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"Thinking to oneself, either out loud or in their head"
Regular person talking / 2nd Person Talking
Additional Person Talking / Additional Person Talking
(Character thinking in his own head or talking to someone else like Bijuu)
(Biju/summons talking to someone in their mind)
((Biju/Summons talking to someone out loud))
I made some changes to this chapter and hopefully my changes will be less confusing and you will be able to understand what character is the one talking.
*** REWRITE / CHANGES MADE AND UPDATED ****
Chapter 4: Returned to the past, to make a better future.
'Unknown cave, Team Kakashi and Chiyo from the Sand Village are getting ready to do battle with the S-Ranked Akatsuki members Sasori and Deidra'
Sakura yells: Kakashi-Sensei, what's wrong with Naruto? He's just standing there like he's frozen!
Kakashi: I don't know Sakura but we can't wait for him to snap out of it though, you and Chiyo take on Sasori, and I will take on Deidra. Once Naruto snaps out of it, send him to assist me!
Sakura: Roger Sensei. Chiyo-Sama, you ready!?
Chiyo: Yes I'm ready. I've been waiting to see my grandson all this time Sakura!
Sakura: Then let's go Chiyo-Sama! (Naruto, please snap out of it, I have a feeling that we need you!)
(KIT, SNAP OUT OF IT! Save your pink haired friend and that old lady for the Sand Village!)
(Sorry Kurama, this time traveling stuff gave me a headache like you wouldn't believe, but I'm back and out of my funk, let's do this Kurama!)
'Kurama grins evilly'
(Let'em have it kit, show them what an Uzumaki can do!)
'Naruto runs through a quick set of hand seals and slams his hand on the floor yelling:'
"UZUMAKI SEALING STYLE: FIVE SEAL BARRIER"
Naruto: Now no one can get in and no one can leave!
(Sakura: NAURTO!)
(Kakashi: How did he do that, I thought we needed to place seals in different locations like the ones Team Guy went to remove. When this is done, you have some questions that need to be answered Naruto!)
Kakashi: Naruto, why did you do that? We are fighting S-Ranked criminals, and two of them for that matter!
Naruto: Don't worry Kakashi-Sensei I can handle these two.
(Kakashi: There's something different about him, he has an aura of power and confidence to him now that he didn't have a few minutes ago. What happened to you Naruto, how are you all of a sudden so strong?)
Chiyo: Leave my grandson to me Naruto. There's something that I need to finish with him.
Naruto: No problem Granny-Chiyo, but here, use my clone as a puppet, he will be useful when Sasori brings out the big guns with his hundred puppet technique. Plus, when not in use to can fight independently. My clone is loaded with enough chakra to last a minimum of 30 minutes.
(Sasori: How did that brat know about my technique? I've never seen him before today and that information is not in any bingo books. Looks like I will have to finish this off quickly so I can capture the Nine-Tails jinchuuriki as well!)
Naruto: Kakashi-Sensei, take this clone with you to fight the cross-dresser over there. Use your lightning jutsu, it disables his clay explosions which are earth based techniques. I'm going to help Gaara so please buy me some time!
'Before anyone can answer, Naruto was gone. If you blinked, you missed him. Naruto appeared in between Sasori and Deidra both were in shock with the speed the boy possess. Naruto did a quick jump to eye level between the two S-Rank ninjas and kicked them both in the head sending them in opposite directions, next thing you knew all hell broke loose!'
~ Kakashi vs. Deidra ~
(Deidra: If I didn't roll with that kick, I think he would have took my head off, hmp!)
'Kakashi didn't waste any time and took advantage of the kick to the head that Naruto gave the "cross-dresser" and created a lightning clone that charged Deidra. Still trying to gather his bearings, Kakashi's clone tackled Deidra giving him a bear hug while the original Kakashi went through hand signs faster than the eye can see and yelled:'
"WATER STYLE: TORNADO VORTEX"
'In one fast motion, the B-Rank Water jutsu was spinning a water vortex over his clone and Deidra. Then it happened, the Kakashi Lightning Clone exploded mixing the deadly combination of water and lightning together to immobilize Deidra. With a lifeless looking Deidra lying on the floor with smoke coming off his body, Kakashi left to go help Sakura and Chiyo thinking Deidra was out for the count. If Kakashi waited a while, he would have realized the cracks in the ground and the Naruto clone henged into a rock next to the cracks.'
~ Naruto with Gaara ~
'Naruto rushed to Gaara's side and checked his pulse, there wasn't one. To preserve Gaara's body so his seal to work, Naruto placed his hand on Gaara's chest and applied a stasis seal leaving his body from dying out completely. Being the Seal-Master that Naruto is now, he is able to place seals on different objects by touch, much like his dad, but only more advanced thanks to his training with his grandfather. Going into Kyuubi Sage Mode, Naruto gathers as much chakra as possible to be able to power up the seal he plans to use on Gaara to bring him back to life. Quickly applying the seal on and around Gaara's body, Naruto went through 125 different hand seals in less than a couple of seconds and slammed his hand on the floor applying all the chakra he gathered to the seal while yelling:'
"FORBIDEN UZUMAKI SEALING STYLE: CREATION OF REBIRTH!"
'A similar technique that was developed by the 5th Hokage, Senju Tsunade, but much better since it doesn't require stored up chakra, it creates new and regenerates the old cells and organs, it can be used multiple times a day depending on one's chakra, and doesn't shorten the users life span. That's where the seal comes into place. It acts like a filter, only taking Naruto's chakra and not his actual life force and has no side effects to the user or the person the seal is being applied to. Drained down to Sage mode, Naruto see's Gaara's hands move and his eyes start to flutter open.'
~ With everyone else ~
(Sakura: What the hell was the burst of chakra and why the hell is Naruto glowing!)
(Kakashi: No way! No way does Naruto have that much charka, unless, unless he released the Kyuubi)
(Chiyo: Wow! The power that is radiating off this boy. He's going to be a major factor in the future of the shinobi world!)
(Sasori: Is this the true power of the Kyuubi Jinchuuriki? If so, I'm not even sure Leader-Sama will stand a chance against this boy. We need to find a way out of here so we can report this to Leader-Sama, if not I hope that worthless Zetsu is recording everything because if we are unable to escape, we will die!)
(Deidra: Whoa! The Kyuubi brat is powerful and nothing like I've ever seen before. That glow he has around him… that looks like true art, hmp!)
~ Back with Naruto with Gaara ~
Gaara: Na.. Naruto…? What are you doing here? You have to leave! The Akatsuki, they captured me and removed the One-Tails from me… I shouldn't be alive. Is this a dream? Am I in the afterlife with you Naruto? Does that mean they captured you too and you are dead?
Naruto: Gaara, calm down, we are here to rescue you and are in the process of killing those two Akatsuki members who captured you!
Gaara: H…How? (I'm still not sure what's going on or where am I?)
Naruto: Leave that to us Gaara. Once we're done, all will be explained, I promise. But for now while you are recovering, I am going to seal you into this scroll until the fighting is over. I don't want you getting hurt again. In the seal there's food, restroom, and a bed you can rest on. Rest for now Gaara, all will be answered soon!
'With that, Naruto sealed Gaara into the scroll and joined the mayhem!'
End of Chapter 4