WOOHOO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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Alvin gritted his teeth. Perspiration rolled down the side of his face. His heart pounded, his body surging with adrenaline. He didn't blink. He didn't breath. His eyes were locked on the task at hand.
"YES! TAKE THAT ALIEN SCUM!! HAHA! I GOT YOU NOW! WHAT YOU WANT A PIECE OF ME! YOU CAN'T HANDLE ME! COME ON! GIVE ME YOUR BEST SHOT!" Alvin cried, his hands grasping the controller tightly.
He dialed in combination after combination. The character on the screen jumped into the air slicing through three victims at once. Then the character leaped onto a land mass that was floating in midair. He pulled out red laser gun and zapped through another alien revealing a small blue portal. The character ran through the portal and appeared in the middle of a field. In front of him sat a gigantic snake that was at least ten times bigger than the hero.
"Now all I have to do is beat this Hisser and I'll make it to level nineteen!!" Alvin exclaimed. His character leaped into the air and was about to strike down the dreaded snake thing when the doorbell rang.
N/A: Yes, "Hisser" I didn't know what to call it, ok?
"Alvin, get that would you?!" Dave yelled from the kitchen.
"Aw, Dave!" Alvin cried. "But I'm almost to level nineteen!!"
The character leaped into the air but was quickly struck down by the serpent's tail. Alvin bit his lip as he slowly maneuvered around the snake's tail and drove a karate chop into its scaly stomach. The doorbell rang again.
"Now, Alvin!!" Dave yelled.
The chipmunk sighed and hit pause on his game, stopping the hero in midair.
"Fine. But if it's another one of those Explorer Girls we gotta get the Chocolate Krunchies!" Alvin called back as he made his way to the front door. He pulled it open and there standing on his porch were the chipettes.
"What do you want? Make this quick. I'm doing something extremely important" Alvin told them, crossing his arms.
"Well "Hello" to you to Mr. Grump. Where'd you pick up your manners, a barn?" Brittany asked placing her hands on her hips.
"Hey, guys." Theodore called from behind his brother. "Come on in."
Alvin whipped around. "What are you doing!? They are THE ENEMY!" he exclaimed.
Theodore shrugged and turned back to the girls. "We were just about to watch a movie. You want to join us?" he asked sweetly.
"I'd be delighted, Theodore." Brittany answered as she pushed past Alvin. Her sisters followed closely behind her.
"What movie is it?" Eleanor asked.
"We're not watching a movie because I'm in the middle of a game!" Alvin yelled.
"That's ok. Dave said we could watch it in the other room. "Theodore announced leading the girls away.
Alvin grumbled as he walked back over to the television and took hold of his controller. They could go ahead and watch their STUPID movie. He didn't care. He was perfectly happy playing his game…alone…by himself…while everyone else was having a great time without him. Humph!
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Brittany sat cross-legged on the carpeted floor, she leaned her back against the front of the sofa where Jeanette, Simon, Eleanor, and Theodore sat; their attention drawn to the movie. Brittany yawned. It was an old Disney movie that they'd all seen at least a thousand times. Treasure Planet
N/A: I can't help it. I'm in love with Disney movies. Well most of them anyway…
"Oh my gosh! Is he gonna make it?!" Eleanor cried as the hero, Jim leaped forward. He was practically floating in midair.
"I don't know, Ellie." Brittany sighed. "Did he make it last time we watched the movie?"
"Wha…?" Eleanor asked looking up.
"Did he make it last time?" Brittany repeated.
"Uh…yea" Eleanor answered.
"Ok. Then what makes you think he won't make it this time?" Brittany asked.
Eleanor shrugged and turned back to the TV just in time to see the boy land safely on the spacecraft. "He made it!!" she exclaimed.
"Told you so" Brittany murmured. She sighed as Jim took off on the ship, the wind whipping through his short brown locks. The movie was pretty good but a space ship could only be over thrown so many times before it eventually became…boring. She turned her attention to the others who were still engrossed in the movie. They gasped as the cyborg took aim with his laser gun. No matter how many times the stupid robot shoots at him the boy's still going to get away, she grumbled.
Brittany sat thumping her leg impatiently for a few more minutes. She watched as the boy slid under a bush, hiding from the alien with green drool dripping from his mouth, then as he ran avoiding several lasers that were shot at him. Finally she had had enough. Brittany leaped to her feet and slowly walked out of the room.
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In the other room, Alvin was completely absorbed in his video game. His character was now attempting to throw a large barrel over his head. Alvin's lips were pierced and his eyes strained as if he was attempting completely the task himself. The barrel flew into the air but shortly afterwards it was caught by the opposing enemy (a green gecko) and hurled back at him.
"You're doing that wrong" a voice said from behind him. Alvin yelped in surprise. He turned around and there was Brittany.
"What would you know?" Alvin asked.
"Enough" Brittany answered, taking the controller from him. "You're not supposed to throw the barrel at him. You're supposed to jump on it and ride it over him. Like…this…"
Brittany hit several buttons on the controller and the man on the screen leaped onto the barrel. He ran in place causing the barrel to roll forward flattening the gecko like a pancake.
"See?" Brittany said.
"Wow. How come I didn't get that?" he asked scratching his head.
"Because it requires the use of your brain" Brittany answered. She looked down at Alvin and her face immediately softened "I mean… it took me a while to get it. We have this game at home." Brittany explained.
"Did you finish it?" he asked.
"No, but I did make it to level twenty-five!" Brittany announced.
"Cool!" Alvin exclaimed.
"Yeah!" Brittany agreed smiling.
The two grew quiet, an awkward hush developing in between them; both waiting for the other to break the silence.
"Brittany?" Alvin finally asked, looking down at his hands.
"Yea" Brittany answered, as she took a seat next to him on the floor.
"You really weregood at the audition" Alvin commented.
"Thanks. We worked really hard" Brittany said. "And you were too"
Alvin smiled. "Thanks. I'm sorry I started that stupid fight in the first place. It was all my fault."
"Yeah, it was." Brittany agreed. Alvin looked up at Brittany angrily. "Well… I guess it was kinda my fault too" she sighed.
"So do you want to try this thing again?" he asked.
" Try what?" Brittany questioned.
"Try being a group again." He explained. "We had much more fun when we were working with you guys…girls. And… we'll have a better chance of winning if we combine our forces."
"Well… I guess you're right. But I'll have to think about it." Brittany told him.
"Ok…" Alvin sighed.
Brittany taped her chin for a few moments as if pondering the thought. A sudden broad smile crept onto her face.
"Ok. I thought about it!" Brittany exclaimed. "Let's do it. But you have to promise not to be such a show off."
"And you have to promise not to be such a no-it-all." Alvin added.
"Deal" they both said at once.
"Now let's go tell the others." Brittany said.
Alvin stood up then stuck out his hand. Brittany grabbed it and he pulled her to her feet. They smiled at each other and walked out of the room hand in hand.
N/A: Did that sound stupid? I asked my little sister (Who's only 12 but I read her almost every story I write. She's like me advisor. lol) and she said it was a bit mushy. Then I rewrote that part. Hope it's better now. Yeah, I take advice from a 12 year old. Got a problem with that?! lol
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Eleanor pulled her knees to her chest. She hated this part of movie. They had finally found Treasure Planet. There was gold and jewels everywhere. Brittany would like that. The heroes ran through a field of shinning gems grabbing handfuls of it. The wacky scientist gasped at the wealth and placed three ruby rings around his fingers and a cluster of golden necklaces around his scrawny neck.
And then they found the skeleton of the man who had made all of this. That was the scary part. She almost expected the bones to jump out and come to life but they didn't. Instead a booby-trap went off. The planet began to collapse or explode or close up or whatever it did and the heroes leaped to their feet and began fleeing for their lives. Eleanor turned to look at her sister who was covering her eyes. It wasn't THAT scary, she thought. And as she turned back towards the TV something caught her eye. Someone.
There standing at the door were Brittany and Alvin. Wait. Were they holding hands? Eleanor rubbed her eyes; she had to be seeing things. Then the chipette blinked a few times but she found that was she was seeing was real. Brittany and Alvin were defiantly…holding hands.
"Ugh…guys?" she asked them questioningly.
Now everyone had turned their attention to Brittany and Alvin; the movie discarded for now. The two quickly stepped away from each other, blushing wildly. Brittany starred in the opposite direction of Alvin as if transfixed with the paint on the wall. Alvin quickly shook off his embarrassment and turned to address the group.
"Me and Brittany were talking and we decided that maybe it would be best if we teamed up again." Alvin explained.
"So you finally decided to stop being like a complete idiot and act mature for a change?" Simon asked, pushing his glasses back with the tip of his finger.
"Why I outta…" Alvin grumbled.
"I think it's a great idea!" Eleanor exclaimed.
"Me too" Theodore and Jeanette agreed at once.
"It's settled then?" Brittany asked.
Everyone nodded in response.
"Cool! Then let's do it!" Alvin cried.
"Right" Jeanette said.
"As soon as the movie's over!!" Eleanor added.
Brittany sighed. She took her seat beside the couch and idly tapped her fingers against the floor. BORRRRRINNNGGG
TADA!! That's it for now.But I promise promise promise to write more later! So what did you think? What was your favorite part? What would you like to see in the story? What song should they perform? The suggestion box is always open people!!