anywho I want to apologies for not updating for ages. As you already read from 'Simple and Clean' I'm have 4 assignments, 1 oral and 5 tests to do. So yeah, since I promised I finish this story before the end of the year, I'll try to update the stories and study for my exam at the same time.
By the way thank you so much for the support that you guys have given to me. The reviews were so nice and helpful. I swear when I feel down or sad, I read your guys review. It always makes me happy and cheerful in the inside and always encourages me to do my best in my schoolwork. So yeah that's how much you guys mean to me.
By the way it was my birthday on Monday (6th November 2006). So you know what I got for my birthday? I got a New Nintendo DS lite, and you know what is even better? It's pink. I love it so much. I wish CotT came out as a DS game. That would be so cool.
Anyway back to the story…………..
WARNING: Beware of BAD punctuation and grammar in this chapter.
Disclaimer: I do not own 'Class of the Titans', but a Nintendo DS lite, I do own.
PS. Thank you guys for the support, I'll do my best on my assignments and tests.
Chapter 4: I hate myself for losing you"You guys I'm really worried about Theresa, she hasn't attend any of her training classes today," said Atlanta.
"Atlanta, Theresa quit the team, do you think she would give a damn attending her training classes now?" asked Archie.
"Odie, have you try her PMR yet?" asked Atlanta, ignoring at what Archie said.
"I tried to use the tracking system but the system failed to pick up Theresa," answered back Odie.
"You guys don't think that something bad happened to Theresa do you?" asked Atlanta.
"Well it's either that or she seriously taking this argument over the line," said Neil.
"Come on Jay, you're the one who has to look after and worry for Theresa. Don't just dump the whole weight on us," said Archie.
"Well some friends you guys are," said Jay.
"Well some leader you are, who makes one of the member quit," said Neil.
"Ooo you got served," said Herry.
"Well we better do something to get Theresa back, because Hera isn't happy," said Odie.
"You think?" asked Archie sarcastically.
"Umm…you guys," said Odie pointing to Jay who was walking away.
"I was just joking," said Neil.
"Never mind, Just give Jay sometime," said Atlanta.
With nowhere to go Jay was walking on the street kicking a rock along. Dammit! Why do I have to be such an idiot toward Theresa? Now it's my fault that she quit the team. Why?
Flash Back Begins: It was a Summer Break and the gang went to the beach for a day-off. (A/N: I'm trying to remember what scene should be here, but right now I can't, so I'm just making them up, so yeah.)"Wow the sunset is so beautiful" Theresa talking to herself.
"Hey Theresa," Jay walking up to her.
"Hey Jay, so...um… what you doing here?" asked Theresa.
"I came to look at the sunset with you…Your right the sunset is beautiful," said Jay.
"It's a pity that we have to leave, I wouldn't mind to wake up for the sunrise, there so pretty" said Theresa.
"Nah its not as pretty as you do," Jay soon realising what he just said. Oh man!! What the hell I say that out loud. Thanks a lot Jay, now Theresa thinks I'm a pervert and a weirdo.
Theresa and Jay were blushing, but lucky the sunset radiance made their face not obvious. Suddenly they soon realised they were staring into each other's eye, can't taking their eyes off each other.
Theresa's POV: His dark chocolate eyes make me want to melt in the inside. Why can't I take my eyes off of him?
Jay's POV: Her body and her eyes make me so attracted to her. Why can't I take my eyes off of her?
They started to move they face close to each other, so close that they could feel the heat form each other's body. Their lips were moving closer, making Theresa's head tilt to the side. THEN their lips pressed against another. (A/N: No disgusting scene here, just kissing). The sunset made the two of them look like they were angels from the sky, like as though a war just ended and they finally found each other.
Kiss broke off while the others were looking for them.
End of Flash Back"Theresa, if you are here I want to say how much I'm sorry for saying those mean stuff to you. I hate myself for losing you," muttered Jay, trying to hold back the tears.
Suddenly a hand was placed on Jay's shoulder. He turned his head around to see who was it, it was…………..
Oooo…cliff-hanger…I wonder who it is? Ok the story is 598 words long, so yeah. Don't worry I typing up Chapter 5, so don't say I broke my promises. For those who can't remember I promised that if I get 10 or more reviews I give you guys two (2) chapters, so yeah. I'm still typing it up, but I swear I publish it tomorrow (09th November 2006). I SWEAR THAT I UPDATE IT TOMORROW. You can my life if you want but I will update tomorrow. Right now I'm doing Chapter 5 and doing my Economics assignment.
I also want to apologise for any errors that did occur in the story. You see Vietnamese is my first language, having English to my second. So yeah go easy on me. If you guys want to criticize my story, you can criticize the other CotT story, 'Simple and Clean'. However, constructive criticisms are totally welcome.
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